Apparently, a few people that reviewed my story though that my chapter wasn't descriptive enough. And since I want to improve my story as much as possible, I went through and tried to describe things a little better. I thank all of you who reviewed for you constructive criticism, and hope you continue to give feedback. Remember, as long as it's constructive, it's appreciated. Anyways, here's my updated version.

Newsport, Archaea

Our story begins in a small, gray room with darker gray carpets. At a desk, a Pelipper was perched. Across the desk from him, there was a Gulpin sitting lazily in a chair.

"So, why do you think you're right for this job?" asked the Pelipper.

"Well, because I need a job I guess," the Gulpin responded.

"Is there a more specific reason?" asked the Pelipper.

"I guess I'm pretty skilled, and who wouldn't want to hire me," stated the Gulpin rhetorically.

"Well, okay then. What are some of your strengths and weaknesses?" asked the Pelipper.

"Well, as for my strengths… I'm a great liar. Who knows, I could have been lying this whole time," said the Gulpin.

"Rrrrright. And weaknesses?"

"Ground type! Hahahaha!" said the Gulpin. The Pelipper stared at him, unamused.

"Alright then. So why did you leave your previous job?" asked the Pelipper.

"Well, I ran a link shop, but it wasn't doing so well. People just never needed to link moves, even though I only charged 150 poke." The Gulpins amused expression became a sad one. "It truly was a great job. I just couldn't make a living off of it, though."

"Well, nowadays people are using link boxes. Just like they replaced the Kangaskhan's storage with Deposit Boxes," said the Pelipper, trying to empathize.

"Yeah, well… I'm at least trying to get a job that I like just as much," said the Gulpin.

"Anyways, do you have any questions?" asked the Pelipper.

"Yeah, I do. Know how Pelipper carry mail in their mouths? Since I have an even bigger mouth, would I do the same thing?"

"Uh, probably not. Aren't Gulpin's mouths full of toxic slime?" asked the Pelipper.

"I thought everyone loved toxic slime," said the Gulpin.

"No, they don't," said the Pelipper.

"Why not?"

"Because it's toxic."

"And that's a bad thing somehow?" asked the Gulpin.

"Anyways, that's all for today," said the Pelipper.

"Did I get the job?"

"Well, usually we look over you information and then decide, but I think I can tell you now," said the Pelipper. "You definitely did not get the job."

"Oh, well shoot."

"Yeah. Here's a tip: practice an interview before you actually do it. You answered every single question the opposite of how you should have answered. I'm sorry, I can't even consider you."

"Well, if I was the interviewer, I wouldn't hire you either! In fact, who put you in charge of interviewing?"

"I'm the manager."

"Well, I'm outta here." He proceeded to slither out the door.

"I kind of hope that guy finds a job that suits him. He'll just need to grow up first," the Pelipper said to himself.

The Gulpin went outside of the building, and slowly closed the door. He slithered down large steps onto a concrete road.

"Well, another interview failed. I guess I'll just… wait a minute. What's that over there?" The Gulpin walked over to the docks and saw an Oddish laying on the ground. "Hello? Are you another homeless weirdo or something? No, you just look like some kid." The Oddish opened its eyes.

"Huhh? Where am I? Why can't I feel my arms?"

"Umm, I don't think Oddish have arms," said the Gulpin.

"Ahhh! How are you talking?! What are you?!"

"Y-you're kinda freaking me out," said the Gulpin.

"I'm freaking YOU out? And what do Oddish have to do with this?"

"Well, you are an Oddish after all," said the Gulpin.

"What? Really?" the Oddish looked in the water. "Well, now things are starting to make sense. I seem to have transformed into an Oddish, and then I was transported to some kind of world inhabited only by Pokemon. And since I am a Pokemon, I can understand you."

"Wait, back up. What are you talking about?"

"You may not believe this, but I used to be a human."

"Human? Makes sense to me. That would explain you acting so weird. My name is Gooey, by the way," said the Gulpin.

"Cool. My name's… uh… I can't remember," said the Oddish.

"Really? Your name seems like the kind of thing you wouldn't forget," said Gooey.

"Now that I think about it… I can't seem to remember anything, besides that I'm a human," said the Oddish.

"Oh, well I'll call you Grimy since it's similar to my name," said Gooey.

"Alright. I like it," said Grimy. "So what brings you here?"

"Well, I just failed another job interview," said Gooey. "I don't know what I'm gonna do."

"Well, what do you want to do? Do you have a dream?" asked Grimy.

"No, but I'm good at lying and tricking people. That's why I was trying to get a job at the news," said Gooey.

"Well, sounds to me like you could be a magician," said Grimy.

"I might try that," said Gooey. "So… do you have anywhere to go?"

"Yeah, let me just go to my house," said Grimy.

"Hahahahah! I get it! Because I asked an obvious question!"

"Haha, yeah. Uhh, yeah," said Grimy.

"I don't have anywhere to go, either. Maybe if we got a job as explorers, we could just live at a guild or something," said Gooey.

"Delightfully devilish. Do you know any nearby?" asked Grimy.

"As a matter of fact… the closest one is actually pretty far. It's all the way in Lily Town. At least, that's the closest one that I know personally," said Gooey.

"Well, let's go there. There must be some kind of transport around here."

"We can probably find a large Pokemon that will take us," said Gooey. "There's probably a Mamoswine or Torterra somewhere."

"Let's go then," said Grimy. Suddenly, they saw a Mankey robbing from a Politoed. The Mankey knocked the Politoed onto the ground, took a small item from him, and then dashed right past Grimy and Gooey, who didn't have time to react. The Mankey seemed clumsy as he almost ran into a few people, but eventually made his way into a forest. Grimy walked over to the Politoed.

"What just happened?" he asked.

"My name is Leaf. The Mankey you just saw stole from me!" he exclaimed.

"Gooey, we need to help this guy," said Grimy.

"Why?" asked Gooey.

"I dunno. I'm kinda bored," said Grimy.

"Yeah, we could do that I guess," said Gooey. The two Pokemon followed into the forest.

"Uh-oh. This forest is a Mystery Dungeon," said Gooey.

"A Mystery Dungeon? What's that?" asked Grimy.

"I'll explain later. Be careful though, because these dungeons can be dangerous," said Gooey.

"Okay, cool. Danger is my middle name," said Grimy.

"I doubt it. You can't even remember your first name," said Gooey.

"Right. Let's go," said Grimy. Grimy pushed a few branches aside, and the two went into the dungeon.

Burned Forest, 1st Floor

Grimy looked around. The entire forest was desolate and burned, but more importantly, it was structured like a maze.

"This is weird," Grimy stated.

"Yeah, it sure is," Gooey agreed. I've only been inside a Mystery Dungeon a few times. I don't think I'll ever get used to it."

"Me neither," said Grimy. The two of them walked through a corridor into the next room. They were immediately attacked by a Phantump. The Pokemon fired a shadow ball at them.

"Ahh!" Grimy yelped as he jumped out of the way. Gooey opened his mouth wide, and breathed out a cloud of poison. "Won't that affect me?"

"No, you're also a poison-type," said Gooey.

"Right," said Grimy. The ghost started to feel weak. "So, how do I attack?"

"Umm, you can probably at least use tackle," said Gooey. Grimy ran at the Phantump and tackled it. Of course, he phased right through it.

"Shoot, Phantump's a ghost, right?" asked Grimy.

"Yeah, I guess it is," said Gooey. Several blades of grass extended out of the ground and ensnared Grimy. Grimy tried to focus his energy and… suddenly, light started appearing on the Phantump, and went into Grimy's leaves. The ghost passed out and fell on the ground. The grass that Grimy was ensnared in dissolved, and Grimy was freed.

"What did I just do?" asked Grimy.

"It looks like you defeated it with an absorb attack," said Gooey.

"Cool. I'm glad I can do that now."

"You learned that pretty quickly. Most Pokemon are born instinctively knowing how to use moves, but, since you were a human, you had to figure it out," said Gooey.

"Yeah. Well, we should hurry," said Grimy. The rest of the dungeon, Grimy continued practicing his absorbing skills. Gooey would help him out by spitting sludge at enemies. They eventually exited the dungeon after only 4 floors.

"Wow, we got pretty lucky this time," said Gooey.

"Yeah, I thought it'd be longer than that," said Grimy.

"It's a good thing, though," said Gooey. They saw a small cave, and three Pokemon inside of it. A Primeape, who appeared to be the leader, seemed to be yelling at the Mankey that Grimy saw earlier. The Mankey was particularly ugly. There also was another, fat Mankey sitting on the ground.

"WHY WOULD YOU WASTE YOUR TIME STEALING A SANDWICH FROM A POLITOED! THIS IS UNACCEPTABLE!" a Primeape yelled.

"I don't know, like, it looked pretty good," said the ugly Mankey.

"I DON'T CARE IF IT 'LOOKED GOOD', IT STILL ISN'T WHAT I ASKED FOR!"

"Umm, do you still have the sandwich? I'm pretty hungry," said the fat Mankey.

"YOU'RE ALWAYS HUNGRY! THAT'S WHY I CALL YOU MR. HUNGRY!"

"Oh really? That's why? I never would have guess," Mr. Hungry said, his voice full of venom.

"Like, you guys are really annoying," said the ugly Mankey.

"Hey guys, you stole something!" Grimy exclaimed.

"And?" asked Mr. Hungry, already eating the sandwich.

"Hey! Stop eating that!" yelled Gooey. "That belongs to a Politoed!" Mr. Hungry ate the rest of the sandwich, looking Gooey in the eye while doing it.

"Oh no, looks like I ate the sandwich. Now what situation does this put you in? You were asked to retrieve something, and now that'll be impossible," said Mr. Hungry.

"Why you little-" Gooey said angrily, while shaking his fist.

"Dude, not cool," said Grimy, with a mildly annoyed expression.

"NOW WHY DON'T YOU LOSERS GO HOME, AND STOP BOTHERING US!" yelled the Primeape.

"You'll pay for this!" yelled Gooey.

"Really? Revenge? I thought you guys were heros or something," said Mr. Hungry.

"We can still apprehend you," said Grimy.

"That's right! Now prepare for us!" said Gooey.

"ALRIGHT. I'M MR. ANGRY, AND THESE ARE MY PARTNERS, MR. HUNGRY AND MR. UGLY! CAN YOU BEAT THE MANKEY GANG? LET'S SEE!" Mr. Angry grabbed a sharp rock, and flung it at Grimy. Gooey got in the way, and caught it in his mouth. Then, he spit it back at Mr. Angry. The Primeape was hit in the face with the sludge-covered rock, which appeared to singe his fur a little. "OW! THAT ISN'T FAIR!" yelled Mr. Angry. The fat mankey ran over sluggishly and threw a karate chop at Grimy. Surprisingly, Grimy was hit back, but used absorb to drain Mr. Hungry's energy. The Mankey passed out, and hit the ground with a thud. Mr. Ugly ran at Gooey, but Gooey opened his mouth and swallowed him. The Gulpin spit him out, but the Mankey was unconscious.

"YOU ALREADY DEFEATED THOSE FOOLS?! FINE! I'LL DEFEAT YOU MYSELF!" Mr. Angry jumped towards Grimy and tried to punch him, but Grimy sidestepped, and Mr. Angry ended up jumping into a muddy lake. Shortly after, the police arrived, and took the Mankey Gang away.

"Thank you for everything you've done here," said the officer, which was a Magneton. The Politoed from earlier hopped over.

"Hey, thanks guys for beating up the bad guys! You couldn't get my sandwich back, but that's fine! I suppose I should reward your efforts… Earlier, I heard you talking about the guild in Lily Town! It just so happens… that I am Guildmaster Leaf, from Lily Town!"

"Wait, really?" asked Grimy.

"Yes! And I can register you as an official team right now! You've certainly already proved yourselves," Leaf said, doing a weird pose.

"Cool, that's pretty convenient," said Grimy. "I'm Grimy, and this is Gooey."

"Nice to meet you! So, do you have a team name?" asked Leaf.

"Uhh, Grimy?" Gooey looked at his teammate for ideas.

"Team Grimy? Okay!" Leaf said.

"Well alright then," said Grimy. Gooey facepalmed.

"And it's a good thing that I always happen to carry a Exploration Team Starter Kit around with me in case someone wants to join my guild!" Leaf said, as he reached into his bag and pulled a box out. He handed Team Grimy the kit. Inside was a Treasure Bag, two official team badges, and a few berries.

"Wow, this is cool," said Grimy.

"Agreed," said Gooey. "This is magnificantly magnificant!"

"So, we should head to the guild," said Leaf. The three of them departed from the forest. They ended up finding a ride pokemon, which was a Donphan, and headed toward Lily Town.