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The New Student

"Sakura! Oi, Sakura! Wake up! Your alarm clock rang thirty minutes ago!"

"Just a few more seconds Kero-chaaan…" I muttered.

"You're gon'na be late! OI," Kero yelled in my ear. "You have a test today don't you?"

"HOE?" I jerked out of my bed at record speed and started changing. "I completely forgot! I'm going to be late!"

"Have fun at school!" Kero yawned as I whipped past him, jerked open the door and headed downstairs.

"Late again, eh? What a monster," Touya snickered, oblivious to my glares. Why does he always have to call me that? He's still such a meanie.

"Now, now", oto-san said absently. "Here I packed you your lunches"

"Hank-kooo", I mumbled around breakfast. The beautiful photo of oka-san caught my eye. And I felt guilty for not praying to and for her, for so long. It was because I couldn't, everytime I envisioned her in heaven I saw... him. He was looking at me with his intense amber eyes, never wavering, it only made me want to see him. But that no longer is possible. I closed my eyes as I felt the all too familiar ache in my chest. 'Okaa-san,' I thought to her for the first time in months, 'I'm sorry I haven't thought of you for so long. It just that I wasn't ready. It still hurts so much when I think of him! It's been a little bit over a year since Syaoran-kun died, but please don't worry about me! I have Tomoyo and all my other friends supporting me, so everything will definitely be alright. Definitely!' This is the first time I told her upfront about Syaoran! I felt... Relieved somehow, as if part of the burden was taken off my shoulders. For weeks I refused to accept the fact that Syaoran-kun is dead. I was even mean to Meiling-chan when she tried to talk to me. Hurt, Meiling returned to Hong Kong and we haven't had any contact since. That reminds me… I should say sorry to her, even if it is a bit late, even if she won't accept. I wonder if she'll forgive me-

"Hey! Monster! You'll really be late if you don't start leaving soon," Touya said. I snapped out of my daze to yell at him for calling me a monster again, only to stop when I saw his face. He was looking at me intently, with worry etched into his eyes, oto-san too. I plastered a nervous smile on my face and headed to the door with onii-chan following close behind. When onii-chan and oto-san thought I wasn't paying attention they both traded worried glances.

"Sakura tries too hard for us", Touya mouthed behind my back. Oto-san smiled knowingly and gave me a loving look. I smiled back, for real this time, and both their gazes softened. Onii-chan and oto-san both care about me so much, I don't ever want to see them sad because of me.

Panting, I rushed into the classroom and made it to my desk, just as the bell rang. A few more seconds and I would have gotten my tenth late, meaning a month of cleaning the class after school. I sighed inwardly in relief. I sank into my seat and traded smiles with Tomoyo-chan, my best friend. It was surprising we both enrolled and got in the same high school, almost everyone from my elementary school made it to this school.

"Right on time," Tomoyo-chan whispered.

"Mm," I grumbled, as Naido-sensei started calling out attendance. "I don't want to have to clean her chalkboard again, its so tiring! She writes way too much notes." Tomoyo giggles at that.

"You're too cute Sakura-chan!"

"Alright," the sensei said, "Since everyone is here on time I'll be introducing you a new student." My eyes widened, and the whole class perked up while hearing that. I couldn't help but feel my heart sink, I didn't think that such a thing could remind me of Syaoran-kun so much. How he first entered my life... And now I'll never see him again… Tears threatened to overflow, but I refuse to let them. I promised myself I wouldn't make anyone worry about me ever again. Tilting my head, I cover my eyes with my bangs, hoping to get my emotions under control before someone notices. Tomoyo looks at me with worried eyes, but she stays quiet, nothing ever escapes her keen observation skills.

"This is our new student! He was originally a transfer student from Karakura! Please welcome him," Naida-sensei gushed.

"Hello everyone, I'm Hitsugaya Toshiro, please take good care of me"