What's goin' on people? This is my revised version of my first fanfiction and I really want to develop my writing so yeah, Read and Review! Reviews, constructive criticism and ideas are much appreciated. Flames will be laughed at. Possible minor HoH spoilers and OOC.
DISCLAIMER: As much as I want to, I do not own PJO or HoO or any of its characters etc. They all belong to the genius that is Rick Riordan
On with the story! Enjoy :)
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"PERCY JACKSON!" Zeus bellowed, his voice echoing off the halls of the Olympians throne room at hte summit of Olympus. The room fell silent as the 20 feet tall Gods all sat on their thrones, shifting their eyes to the King of the Gods as his gaze bore holes through the young Demigod. "You have been accused of treason, what say you in your defense?" (Credit for that bit goes to Dratsabguy)
"I say this is rubbish, I swear on the River Styx that I did not kill those demigods" replied Percy angrily, confident that this would convince them
"I don't believe you!" roared Zeus "There is no one else that it could have been; you were alone with them at the time!"
Percy refused to be intimidated by Zeus, he was so angry that he couldn't talk, luckily someone else spoke up
"Lord Zeus, it couldn't have been Percy; I mean his fatal flaw is personal loyalty right? He would never kill any demigod if he could help it, especially not one loyal to the Olympians"
Percy looked over and saw Annabeth, she stood among the crew of the Argo II and a few of Percy's other close friends, both Greek and Roman.
"Father she is right, I never really liked the sea spawn but Annabeth is correct, he would never betray us" Percy tore his gaze from Annabeth and looked at Athena and nodded gratefully; Percy was surprised she had spoken up, in his defense. However Zeus was beyond reason
"Percy Jackson, as King of the Gods I hereby banish you to Tartarus, to forever suffer for your crimes!" Zeus raised his master bolt
"After all I've done for you! After all I've sacrificed! After I saved you twice! This is how you repay me!?" Percy finally lost it, he snapped "you hated me since I was twelve for no other reason than I was Poseidon's son! Many of you gods attempted to kill me over my life but I still refused to help Kronos or Gaia!" Annabeth stopped his tirade simply by standing in front of him
"Percy" she looked like she was going to cry, it hurt Percy to see her like this. When he again looked at Zeus, he had anger in his eyes but seemed resigned to his fate
"At least let me say goodbye" he stared at Zeus until he nodded uncomfortably, Percy stepped forward and wrapped his arms around Annabeth as she sobbed quietly into his shoulder, they didn't say anything for a while until Annabeth pulled back, looking down at the marble floor that she had personally designed
"I won't give up Seaweed brain, I'll convince them to let you out, and if they won't then I'll break you out myself" Percy gave a sad smile "You could go to Damasen or Bob and-"
"Anna, stop" Percy held her chin and gently raised her face to look in her eyes, "We will see each other again, after all we've been through together, there is one thing that I've learned, and that is there is nothing that will ever keep us apart. Ok?" Annabeth eventually nodded slowly. Percy grasped her hand and headed over to his other friends, first he walked up to Jason who had his arms around a crying Piper who immediately tackled Percy in a hug
"It's gonna be fine Beauty Queen, I've been through there once already"
"But you had Annabeth with you that time" Percy paused before responding
"Pipes, just remember that no matter what anyone says, you are one of the strongest and bravest people I know" Percy than turned to Jason who pried Piper off of Percy
"Jase, You gotta look after Camp for me, but don't be afraid to ask for help if you need it"
"I- I will Perce"
Percy clapped his hand on Jason's shoulder before he nodded than moved on to Leo, who was standing awkwardly behind Jason and Piper
"Leo, I'm trusting you to help keep their spirits up and know that you will always have a family at Camp and you will see Calypso again, you are going to be the one to free her" Leo didn't respond he just nodded silently so Percy continued on to Frank and Hazel
"Frank, look after that stick alright? You still got a long life ahead of you"
"I- I will Perce, just make sure you come back alright?" Percy nodded and turned to Hazel
"Look after him alright? And don't worry, you belong here, you belong now" They both nodded and Percy moved on to Thalia
"Pinecone face-" he was cut off when Thalia hugged him fiercely
"I'm goin' to miss you Percy" she said quietly
"I'm gonna miss you too Thals" Percy hugged her back and turned to Nico
"Nico, you'll always have a place at Camp, you know that right?"
"Yeah I know, goodbye Percy" said Nico as he pulled Thalia away and hugged her
"G-man, you're my best friend, so I'm trusting you with the most important job: look after Annabeth and my mum for me, even if she isn't there with me; Annabeth's gonna be the reason I survive down there"
"I will Perce" said Grover as he fought back tears and hugged Percy, finally Percy turned to his father
"Percy, no matter what, know that I am immensely proud of you, you are the greatest hero that has ever lived. I really do believe that you will come back; you'll find a way back to us, to Annabeth. Goodbye son." Said the Sea God with a small smile. One last time Percy wrapped his arms around Annabeth, not even the gods knew when he would be able to again
"Wise Girl, I will see you again, I will come back too you I promise" Percy whispered in her ear, he pulled back and kissed her gently, than he turned to Zeus
"Alright Zeus, let's get this over with" Percy looked at Annabeth "goodbye Annabeth", the last he saw before he was banished to Tartarus was her face, tears falling down from her beautiful grey eyes
"Goodbye Percy"
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So what did you think? Short I know but it was only the intro and I'll try to do longer chapters. Please let me know what you think. R&R, don't know when I'll be able to update, but I'll try and do it soon. Reviews give me incentive!
Till next time!
BigSchwart out
