I decided to start on this story because I got stuck on my other one. Any ways make sure you review my story and tell me what you didn't like about it and what you did. Thanks!
Tortured Summer
"Ahh Hogwarts." Whispered a young girl on the train. A 5th year this year. This girl has a major secret and was wearing a glamour charm. Little does she know that is all gonna go downhill in the next hour in a half.
Every one traveled by boats this year. She hasn't seen a red head on the train but she was thankful right now. Hermione always rode with Harry and that did not change this year. While Harry had his back towards Hermione, He didn't hear her fall in the water unconscious.
"Hermione!" Was all Ginny said to get Harrys attention. Ginny noticed that Hermione wand was floating in the water. All when Ginny found her wand, Harry jumped in the water to save Hermione. Harry couldn't see underwater so he had to go by feel. Soon he felt something, feeling her jacket she had been wearing he pulled her up to the surface of the he wasn't to late to save her life.
