My first story ... yay :D Please review it and tell me what I did wrong, and how I could fix it :D I wouldnt mind it at all, it makes the author better (: I have to thank camuuLe (CAMILLE THE GREAT) for beta reading it & telling me about fanfic, she's soo cool.. LOL LOL I feel like im accepting an award for the junos, or something! :D
This is my first account on fanfic.
aaaaanyways I hope you enjoy it. (:
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Disclaimer: Ally Carter owns the Gallagher Girls
Its a new year here at the Gallagher Academy for Exceptional young women.
Bex, Liz, Macey, and I are totally excited to see what our junior year will bring.
The four of us went down four our first Cove Ops class of the year. We stepped in front of the mirror and began to scan our bodies.
"Welcome Cameron Morgan, Rebecca Baxter, Macey McHenry, and Elizabeth Sutton." The automatic voice said. Liz put her hands on her hips. She hated being called Elizabeth.
We stepped into the elevator and it took us to sub level two. The room was big and looked almost looked like the room on sub level one.
Solomon was standing near his desk, reading some papers. We sat down at our desks and waited for the other girls to arrive.
While we were waiting, we talked about how exciting the new year was.
"I can't wait to see what we are going to do next," Bex said, with her British accent. I saw from my peripheral vision that Solomon had looked up from his papers to see what we were talking about. Pffft, eavesdropper!
Once the room looked full, Mr. Solomon spoke up. "Welcome back, ladies," I could hear some girls that had just joined Cove ops sigh. Was he that handsome? I mean sure, I thought that in the beginning. But I quickly got over it once I realized he was way to old.
"Some of you may remember last year's lessons..." He looked around the room. "I can see that some of you girls are new to covert operations. You might have some trouble, but you'll just have to get used to it." He stared directly at the newcomers. I swear one of them almost fainted.
"This year is going to be tougher. You girls will have to work much harder. Using your spy skills to survive." He sat down in his desk. "Guess what we're going to start the year off with?" He asked us. "A mission," he stated. Well, obviously? What else do you think Cove Ops is for? "That's right. I'm going to take you to the city and you girls will have to pass around a top secret note."
"The catch is that I will have agents walking around the city, who are playing as the 'enemies'." Solomon continued. "The enemies are trying to find out what is on that note, and will do anything to get the note." He paused for a moment. "The newcomers will sit in the van, taking notes. Prepare yourselves, girls. Class dismissed."
I headed up to my room with my roommates. "Hmm, this sounds like fun." Liz said.
"Yeah, it does," Bex answered.
When we passed one of the newcomers on the way to our room, she came up to me and said, "Oh my goodness! Isn't Solomon hot?"
I gave her a weird look. "You'll get over it sooner or later," I smiled at her. She sighed, and walked away.
I was beginning to sense that something fishy was going on with those girls... they were acting a little too strange.
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