Moving on, the past is in the past

Hayley, Scott, Dani and Noah

Ok now Hayley, Scott and Dani won't come in for another chapter or two so just bare with me it may take a few chapters to understand what the story is about. The first chapter is fairly short.

Chapter number 1. A different History

30th of September 2004, Noah Lawson fell to his dead...

Or did he?

What didn't you see that could of changed everything?

What happened that could of made you think differently?

Who was working from the inside?

What did they do?

And why did they do it?

31st of September 2004, what you didn't see...

The room was fairly dark and the only light that could bee see was the light that shone through the small rectangular pieces of glass in the double doors that lead to a long corridor like in a hospital. Inside the room was a girl with blue eyes and light brown curly hair that was almost frizzy, she looked down at a body that was laying in an open coffin, he lay so still and quiet, a bullet wound in his arm that had just been cleaned up, he was going to recover, not that his family and friends needed to know, or were going to find out. Next to him was another coffin with a lid on it the name on the top read Noah Lawson, but no body lay inside, not that anyone would notice.

"You're going to regret the day you ever tried to hurt my Sarah" the girl spoke, "and I can promise you your not going to be put out of your mystery by having all the pain go away, your going to live and suffer the consequences" she told him sitting down next to his open coffin deciding how to get him out of here unnoticed.

About five minutes later Noah began to wake up, he saw the box he was lying in and used the edges to help himself sit up, looking around the room his gaze came upon a girl with a crow bar heading towards him quickly hitting his head making everything begin to black out again, his head fell back wards hitting hard against the bottom of the coffin.

Carelessly The girl threw the crow bar behind her hitting a black curtain revealing the back door of the place. "Perfect" she smiled to herself grabbing Noah and carrying him over her shoulders out the back door before anyone had the chance to come and see what the noise had been.

Please tell me what you think.