Commander Shepard LIVE!

Hey Guys! 1st Fanfic! Excuse for now the grammar and spelling Hope you enjoy and please tell me to continue this or not or give suggestions or you can just simple comment and give me a straight answer if it sucks or not ^^ Thank you and here goes! Trying to get through this ladies and gentlemen.I tried practicing writting. People told me to try it! And if this does'nt work Ill try a new one so please people,comment,complain,smile,scream or so.

Chapter 1

Good Evening,Morning and Afternoon Universe! Im Veronica Cox and you are watching News 411.

Im here today with my good friend Commander ,She'll be telling us what her days were like before she become the legendary.

"STOP THAT Nica!" Shepard shouted with a glare.

"Why?" Veronica smiled with mischief in her eyes.

"I just passed the exam in entering the military and you're all 'Lengendary'on me." She sighed with irritation completely plastered on her face.

"I'm Sorry Jane..Its just that..you're leaving me here."Veronica's eyes started to water.

"Oh Nica please dont cry and you know Im doing this for us"...Shepard Smilled and gave her friend a heart warming hug.

"Yeah I guess..and hey! Its your birthday dont worry about me. Im gonna become the best damn reporter! Youll see me on everybodys omni-tools Jane! Youll see!"Her eyes shining bright and her grief gone from a simple hug.

"You know I hate the media and yet you're doing this. Ironic isn't?" She cocked one eyebrow as she saw her friend chuckle at the realization.

"Hey! I need to make a living with my talents" Veronica said in a showing off kind of attempt.

As they laughed and walked to a simple restaurant where they could afford,a young,tall,pale and handsome man bumped into Shepard.

The young man and Shepard and staggered. Her left ankle hit Veronica's foot and then she fell, her ass on the cool metal floor of the mall. What a way to start your birthday Jane. As she looked down on the metal floor, a hand came at her eye level, she looked up and was just absolutley shocked by the sight. A pair of creamy brown eyes looked upon hers,a young man indeed he was about 20 or so...he had facial hair like a five o clock, a pretty nose that artched his perfectly sculpted face. Thick black hair and eyebrows lay on his head and face. That cute little dimple in between his chin was adorable. What an amazing face for a man like this to exist. This man struck her REAL dumb.

"Are you OK?"

His low voice disturbed her thoughts of him.

"Yeah, just lost balace that's all. No biggy."

Jane stutterd a bit. How can he be so calm while I suffer in embarrasment!SheI accepted his hand and as Jane rose she felt a hum or some sort of rythm with his touch,She hit his chest and felt his muscular chest and biceps through his this sweater. Wow...just wow. She tried to act normal as possible. He released her from his touch and a slight disappionted sigh escaped from her lips.

"Thanks for the pick up" Jane smirked and turned to her shocked friend.

Veronica broke her stare then her eyes met with her fallen friend. She smiled and patted her friend on the back.

"You OK baby girl?" She asked in a concerned voice.

"Yeah, fine ust fine" Jane replied as composed as possible.

Jane then turned to the young man and noticed his bag had an Alliance logo. She just had to ask if he was joining. And maybe a slight chance of meeting him again would have been great. But damn Jane THINK! She thought to herself. There wont be any other chance of ever meeting him. Just one question will do and you go your separate ways as an attractive that you are. She mustered up her courage,turned her body to the direction of the young man, looked at his creamy brown eyes and opened her mouth forcing the shy words to come out of her mouth.

"You part of the Alliance pretty boy?" She smiled with her eyes straight to his.

That was bold there Dumdass! That fuck with pretty boy?! You lost your mind?! You wanna be mistaken for a hooker? Or a whore? Damn it Damn it Damn it! She cursed inside her mind while dying internally. But whatever... asct like your usual bubbly self the inner paranade in you! Yeah.. yeah..lets go with that..yeah.. Her mind just filled with a lot of crap and 1st impression bull.

The young man chuckled at what he heard. Don't get much complements much lately so just go with the flow I guese. He thought as he looked at her emerald green eyes.

He finally replied.

"Pretty boy huh?"Another cuckle.

"Yeah, you can say that...Lieutenant Kaidan Alenko. Biotics Division." He showed his I.D. with his face from his Alliance bag. He looked at the girl in front of him, pretty thing. He noticed her eyes bright and energetic by seeing his I.D then looked at her friend then back to his I.D.

"You joining or are you waiting for your boyfriend or something?"He asked with a sense of curiosity in his voice.

Jane jumped by the sudden question. And laughed, heartly with much amusement.

"What the...(laughter)..fuck?!(more laughter from her and her friend)... BOYFRIEND?! Are you on drugs or just plain drunk?"She shouted with panting breaths from her laughter and teary eyes, with much attention from the other humans and aliens in the area.

Kaidan wide eyed and shocked by the sound of her laugh,She sure is hearty.

"I had a few drinks but nothing serious." He replied with a smile

"Well..think again pretty boy, I a'int got no boyfriend. I came by to celebrate. The names Jane by the way and this is Veronica."She rolled her eyes at what she said.

Kaidan extented a hand and made his introduction by saying his name again.

"So..what'cha celebrating?'He asked with wonder in his voice.

"Just little Ms. Redheads birthday" Veronica butted in through thier conversation.

"Yeah, turning 18 and feeling like my mind is about to blow from all the paperwork Im receiving by joining the Alliance. Mmhh..yeah..wait! The HELL! Nica we're late!"

She grabbed Veroica's hand ran. She turned her face to the starttled waved her hand and shouted.

"See ya later pretty boy!"She waved ad she was gone.

He waved his hand and chuckled as he put it done.

"Maybe today will be a good day"He whispered to himself and went his direction.

He would have liked to see her again or "see her later".

So there guys...umm.. I did it? Hoped you like it ^^ I hope I get enough attention to make a new chapter and probably improve my skills ( if i ever have any) Anyway! Comments ad messages are a . so (maybe) see you in the next chapter :3

-Vialenko