This is my first story thats been put on here so please commet and tell me what you think :)

This is for Charlotte Taylor who made me get a Fanfic account. Love you so much! :) 3

Basic story line: Ebony is a 14 year old anorexic girl, and when things start to pick up, she gets brutally murdered and she needs to try and contact the living to warn the police and everyone she can about who did it and how. Can she do it before her killer gets to anyone else? Will she be the guardian angel to light the way for the people she desperately needs to live?

So, here's the intro-- more to come!

News reports flashed half way around the world and back. When death hit, it was peaceful, relieving. The funeral will be harder for some I imagine. I'll be there. He will never harm again. I'll haunt his every sleep until, he too, becomes breathless.

Every 14 year old girl should begin to get freedom, bit by boring bit. What if she never got any? I looked at Millie, a girl of the same age as me in my year at school. We had P.E. together. I envied her looks. Her blonde hair was naturally curly and she was a healthy weight. It's not that I'm fat or even slightly over-weight. Those are factors of possibility that disgust me. They always have, ever since my uncle died of obesity. I am scared to eat. My parents don't even know. My sister and two brothers know, but they wouldn't dare tell. They know how I feel; they have been through the same thing.

Millie Winters hugged her dad with a warm smile that changed the whole expression of her face. She glowed with tanned health. I wanted to cry, but I knew it would stain my pallid skin; plus I was in public.

"Ebony?" My sister Kelly waved he thin and frail hand in front of my face. I blinked a few times and tore my eyes away from Millie as she drove away in her Dad's range rover with him. "Mum's here." She got into the car with Elliot, my eldest brother, and Liam, the second eldest of the four of us.

Liam was a goth, but I loved the way he dressed. He had recently dyed his hair black and got an ear-piercing that made a hole in his ear-lobe. Elliot was the brain box of the family, however, he was pretty good-looking, never dressed nerdy and had had many girl-friends. Jeanie, his current girl-friend, was lovely. I liked her best out of all of his past girl-friends, and Elliot seemed to aswell; they had been together for ages!

She dashed over to our black Mercedes and tapped on Mum's window. Mum rolled it down.

"Hey Jeanie. Everything okay?" she asked with a friendly smile. Mum liked Jeanie too.

"Yeah, fine thanks Cheryl. My parents wanted me to ask you if you wanted to come over for tea tonight with your husband? Kids included. She smiled her pretty smile and acknowledged all of us with a wave.

So how was the first bit? let me know! I'll write more soon to satisfy you :)