This is a re-write, and I hope it is much better than the original...

So yeah, Please enjoy the story...


Ichigo, you missed a spot…" Mint gave a disapproving snicker before she continued to sip her tea.

"It would be nice if you helped Mint, instead of relaxing…" Ichigo groaned, shooting daggers into the spine of the blue haired bird.

"I always have my tea time about now; it would be horrible if I missed it." her nose rose high as the quite sipping sound grated on the red-head's nerves.

"Whatever…" Scrubs the location Mint pointed out before gathering her things. "Ryou! I'm off!"

A low voice called forth, answering her yell with another. "Go ahead."

The red head ran to the back of the building, pulling off the pink maid uniform that she had to wear for the shop. Pulling on a short denim miniskirt with a loose tee instead, choice with her black sneakers. Knocking her toes off the shoes on the tile floor of the shop near the exit, making a 'tap tap tap' before jogging out the door. A pair of yellow eyes followed from behind, catching sneak peeks of her pink lace panties.

"Oii~, Koneko-chan, you really shouldn't run around at night." A voice danced to the winds, unheard to the girl who ran into the one person. The one person the owner of those yellow eyes really hated to see. His gaze was filled with disgust at the way their bodies met. "Relax, she will be mine. She will be mine."

"Aoyama-kun!" Ichigo shouted, wrapping her arms tightly around the boy's shoulders. Her eyes were shut tight with glee as his arms slowly wrapped around her waist. "I've missed you soo much!"

"I missed you too Ichigo…" He tightens his hold, bringing his lips to her ears and whispers and a soft, gentle, soothing tone. "I love you Ichigo. I only Love you…"

"I love you too Aoyama-kun!" Her voice was a shrill of happiness. Giggles and joy her only emotion. The man in hiding could not take any more. Fist clinched and knuckles white.

Kisshu teleports right above the two with the dragonswords in his hand "Eww... Why do you like him? I know! I'll kill him then you'll be mine!" He gave his signature lopsided smirk before slowly floating away. "Eh, Koneko-chan?"

"No Kisshu! I don't love you! I love Aoyama-kun! Get it through your thick skull!" The red headed girl screamed, Kisshu backed away just to protect his ears.

"Oi.. Koneko-chan… He has a boy friend though…" He pouts playfully, a fang showing. "You want to date a bi guy?"

She glances over at Aoyama-kun who's blushing like wild trying to think of a comeback. "That's a Lie!... right Aoyama-kun?"

"Huh? Oh… uh… yah! It's a lie… I'm straight!" The boy stuttered, glancing back and forth at Kish and Ichigo. One with a deadly smirk, the other with a doubtful gaze.
"I told you Kisshu!" Her mind screamed in victory, but her heart sunk and pained for a reason she did not know. Perhaps t was because hoe long it took her boyfriend to respond.

"Oii… Koneko-chan… he is blushing mad cause it's true. In fact he was planning on dumping you just to be with his boyfriend."

"No… no..-screams- noo!" She screamed, but the small nod and blush the boy gave answered her heart. She couldn't take the pain in her chest the feeling of rejection. She passed out on the path.

"See what you did to poor Koneko-chan!" Kisshu teleports in front of the boy and holds the swords to his neck. "Time to pay for hurting my Kitty"

"But.. Kishy.. I wanted you all along…" The boy turned to face the alien with a pathetic blush. "Couldn't you see how much you turn me on?" Aoyama grabs for Kisshu's hand to try's to kiss him on the lips. "Kisshu… I always wanted you." When that failed, his other had reached out for the floating boy's groin.

"No way! Unlike you, I only have eyes for Ichigo!" Kisshu uses the dragon sword to cut off Aoyama's head, spouting in victory at the mess of a loser "There…" he then picks up his Koneko-chan bridal style and teleports to his room, where he lays her on the bed before teleporting out.


That was the end of the first re-written Chapter. I will be going back and doing this for all if not most of my stories...

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