Hey this yo gurl Leisha and this is my first story so tell me how it is.
(It was a Friday at school)
New Boy Steup
Chapter 1: New Boy
"Chelsea! Chelsea! Look at him! Ooh.", Raven said excitedly. "Who Eddie!" Chelsea said. "No Chelsea. That boy behind him, the new boy.", said Raven. Chelsea then said, "Oh! That's Keenan Moore." Raven looked at Chelsea, "How did you know that?" "He's my partner in life science." Raven walked over to Keenan." Hey Keenan, do
You wanna call me tonight so I can explain the school or something cause I know you are new.", she said. "Ok, that's fine with me.", he said. " Let me give you my number real quick." BRRING, The bell goes. "Oh I got to go.", said Keenan.
Later: After school Raven walked up to tell Keenan her number. He was talking to some girl. "Hey Karenna, I know we just met but I was wondering if you wanted to go to the, you know, go to the movies or something?" Karenna looked at him with a shy smile, "Ohm yeah what, what movie would you like to ohm see." Keenan thought for a while, "Is ATL good for you? The movie ATL, I mean?", he asked. "Sure", she replied. "So I'll pick you up at 7 tonight?" "Sure, that's fine.". Karenna walked off. " Oh hey Rae. What's wrong?", he paused, "You didn't think he were going out, did you? I'm so sorry. Look Rae, I like you as a friend and I didn't mean to bring that message out." Raven held back tears. She had already told half the school and really believed it had been true. Keenan walked out. Raven was the only one in the hall. The Vision: It was Keenan. "I can't believe you were cheating me Kareena. We're over!"
Raven couldn't believe it," Oh no".
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