ISHDA FINISHED! XD Please review!

And since this is my first time, I welcome all flames to make my work better! Tell me if ya see any errors! XD

Hands tore at clothes impatiently,

teeth bared and snarling at one another,

the one pushed to the bottom whines

as the towers over his trembling figure.

The man on top flips his violet hair,

and nips the man with the raven hair.

The bed begins to shudder, the room shaking,

As the violet haired man pushes in.

Their cries mix together in pleasure,

a flash of white and they are tired.

They mumur love words to each other,

promises to be kept, and love to keep hidden.

Afterall, they are rivals and dispise each other.

Don't they?