My second fic, constructive criticism is very welcome :)
My attempt at a poem :)
Shadows pass across the land
They are coming
In hundreds
Thousands even.
.
We shall not run
We shall not hide
We are of
The Durin line.
.
As they ride fourth
The mutilated enemy
The warped weapons they hold
In their scaly hands.
.
Battle-cries and pained yells
As you stand by my side
We fight as always
Together.
.
And fall we may
On the enemy's spear
I shall not cry
If I die by your side.
.
One by one
The enemy is repelled
But all victories
Come at a cost.
.
I hear your shriek
Watch you fall
And I stumble forward
To be by your side.
.
A pain in my chest
As your breathing slows
And I realise that I too
Am bleeding out.
.
Brown eyes meet blue
Pale hands grasp
What little of each other
We have left.
.
"Men lananubukhs menu, nadad"
You whisper
"Men lananubukhs menu, nadadith"
I reply.
.
"Goodnight, nadadith"
I whisper
Even though
His soul has gone.
.
"Goodnight".
A/N: Men lananubukhs menu nadad(ith) - I love you (little) brother
Please review. :)
