This is my first FF so any comments will be appreciated

Chapter 1 Welcome to Academy

My name is Rosita , I am 16 years old and I just decided to enter the Shinigami Academy so I

can become part of Gotei 13 squads. As I walked into the entrance of the Shinigami Academy I met

a black hair girl my age and roughly my height 5"7, she decided to speak to me.

"You nervous at all" she said

I replied " Yer quite a bit, you?"

She laughed and then said " I am nervous too , my name is Nikki"

I said back " My name is Rosita "

Nikki said " Shall we continue in?"

I said "Yeah"

So Nikki and I walk into together there was roughly 300 Shinigami students there. Then I see a old man

man wearing a captain roam and come forward and went on a stage sort of thing,there was dead silence when he was seen and the old man said

"Welcome everyone my name is Yamamoto-Genryƫsa I am the the Commander-General of the whole Gotei 13, I wish you to study hard and train hard to

become a great Shinigami. A new rule for theincearse of applicants is that we will split you into team of 6 , can you please go to registration booths to see

what team you are in."

Nikki said "Shall we go then?"

I replied " Yeah "

So Nikki and I walks over to the booths. We wait and then Nikki name was called so she went inside. Then I hear "Rosita Fardani can you please come inside " As I

went inside I saw Nikki waving at me " Were in the same team!". I see a 6ft 5 dark brown hair giant talking to a small girl saying " Listen sweetheart I will get you some candy,

after registration." The small girl replied " I don't care about registration I want my candy now". A tall blonde/black hair girl roughly 5"10 looking at me and she said "Hey my name

is Sophie pleasure to meet you" I replied "Hey, my name is Rosita". A brown hair girl roughly 5"9 said in a emotionless tone " My name is Lexi and that is all you shall know".

Sophie said afterwards" The giant name Stephen and his daughter is called Emily, I guess you ready know Nikki."

A man walked into the room we were in saying " For all of you, these are your timetables for classes starting tomorrow at 9:00 am , that is all " I picked up saying to Nikki "It begins

then "