I am striker86's brother and I have written this story. Please review.
Seven legend beybladers
Once there was poor village named Koma village. It had been broken into ruins after the invasion of Nemesis. When after 10 years, Prince Ryuga arrived in Koma village. He took with himself two poor teenagers, Kyoya Hagane and Gingka Tategami. He trained them and made them spies. Another prince, Julian Konzern challenged Prince Ryuga to a bey battle. Ryuga accepted his challenge.
The next day of their meeting, they arrived in beylin temple. They both took their positions. The referee said, "3 2 1 let it rip." Prince Ryuga launched destroy L Drago whereas Julian launched gravity destroyer, they both were reverse rotating beys. But L Drago was a lot powerful. Julian used his special move and hit L Drago directly. L Drago became very slow but then all the audience and Julian were surprised to see L Drago spinning at full speed. L Drago had sucked all the power of gravity destroyer's special move. L Drago started hitting gravity destroyer badly. Destroyer was not able to counter attack. L Drago finally used its special move, dragon supreme fang fury and broke gravity destroyer to pieces. Julian fell on his knees and bowed in front of the great Prince Ryuga. Ryuga asked Julian to join his team dark nebula. Ryuga told Julian about his rival Rago who is unstoppable.
