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The Lost Kit
Chapter 1
Sunlight shined on the damp white-gray leaf Ice was chasing. It was beautiful outside, the snow sparkling on everything. Her mother, Princess, and little sister, Willow, and her wanted to get fresh air. Princess's brother Firestar was a forest cat, and mother gave her older brother Cloudtail to him for him to raise. They sometimes visited, but not very often. Her mom went to eat and left Ice in charge. "Willow, do you want to explore the forest?" Ice asked. "Oh yes! Yes! Would you take me?" Willow begged. "Of course."
So they climbed up the fence, Ice had to help Willow, and jumped down the other side. She glanced at Willow's snow colored fur and then looked at her own gray-white one. She went to a mud puddle and called her sister ,who was curiously sniffing at the roots of a tree, over. "We need to disguise ourselves. Lets roll in this!" Willow looked at the mud and got a paw full to smear on herself. She was caked with mud and so was her sister. "Okay! Lets explore!" Ice meowed.
They spent most of it looking for good hiding spots, and Willow fell in some owl droppings. It was getting really dark, and Willow meowed," We need to go home."Ice flicked her tail in agreement. She turned and started to go back. The were almost there when a big, lumbering animal charged at Willow from the darkness. Ice head- butted Willow in the side. "Run!" She followed behind her sister to the fence. They clawed their way up it, but Willow started falling.
She hauled Willow over the fence and sat at the top gasping for breath. The large creature reared up on its hind legs and brought his front against the fence. Ice yelped and fell off balance. She dropped on to the creatures back and rolled off of it. Stunned and unable to move, she was helpless as it loomed over her. It brought a paw back and she squeezed her eyes shut. All she could feel is pain that ran from her shoulder to her tail, then she lost consciousness.
