And again I had the document I wanted ready but then fucking yet again it won't open or is wiped out. So anyways I'm going to retype it again and try and upload it before I have to get off the comp. So here's a quick description of my OC. I might bring another one in later and if I do than I will give a quick description of that one to.

Name: Nezumi Minori

Gender: Female

Age: 17

Hair color: Dark purple, right above knee length

Eye color: Light lavender

Abilities: Controls all the elements

Outfit: Loose mid-drift red shirt, loose grey jeans, red belt, black thermos, and black fashion boots with a grey zipper on the back.

***********No POV***********

Nezumi got out of the shower wrapping a towel around her body and dried off. She quickly slipped on her white and black bra and underwear than pulled the towel back around her. She brushed her shining black hair, she had never liked her purple hair so she dyed it black, and pulled her hair into a tight braid leaving some of her bangs down. She had just finished brushing her teeth when a soft knock came. She quickly got out allowing Aka into the bathroom and walked to her closet. The towel fell from her body as she slipped on her clothes. The last thing Nezumi looked for was which knife she would take with her.

One had a silver outside, the blade was ice blue and had an emerald dragon breathing ruby fire from its mouth engraved on it. The other had a ruby outside, the blade was black and had pink cherry blossoms swirling across it. Nezumi picked the first one hiding it inside her boot.

Aka came out of the bathroom. Her blonde hair pulled into a ponytail with a blue hair tie that matched her blue eyes. Her dress was dark pink and purple. She wore black leggings under it and quite often never wore shoes. She heard a knock at the door and went to answer it before Nezumi could.

"Hi, Kaji-san." Aka greeted softly.

"Hi, Aka-chan. Are you going to watch Nezumi today? She's not going to class after pulling a stunt like she did yesterday." Kaji asked softly so Nezumi wouldn't hear him.

"I can't. I've missed too much school and am behind. Can you? And if not I'm sure Hoonoo will."

"I can today. My dad will just show me what I missed when you catch up."

"Thanks Kaji-san. I've to go to class now. Bye." Aka left quickly heading towards class.

Kaji watched her leave and then came into Nezumi and Aka's room. The door closed behind him. He took a quick glance at Nezumi and then walked into her bathroom. Nezumi waited a few seconds, then got up, and ran outside. Kaji talked with her everyday telling her it was pointless to try and escape. She was his now and there was no escaping it or the school he had brought her to. Nezumi knew she couldn't escape either but she would normally run into the forest and calm herself before she would go back. Nezumi ran into the forest towards the clearing she normally calmed herself in. She got there and started to walk towards the pond.

"Who's there?" Nezumi demanded sensing a presence near the pond.

Only silence came.

"Who's there? I can sense you."

This time a rustle came from the bushes.

"Who are you? Show yourself." Nezumi pulled out her knife and flipped open the blade.

Someone stepped out from the bushes. It was a girl. She had blue hair pulled into a bun with a white flower in it. Nezumi turned to run away. She hadn't made it halfway across the clearing when white flowers surrounded her.

"What's going on? What is this?" Nezumi asked more to herself then the girl.

"Nezumi-san you don't need to be scared." The girl said.

"Who are you?" Nezumi turned around to see the girl. She stood there her hands formed one hand-sign and stayed like that never moving. "How do you know my name?"

"I will explain later. Will you come with me?"

"Who are you?" Nezumi asked again. Finally it clicked as to what she had said. "I won't go with you. You can't kidnap me."

"I'm not kidnapping you. I'm going to take you to see your father."

"No, I don't want to see him."

The girl changed her hand-signs faster than Nezumi could see. The flowers were coated in a foggy black film. Suddenly Nezumi was too weak to stand, she fell to the ground. Her hands held her up, her palms were sweaty. Nezumi didn't know why this had happened. She had never felt so weak. Even when she saw her mother get murdered she had never been this weak and scared.

"What's going on? What did you do?" Nezumi's voice was weak. She had no time to hear an answer before her world faded.

The girl picked up Nezumi's limp body and was about to turn and leave when someone came into the clearing. She had looked calm until she saw the girl holding Nezumi's limp form.

"What did you do to her? Give her back to me." Aka demanded.

"This is nothing to be worried about. She's fine." The girl said softly.

"Give Nezumi back. She will be scared and miserable without me."

"I'll tell my leader. We will decide on this later. I have to go before she wakes up." The girl turned to leave but stopped when a wall of water formed in front of her.

"You give her back to me." Aka's voice became harsh.

"I said we would decide on this later. I will come back here." The girl ran around the water and jumped into the trees.

She was nearly out of chakra. The jutsu barely scratched Nezumi's chakra reserves but neatly depleted hers. Nezumi's body tensed up. The girl glanced at Nezumi, then sighed softly, and went faster. She would wake up soon. The jutsu only worked on her because she didn't know about her chakra and it was so weak and undeveloped that taking the smallest fraction of it like she did could knock her out. It wouldn't work long though. At max 20 minutes. The girl hurried inside the hideout and looked at Nezumi again. Her body moved the slightest bit. The girl knew there wasn't enough time to take her to room and prepare it before she woke up. She improvised and went to the living room. Deidara glanced up at her as hurried over to him.

"She needs to stay in a room, hmm." Deidara mumbled.

"I know. She's going to wake up soon. I already explained that my jutsu won't work well on her." Konan retorted. Deidara looked at the form in her arms make a small noise and shift in her arms.

Deidara got up quickly. The girl set down Nezumi on the couch. The others gathered around to look at her. They had all heard about how strong she was but right now she looked helpless. The girl covered her with her cloak to keep her from getting cold and then sat down looking at her. None of them knew her name except her kidnapper, Pain, and Madara.

Nezumi moved again and opened her eyes. She blinked a few times so her vision would clear up. She saw 8 people watching her. She sat up abruptly and screamed. Her breathing became ragged and fast, her eyes were wide and fear. One of them stepped near her. She tried to move away but was too scared to move. It was the girl who had kidnapped her. She was a few steps away. Nezumi acted on instinct, got up, and ran as far as she could away from them. She had ran into a hallway, to the door at the way end, opened it, and crawled onto the bed hugging her knees tight to her body. The girl came in. Nezumi looked at her than without her noticing flipped open her thermos and froze the water around her. The ice touched her skin. A flare of fire shot out and warmed the ice. Some melted away from her skin and kept her warm and then disappeared. This was a warning to go away but instead of the girl leaving she sat on the edge of the bed. Nezumi pulled out her knife, flipping open the blade, and held it close to her. Another person came in. It was a boy with orange spiky hair and multiple piercings. He sat near the girl.

"Konan, what happened?" The boy demanded.

"I don't know. I had to set her in the living room or she would wake up. I'm sorry I couldn't detain her better, Pain." Konan said.

"That's fine. I'm sure I can get her out of there anyways." Pain formed a hand-sign and started to change it.

Nezumi looked at him fearfully. She hoped he wouldn't actually do anything but she didn't know and didn't want to get hurt. He was about to say something.

"Don't!" Nezumi screamed throwing down her barrier. Water splashing on her and the bed.

"Nezumi-san it's okay. I won't hurt you and neither will he." Konan said reaching towards Nezumi.

"Don't touch me." Nezumi whimpered. A wall of water formed in front of her.

"Pain, will you leave? I don't want to go against orders but she might calm down some if you leave." Konan asked softly.

"Okay, just try and calm her before I come back." Pain agreed standing and leaving. The door closed and locked behind him.

"Nezumi-san will you take down your barrier?" Konan asked.

"No, you will hurt me." Nezumi answered softly, her barrier wobbled some.

"I won't hurt you." Konan passed a finger against the water.

Nezumi's barrier wobbled more. "Don't." Her face contorted as she concentrated on keeping up the barrier.

"It's fine Nezumi-san. I won't hurt you."

The barrier fell. Water splashed against the bed again. "No, I'm too weak. I'm too scared again. I promised myself it wouldn't happen again." Nezumi whispered as she started to cry.

"Nezumi-san you're not weak. Don't say that about yourself." Konan put a hand on Nezumi's shoulder.

"Get away."

Nezumi was suddenly angry. She didn't know why but she was. She was unaware of the black chakra surrounding her body. Konan quickly got up. She formed a hand-sign and the ring on her hand glowed a pale white. Pain came back to the room quickly. He looked worried. He glanced at Nezumi and used the rinnegan to throw her into the wall. She hit the wall with a dull thud and blacked out.


Okay there's the first chap. I'm going to upload the other as soon as I can. Please review and give me some criticism.