Hello everyone. Don't comment on my mistakes. I wanted to get a poitn across that I'm NOT perfect. I''m NOT a doll, and I WILL tell you what I think. This is for all those people out ther who feel like giveing up.


Rain poured off the roof of a large villa as a young boy of 16 sat at the edge, tears falling out of his emerald greem eyes and rollign down his face in waves. His raven black hair was soaked and stuck to his forhead in stringy strands.

pulling out a knife, he made cut after cut on his writst, not caring anymore if he passed out from blood looss. A hand suddenly gripped his arm, and pulled it back ands preventing it from making another deep gash on he pale, scarred skin, which was laready leaking blood out at an abnormaly fast pace.

The boy ripped his arm out of the grasp, and made another cut, this one deeper than the rest of them. Lookign up, tha boy saw a mop of soaked pale blond hair and ssad gray eyes staring itno his. Growling, the boy stood, and throw himself out of the villa, and ran.

he ran for what might have seemed like hours to him, and finally collapsed out of exhaustion, knowing he would make it no further isn the dark. Looking at the knife, he made his final decision, and dug the blade deep into his heart, and slumped down, lifeless. Now, this might have already ended, but the author want's to get a point across here.

Even though you may feel like doing this, don't. Don't give into the pressure the world throws onto your shoulderz. It may seem hopelless to dream, to think, to breathe. But don't give in. You are perfect the wasy you are, and don't ever let anyone tell you differently.

The boys name was Harry Potter, by the way. He gave into the pressure, and when hte blonde, Draco Malfoy, found him, he was heartbroken.

Just like Draco, people would be heartbroken if you wer to take your own life, and they mosrt likely would follow you down your bpath. Don't give up, and dont give in.


now, to my readers who are actually nice, This is what my writing somewhat looks like before I edit and fix. It's a lot better than normal for me, because it usuallly would have lots of mispalced letters.