Konichiwa, I've modified this first chapter now, I hope it's better now.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Gensomaden Saiyuki or any of it's characters except for Hiko, who is my own character.
Now, on with the story, hope you all like it! ^_^
It was a smooth afternoon, there was a cool breeze and everything seemed to be going fine. The Sanzo-Ikkou were driving along the road which was surrounded by trees. There was no sign of any town, there was only a small forest ahead.
"I'm hungry, when are we going to get to the next town?" Said Goku in his usual tone. " I think we'll have to camp out for tonight. The next town is miles away." Said Hakkai. So the jeep stopped and the guys got off and went exploring the forest.
Goku leaned against a tall tree. "This is boring, and what are we gonna eat" Then he gave the tree a great kick. Then. "Whoa!" CRASH. Something landed on Goku. "Hey, stop kicking my tree!" Said a mysterious girl that fell from the tree. "EWWWW, get off me weirdo." Said Goku as he pushed the girl off him. "What was that noise, Goku?" Asked Hakkai as he just came with some firewood. "This girl came out from nowhere and fell on me." Said Goku.
The girl looked like she was around thirteen. She had dark brown hair which she tied up in a ponytail and she had cats ears on her hair. She was wearing a black t-shirt and a long brown jacket over it and cargo pants, her eyes were green.
"Err.what's your name." Said Hakkai. "I don't really remember my full name, but I remember my friends at the ninja academy used to call me Hiko." She said. "You were in a ninja academy? Then why are you here?" Asked Hakkai. Just then, Sanzo and Gojyo came to the tree puzzled. "What's going on bakasaru!" Said Sanzo. "Aaaaah! It's a scary monk!" Yelled Hiko and cast a fireball that almost hit Sanzo but he avoided it. "Hey, watch it!" Yelled Sanzo as he reached for his fan and knocked Hiko on the head. "Itai.."
"Go away, we have better things to do than bother with you, stupid little girl." Said Sanzo as he signalled to the rest of the guys to leave her alone. "WHAT, did you just call me?!" Yelled Hiko as a vain popped out of her forehead and she gave Sanzo a death glare. Sanzo just ignored the girl and walked past her.
"That's it!" Hiko suddenly made the whole forest explode. Everyone except for Hiko was burnt. "Err. how exactly did you do that?" Asked Hakkai. "My special power is using the Flame Dragon." Said Hiko. "I've heard of those Dragons, only talented young ninjas have control of them." Said Hakkai. "But my aiming isn't so good and when I release my dragon it's usually like.that white dragon over there." Said Hiko as she pointed at Hakkuryu.
"But maybe, this girl would be useful in our party." Said Hakkai. "Why are you doing all the talking and I'm just standing here doing nothing?" Said Gojyo. "Yeah, Hiko why don't you come with us?" Said Goku. "Hey, stop ignoring me!" Said Gojyo. "Sanzo, can she come?" Said Goku as he and Hiko made puppy dog eyes. "Whatever, as long as she doesn't make too much noise like a bakasaru." Said Sanzo.
So, that night the guys got to learn all about Hiko, I'm too tired to write out the conversation but I'll just tell some parts of her history ( Like anyone cares)
Ok, first of all she's an orphan. She was found in front of a stone cat statue. And was brought to a Ninja Academy, (the head of the academy found her) And since she was weak and bad in her aiming and her dragon looked like a miserable lizard, she was teased by her friends and scolded and beaten by her teachers. So she ran away from the academy and lived in that forest for the past three months. That's all I can write but you'll learn more in the other chapters.
Next Day..
As usual, Hakkai woke up early and thought no one could beat him to wake up first, but he thought wrong cuz the minute he woke up he smelt something nice. "Suddenly he saw smoke, then he smelt something burning and then. "What's going on!?" Hakkai rushed outside thinking that the forest was burning. But all he saw was Hiko cooking something in a pan. "Oh, your up already? I caught a fish in the river nearby and I thought of cooking it for breakfast but." then she showed Hakkai the burnt fish that she 'cooked'
"Err.I think you'd better throw that out. I'll make breakfast." the minute Hakkai said breakfast Goku ran up to them and said, "Is it breakfast time yet?" "Not yet, why don't you go catch some more fish with Hiko for breakfast." Said Hakkai with his usual smile. "Ok I wanna catch lots of fish for me to eat." Said Goku as he went to the river and Hiko followed behind him.
"Does he ALWAYS have that creepy smile on his face?" Asked Hiko who thought that Hakkai's smile was weird. " Don't worry, you'll get used to it soon." Said Goku as he searched for a stick and finally found one long one. "You catch fish with a stick?" Asked Hiko. "I can't afford a fishing rod so this will do." Said Goku. "Watch how I catch fish," said Hiko as she took out a strange object and held it up above the water. Suddenly a fish jumped out from the water and Hiko suddenly looked like she had claws on her knuckles and caught the fish. "What's that on your hand?" "I don't know what people call it and I don't know where I got it but I use it for defence." Now this weapon is kinda like what Wolverine from X-Men uses but this is only a weapon she really doesn't have claws.
"What happens if you take those off?" Asked Goku. "I.err..I don't really know but I don't think I should take it off." "Can you scratch things with it?" "Isn't it obvious? You Bakasaru." "Can you slice things in half with those?" A vein pops out on Hiko's forehead. "DON'T MAKE ME SLICE YOU UP!!" "Your so scary when your mad.." "SHUT UP!" Hiko scratches Goku's face.
End Of Chapter One.
He heh, there's not much that I changed, it's only that I put in how Hiko looks like. Oh and the latest chapter is coming soon so get ready ^_^.
DISCLAIMER: I don't own Gensomaden Saiyuki or any of it's characters except for Hiko, who is my own character.
Now, on with the story, hope you all like it! ^_^
It was a smooth afternoon, there was a cool breeze and everything seemed to be going fine. The Sanzo-Ikkou were driving along the road which was surrounded by trees. There was no sign of any town, there was only a small forest ahead.
"I'm hungry, when are we going to get to the next town?" Said Goku in his usual tone. " I think we'll have to camp out for tonight. The next town is miles away." Said Hakkai. So the jeep stopped and the guys got off and went exploring the forest.
Goku leaned against a tall tree. "This is boring, and what are we gonna eat" Then he gave the tree a great kick. Then. "Whoa!" CRASH. Something landed on Goku. "Hey, stop kicking my tree!" Said a mysterious girl that fell from the tree. "EWWWW, get off me weirdo." Said Goku as he pushed the girl off him. "What was that noise, Goku?" Asked Hakkai as he just came with some firewood. "This girl came out from nowhere and fell on me." Said Goku.
The girl looked like she was around thirteen. She had dark brown hair which she tied up in a ponytail and she had cats ears on her hair. She was wearing a black t-shirt and a long brown jacket over it and cargo pants, her eyes were green.
"Err.what's your name." Said Hakkai. "I don't really remember my full name, but I remember my friends at the ninja academy used to call me Hiko." She said. "You were in a ninja academy? Then why are you here?" Asked Hakkai. Just then, Sanzo and Gojyo came to the tree puzzled. "What's going on bakasaru!" Said Sanzo. "Aaaaah! It's a scary monk!" Yelled Hiko and cast a fireball that almost hit Sanzo but he avoided it. "Hey, watch it!" Yelled Sanzo as he reached for his fan and knocked Hiko on the head. "Itai.."
"Go away, we have better things to do than bother with you, stupid little girl." Said Sanzo as he signalled to the rest of the guys to leave her alone. "WHAT, did you just call me?!" Yelled Hiko as a vain popped out of her forehead and she gave Sanzo a death glare. Sanzo just ignored the girl and walked past her.
"That's it!" Hiko suddenly made the whole forest explode. Everyone except for Hiko was burnt. "Err. how exactly did you do that?" Asked Hakkai. "My special power is using the Flame Dragon." Said Hiko. "I've heard of those Dragons, only talented young ninjas have control of them." Said Hakkai. "But my aiming isn't so good and when I release my dragon it's usually like.that white dragon over there." Said Hiko as she pointed at Hakkuryu.
"But maybe, this girl would be useful in our party." Said Hakkai. "Why are you doing all the talking and I'm just standing here doing nothing?" Said Gojyo. "Yeah, Hiko why don't you come with us?" Said Goku. "Hey, stop ignoring me!" Said Gojyo. "Sanzo, can she come?" Said Goku as he and Hiko made puppy dog eyes. "Whatever, as long as she doesn't make too much noise like a bakasaru." Said Sanzo.
So, that night the guys got to learn all about Hiko, I'm too tired to write out the conversation but I'll just tell some parts of her history ( Like anyone cares)
Ok, first of all she's an orphan. She was found in front of a stone cat statue. And was brought to a Ninja Academy, (the head of the academy found her) And since she was weak and bad in her aiming and her dragon looked like a miserable lizard, she was teased by her friends and scolded and beaten by her teachers. So she ran away from the academy and lived in that forest for the past three months. That's all I can write but you'll learn more in the other chapters.
Next Day..
As usual, Hakkai woke up early and thought no one could beat him to wake up first, but he thought wrong cuz the minute he woke up he smelt something nice. "Suddenly he saw smoke, then he smelt something burning and then. "What's going on!?" Hakkai rushed outside thinking that the forest was burning. But all he saw was Hiko cooking something in a pan. "Oh, your up already? I caught a fish in the river nearby and I thought of cooking it for breakfast but." then she showed Hakkai the burnt fish that she 'cooked'
"Err.I think you'd better throw that out. I'll make breakfast." the minute Hakkai said breakfast Goku ran up to them and said, "Is it breakfast time yet?" "Not yet, why don't you go catch some more fish with Hiko for breakfast." Said Hakkai with his usual smile. "Ok I wanna catch lots of fish for me to eat." Said Goku as he went to the river and Hiko followed behind him.
"Does he ALWAYS have that creepy smile on his face?" Asked Hiko who thought that Hakkai's smile was weird. " Don't worry, you'll get used to it soon." Said Goku as he searched for a stick and finally found one long one. "You catch fish with a stick?" Asked Hiko. "I can't afford a fishing rod so this will do." Said Goku. "Watch how I catch fish," said Hiko as she took out a strange object and held it up above the water. Suddenly a fish jumped out from the water and Hiko suddenly looked like she had claws on her knuckles and caught the fish. "What's that on your hand?" "I don't know what people call it and I don't know where I got it but I use it for defence." Now this weapon is kinda like what Wolverine from X-Men uses but this is only a weapon she really doesn't have claws.
"What happens if you take those off?" Asked Goku. "I.err..I don't really know but I don't think I should take it off." "Can you scratch things with it?" "Isn't it obvious? You Bakasaru." "Can you slice things in half with those?" A vein pops out on Hiko's forehead. "DON'T MAKE ME SLICE YOU UP!!" "Your so scary when your mad.." "SHUT UP!" Hiko scratches Goku's face.
End Of Chapter One.
He heh, there's not much that I changed, it's only that I put in how Hiko looks like. Oh and the latest chapter is coming soon so get ready ^_^.
