Eclipse – Edward POV
Hey, please comment on my story, I would really appreciate it. I think it will help with my writing as this is my first Fanfiction and I want to know if its a load of crap or not. I'll accept all criticisms, if you think its horrible - tell me, if you think its good - tell me. I'll get the next chapter up soon as long as I get enough good comments :).
I do not own Twilight :(
Preface
All my efforts to keep her safe seem to have failed. I'm staring into the determined eyes of my enemy who has threatened my world for entirely too long now. Enough is enough. I prepare to defend our lives as I concentrate on their every thought running through my mind. I see the plan forming in their minds – they have no chance of ever getting that close to her, I will keep her safe no matter what. Her accelerated breathing breaks into my senses and I know that she's worried for me and for our family fighting for their own existence. I look back into the wild eyes of my enemy and I know she's looking for a break in my protection, for when my attention is diverted, as we entangle in a deadly dance.
