Yay, the first chapter of the first story of PnF:TSTDP is up!

It's the first story I wrote in PnF style, so I really, really hope I did it right ^^;

Anyways,

Enjoy! :)


The sun was shining that morning over the Tri-State Area. Birds were singing and it felt like nothing could go wrong. It was the perfect day for every kid, adult or egg-laying mammal to have fun.

But not for Candace.

The teenage girl dashed into the Flynn-Fletcher kitchen, angry, with a big frown over her eyes. She stopped near her mom and then talked to her:

"Mom, I told you that I need new shoes! Why do I see no new shoes anywhere?"

"I'm sorry, honey", Linda said, "but you had to tell me what kind of shoes you want and what size you wear, instead of yelling at me that you want a new pair while I was already in the driveway!"

Phineas, who was watching the dialogue while eating his cereal with Ferb by his side, wanted, once again, to make his sister smile.

"We can make a pair of shoes for you!" he said, always smiling.

"I don't want YOU to make me shoes! You're gonna make some ecological shoes with rockets and send me to Mars!"

"Shoes with rockets? Good idea!" Phineas said, then turned to Ferb. "Write it down!"

Ferb wrote it in his note book and gave Phineas a thumbs-up.

"Candace", Linda said, "can you bring me a chair? I can't reach that jar up there!" As Candace pushed a chair next to her mom, she added "Everything would be easier if I was taller. Or if I had some kind of elevator or a pair of bouncing shoes."

Hearing the last one, Phineas stopped his spoon just a few inches away from his mouth, and he stayed like this, his jaw hanging, his eyes wide open.

Ferb snapped his fingers in front of Phineas' face, only to get no reaction from his brother. Phineas stayed like this for a few seconds, before…

"That's it!" he cried out, making Ferb fall of his chair in surprise. "I know what we're gonna do today!" As Ferb got back on his chair, Phineas continued. "We're gonna make shoes with rubber soles so people can get stuff they couldn't reach before AND have fun at the same time! But hey, where's Perry?"

Perry ran up the stairs and got into the boys' room. He closed the door behind him and put his fedora on his head. Ha ran around Phineas' bed and pressed a button on his alarm clock. Almost immediately, the bed opened in two pieces with a gap between them. Perry jumped into the gap and after a series of tubes in spirals, he landed on his chair, in his secret lab.

"Good morning, Agent P", a white-haired man spoke to him through a huge screen. "Dr. Doofenshmirtz is being active through internet, buying possibly evil items. There's a list of the items he bought so far."

From the chair Perry was sitting, a list with Doofenshmirtz' internet actions got print. Perry took a look at it and then salted Major Monogram.

"Good luck, Agent P", the man said, before the screen turned black.


Okay, I'm REALLY sorry it sucks, but we're still at the start, right?

It's gonna get better, right?

I'm not gonn be flamed for this...

...right?

Review Please!