Hello everyone I know some people have already read my story (somewhat) but I have taken it down in order to revamp and fix mistakes. I am even going so far as to rewrite some parts. Why you ask? SO THAT MAYBE SOMEONE WILL ACTUALLY READ IT AND TAKE THE 5 MINUTES TO REVIEW IT! I mean honestly so many people read the story and they didn't even leave a "Nice keep going..." or "You need to fix this..." and what I would really like is suggestions.
Yours truly,
Ryuga-sama
