Here is my commentary for what could very well possibly be the worst story in the history of stories. I own nothing but the comments. If I owned the story, I would jump off a cliff because I'm mentally ill.

AN: afta redin da hairy potty books (not rly i saw the mooviez lolololol) i desided 2 make mi own hary potty storee.

note 2 da reedars: neva beliv any1 hu sayz a blak man dont like fired chickin Racist much?

I wuz sittin out on da porch an mi mama leend out da windo an sayed "watchu doin soulja spirit buu jackson?".This sentence annoys me. First, there are 12 spelling mistakes. Second, that name is really long. Third, what's a 'buu' supposed to be?

"nuttin much" i said "we gut no food".

"o turtle don cri"Let me get this straight: His name is Soulja Spirit Buu Jackson, and his nickname is Turtle? I'm not even going to ask. -_-

"na mama i aint mad" i says. den i loked at da gund n said "i wish i had sum fried chinkin" What is with him and fried chicken? den... dere wuz fried chikin on da grion!11111111111111 Groin- Area abover the private and below the stomach.

"yo buu wuz dat i smel" mi mama said. I lookd arund all snecky like and den i whispad "fried chikin" an it went away. How is he able to summon fried chicken? i wuz scared but nut in a afrayed way. Afraid means the same thing as scared. So basically, he just wrote 'I was afraid, but not in the afraid way. den i whispad again "fried chicken" and it appered agan!111 Wow. so den i desided 2 tri sumden out. "wattamelon" an dere it iz a big ol slice o watrmellon at mah fet. May I ask why he is able to summon food? mah mam lend out da door agan "boi now i no i smel sumden". These might be the most illiterate people ever! so den i leaned ova and wispad "fired chikin... wattamelon" an dey boat went away. i gut up an says 2 mi mama "lock mama!11 i aint gut nottin!11"

"but im so hundreh" sayed ma mama. Yes, I am very hundreh. den i felt sad. That's amazing. You mean you actually felt sad? so i pointed mah finger at da grund an sayed "fried chikin" den a big ol bunmch of fired chikim appeerd. Again with fried chicken! mi mama jumpt an scrammd. she ran in da house an slamed da door. So his mom freaks out, but not the him? "dun cum bak or ill shot ya!" she sayd. Talk about tough love. so i left. Wow. This sentence blows me away.

so whadda think? IF U FLAM UR RASSIST. What did I think? Hmmmm…I really think that this story maybe the worst Fanfic ever posted. The only good reviews he'll get are the ones that he leaves for himself anonymously.