Hi! Here's my best movie yet! This one will have chapters. Hope you like the first chapter!
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Ok, now, I'm going to have up the first 10 chapters. There edited to my new & improved style! Hope you like it! I know NBCF liked it! So, my story:
Zorro Nyo's Tail Of Intrigue
By
Carlint
On Mars, something's happening…
Through fire, a figure, in which looked like a cat, flew through & landed right in front of Martian Commander X-2. The background was red from all the destruction. And, X-2 was running as fast as he could to get away from… Zorro Nyo, a cat with, dare I say it, cat-like reflexes & very cunning. She had powers like no other villain had & was extremely fast, like a fox. She was completely black except for gray fur on her head, white paws & white claws with a brown outline. She had white pure white hair with a red bandanna & white tip on her tail, which looked more like a wolf tail than a cat tail. Her claws were razor sharp & so were her fangs. All of them. Her bandanna had two pieces dangling from the back of her head from were she had tied it on. And, her ears where pure black with red inside & fuzz piece that had come out from the rest. Last, but not least, she had a white patch on the top of her neck & her eyes were pure black all around were the white part normally was, with pure green, glowing pupils.
She jumped high & landed in front of X-2, then he turned & ran the other direction. A female Martian was behind her, watching. She was about X-2's age & had very dark red hair with a lighter shine, but still dark. She had on a bright red shirt with a skull on it & dark red jeans. And shows with cleats on them. And her eyes were red as well. Her shirt was torn at the corners & she didn't seem to notice how frightened X-2 was.
About three more times, Zorro Nyo jumped in front of X-2, & he ran the other way over again. Until she got tired of wasting time & picked him up by his lose skin & through him into the corner of a dark alley. He was hurt bad by what she had done so far. And she was about to finish it. He had two scratches on his face & a black eye. Along with other scratches all over his body, each one as if a cat fell from a cliff & used him as something to hang onto the way down.
They hurt a lot & he was cornered by Zorro Nyo. Behind her was fire way in the distance of the other side of the street where a building stood. The sky & ground, everything appeared red.
"Your time is up! And once your out of the way, I'll doom the whole universe!" yelled Zorro Nyo. She raised up her paw & extended her razor sharp claws. X-2 could feel the pain that would be coming at any second now.
"How could this have happened…why… how…" thought X-2.
About a Week Earlier…
"Marvin, hold still! I'm almost finished!" Lilly's voice could be heard from a room on Commander X-2's ship. Inside, she finished putting on a bow tie on his shirt. He had on a dark blue suit, with a red bow tie, still wearing his helmet. He had on black shows & Lilly got finished with the bow tie.
"There!" said Lilly. X-2 stared at her, blankly, as if she'd done something ridiculous. Lilly gave her work an examining look.
"Hmm… Marvin, do you prefer the bow tie or the tie, itself?" asked Lilly as she pulled out a black tie.
"You decide…" said X-2.
"Ok, then, you can put your normal stuff on, now," said Lilly.
"WHAT? You just spent 20 minutes, helping me with this!" yelled X-2.
"You should've known before, Marv, this is just to see if it fits!" said Lilly. X-2 gave her a look that said,
"Why didn't you tell me that before?"
"Well?" asked Lilly.
"Ok, weeeeelll…….. Why don't you go do something while I change?" said X-2, imitating her.
"Ok!" said Lilly. And with that, she ran out of the room & closed the door behind her. X-2 let out a sigh in relief.
To Be Continued…
Hope you liked it! I'll update soon!
