Blue: Hey everbody... Ano, I feel pretty jurky just writing a new storie... Sumimasen... I just needed to write something new. Please don't hate me!

Anywayz, this might not even be continued... I just wanted to publish it and see if anyone thought it was good at all. My other fic didn't get many reviews... But I do know why, and I think I'm pretty stupid for thinking that I might have gotten more... I'm the type of person whole sits in the back of the class room and never raises her hand because she thinks she's either wrong or has a fear of not being able to be heard because they talk to quitely... So please, read and review for the sake of my very low self-esteame...(I seriously don't seem like it tho if you talk to me online...it's weird)

I would please like some help with beta-ing... my prevous beta is banned from the computer for 2 weeks... ano, if anyone can do it, please e-mail me... on with the ficcie now...p.s. if anyone who reads this and thinks I should contiue, please tell me...(my title is made for lack of a better one... I just used the name of where the girl is from for the name... I think Avoran sounds pretty cool tho...)


Random Goofy quotes of the day:

I brake for... OH $4!T NO BRAKES!

My mind works like lightning. One brilliant flash and it's gone!


'Thoughts'
"Talking"

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Running. Running.
'Portal watch. Why do I have to do portal watch? I am almost a commander in the Cha'hora's(A) army for Ket'chaed's(B) sake.'

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The girl jerked her head around as a snap of a tree banch reached her ears.

'It's here! I am not going to make it!'

She stumbled but caught herself, dodgeing another tree she jumped as a large sharply clawed hand lashed out from the shadows.

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Run...Run...
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"I will find you my daring."
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Her eyes widened. Heart beating faster she went faster looking franticly for the acursed portal that she had been assigned to protect.

There! The silvery colored vortexs shimmered into her vision. A giant hand with red tinted nails lashed out from the shadows, the girl jumped to the side on instinct but didn't count on the portal to suddenly be there. She tumbled through and smashed into a couple of trees, taking no notice in how they toppled as soon as she stood up, the girl jumped back through. She stood at ready, heart pounding and adrenalin rushing, rushing sounds echoing in her ears.

Suddenly the shadow of the thing that was hunting her and the portal dropped next to her lashing out and catching her in the stomach. She cried out and grapled at the posenous claws angrily, words suddenly whispered in her mind. It was high but male, and far from funny sounding. A grateing edge and mitallic sound rang in it and she could practicly smell the evil that it poured of.

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"I told you I would find you."
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Tears trickled down her blood spatered face. Hitting the creatures claw in the prosses, this time it was the creatures turn to howl for the girls pure tears burned it's foul skin. Smoking and creating a foul stench the monster refused to release it's victim. The girl cursed it for haveing skin inpenitrible by a sword.

A quiet whistling sound reached her ears as a four pointed weapon hit the monsters diamond-hard skin. She craned her neck to see three people she had never seen before. One man who had silver hair was the one who had thrown the weapon, and two boys one blond the other black haired.

"It is no use," she cried to them "It's skin can not be broken with sharpness!"

"What! But thats impossible!"the blond haired boy cried loudly.

The monster grunted, the loud desibles of the blond haired boys voice thudding in it's sensitive bat like ears.

Her eyes widened in remembrence as her mind broke free of it's fog of fear.

"Cover your ears!" she cried

"Why?" the blond haired boy asked, the monster grunted again.
"Yes. We do not have to do as you say."the black haired boy said calmly but defiently
"I have a feeling that we should Naruto, Sasuke."

The blond, Naruto, pouted but did as the silver haired man said. The black, Sasuke, however did not.

"Please!"The girl cried but Sasuke just fastened a defient gaze on her and the girl, tired from the poisen and running, opened her mouth and let forth a shriek.

Resisting a smirk as the boy, Sasuke, clapped his hands over his ears, She shrieked again. The spikes that could be pushed out and retrackted in the monsters claws retrackted as her high decible crys hit it's ears.

'Close! Once more!'

She drew in a breath as deep as her body would allow and turned her face so her voice would hit the monsters left ear and screamed.

The monster's claws slipped out of the girl's body and the monster itself droped to the ground, writhering blindly as if it could to get away from the pain, and got up but stumbled around unable to navigate. Unable to tell it's way the monster stumbled and smashed agenst trees falling over it's legs as it struggled to find it's way.

The girl grinned but winced, only now aware of the seariousness of her wound. She sighed inwardly, 'Miara is gunna kill me for this one.' she got to her feet and pressed a hand to her stomach. She frowned in annoiance as her head became light, spots flashed in front of her eyes and she became very aware of the loud mouthed blond boys voice.

"Hey! Are you alright!" His voice closed in on her and the crunch of dried leaves reached her ears. Her body became weak and her legs gave way, her muscles seemed to turn into a mass of strings and knots as they ached. "Hn. She is could be dieing you dobe. You saw that thing." Their voices became louder and louder as her body failed. She grunted in the effort of keeping her body up, she grappled at her sword on her back trying to grasp the hilt. But it wasn't there. 'Damn. I must have lost it when I crashed through the portal.' She thought, she growled in annoiance again. That stupid monster, which was called an An'car, had triggered her instincs and made her jump through the annual portal, most likly she had lost it when she had smashed into the trees.

(Hallo's! Just a stupid athorussess cut in, the next paragraph is just a filler! So you don't have to read it, its just info that might not be important to you!)

It had jumped out at her and growled, startling her into falling, and beat it chest wildly as a sign of aggretion. She had heard of the An'car, it was a courious beast and had weak eyes, using it's ears to hunt and protect itself. She had also known about the portal, it opened every 1000 sunsets into another place. Where exactly, no one knew, but whoever went in rarly came back, and when they did they would be talking about strange things. People who could run with the speeds of a rach'ad(C) and some that had better senses than an An'car's hearing, or sence of smell better than a ylv'sa's(D). All these things things seemed ubsurd to the people of the village named Avoran(E), but she herself belived it was possible, athough had she voiced her opinion and had she not been in the Cha'hora's army, she would have been shunned out of the village.

She fought in vain to keep up her body, but she knew she needed to sleep to heal. She didn't know those three men though, and it made her uneasy to not know their intentions. Her eyelids drooped dangerisly and her body ached with a pounding pain, the voices of the bickering two shattered her ear repetedly as they grew louder. Leaves crunched and the smell of trees invaded her senses, she shot up and threw two short knives at the man. It was the silver haired one, the one who seemed to be the leader of the other two. A puff of smoke almost instantly covered the man's body. She closed her eyes and tried to calm her breathing. 'This man is skilled in fighting.' She tried to not panic, however she had heard of people coming out of the portal and slautering many.

She winced as she landed, one knee bent and the other leg crouched. Blood coursed almost merrely mocking her down her leg, joining the blood that coursed from the wound through her stomach and back. Black and white spots flashed infront of her eyes and pain seared through her temples, she cursed the An'car with words from the languages that she knew. A whistling caught her attention and she rolled out of the way of a net that was attatched to strange looking medium sized daggers(F). She cursed again, wishing she had armed herself with her other sword, and dodged another net just as it skimmed through the air. The silver man suddenly popped out of no where and restraned her arms, touching one of the strange daggers to her neck.

She struggled in his grip as blackness covered her vision again. She was't going to stay awake and she knew it, however she hoped she could drive away the travalers before it happened. "Zeta'pel m'ako!"(G) She cried wrenching her body in different ways trying to break his grasp. Suddenly a pink head of hair popped out from no where, and a girl was visible now. She kneeled in front of a Meh'ane(H), mixing something in a bowl. "Is it done yet Sakura?" The silver haired man asked. If this had been any other situation, she would have shivered violently and jumped the girl and shaved her head. However it was not any other situation, and she only had a few short knives left but they where strapped to her left thigh.

The pink haired girl, or Sakura, noded and got up holding the bowl. Her eyes widened, 'What are they going to do?', she began to panick as her struggling weakened her already exasted state. Sakura lifted the bowl to her lips, but she refused to open her mouth. She jammed her head back and felt it collide with the silver haired man's. That blow would make her vision fail for a while, but she could still navigate, she grabbed three of her six remaining short knives and threw them in the direction of where she heard the pink haired girl's breathing. "Sakura-chan!" It was the blond Naruto's voice, a strong pair of arms clamped around her body, startling her.

A groan caught her attention, 'How could that man be awake already?' She paniced again, and tried to calm herself and gather the dregs of her energy to break free. "Don't expect to break free again. I won't fall for that." She shivered, the voice was the black haired boy, Sasuke, his breath was warm and close to her ear. Her temporaraly sightless eyes widened, boys were not allowed this close to girls in her village unless they where warriors, and in that case they could only touch another if they had been granted the privlage from the Cha'hora. "Me'shiji non'de kij'ta non'dety ij'bak?"(I) She growled but cursed herself, she haden't heard the boy's movements. "Oi! That was uncalled for!" She winced, that blond was louder than her brother's snoring at night.

She jurked in the boys grip and growled feraly, "Jut'sad rom'ako!"(J) as soon as the words left her lips the bowl was jabbed at her mouth and the liquid slithered down her throught. She choked and instinctivly swallowed, but regretted it as the dark veil over her eyes seemed to get darker. The last thing she heard was the blod haired boys voice, "Hey Sakura, I think you made that stuff too strong." 'Oh wonderous. Just the last thing I wanted to hear.' and then her hearing was cut off.


If you were wondering why she just stoped talking in english or japanese (or whatever they speak in) er... I'm not sure either... hehe... Ya see, I kinda wrote that and then stoped, and then started again and wanted to use this language I made up...so, don't ask me why...and if you do I'll tell you to go back and read my notes...

It's just a shorty chapter... Not very much like me, but it took a shorter time than trying to try and write a 2500 word one... I mostly write at night because I have trouble falling asleep at night, and stay up late... The jibberish that the girl is saying is translated at the end of my note... Sorry for not naming her, I'll do that in the next chappie if people want me to conclude this one...

If I do, it won't be a SasukeXAC(authoresses character), I hate Sasuke... He takes the lurv from the other boys that need it... And he's just plain annoying as a rat in a house... I don't like rats... That includes Sohma Yuki... He looks like a girl... I do like mice tho...

Bluesilver


A: Cha'hora meaning: Chieftess
B: Ket'chaed meaning: Avoranian god
C: Rach'ad: An animal on the planet of Ketrad. It has gray colored fur and black tipped ears with no tail, and can run to high speeds
D: Ylv'sa: An animal used primaraly for hunting. It can smell to a 500 foot radius, and has dark colored fur. Think like a saber tooth tiger and wolf mix for size.
E: Avoran: A village on Ketrad. Run by the Cha'hora Mingelu. (Chieftess named Mingelu)
F: Strage looking medium sized daggers: Kunai! Geez people, you should know that one...
G: Zata'pel m'ako: Release me. (What do you think she would have said? Take me to your leader?)
H: Meh'ane (pronounsed Meh-awnay) A sacred tree on Ketrad. Think like a Red Sequioa in width, but not as tall.
I: Me'shij non'de kij'ta non'dety ij'bak: What do you think your doing? (I bet some of you where thinking something different...)
J: Jut'sad rom'ako: Let go of me!