A\N: This is a rewrite of my original Naruto Kitten series. By rewrite, I am starting over from scratch, looking at the original and deciding what I want to keep and what to change. One thing being changed is that this version is no longer a self-insert. Now that I am more confident in my writing skills, I'd like to work more on making my own characters. I'll be leaving the original up just because I know people like it, and as a comparison for this one.
I hope you all enjoy this version.
If you'd like a bio of this OC then please let me know in the comments.
Key:
Thought
writing
*random sounds*
(3rd Person POV)
"Have a good shift Dylan!" A young woman shouts at her coworker while running out the door into the light rain.
"Thanks. You have a good evening Dawn!" He replies to her just before the door shuts.
The girl, Dawn, pulls her hair out of the bun she likes to wear while doing certain tasks at work, pulls a teal ribbon out of her skirt pocket, and ties her hair in to an over the shoulder ponytail. The bit of water that has already partially soaked her ashy brown hair made it shine in a somewhat pretty way in the lights from buildings that she passes. While walking, the she quietly sings to herself some of the songs she had heard in a recent Twitch stream and had gotten stuck in her head.
Dawn's car is in a public parking structure, the businesses in this area don't all have parking lots (ones you can park in for free) nor a lot of street space. The parking structure she left her car in just charged for general parking, and not per minute like quite a few places closer to her place of work. While walking she stops at a Dutch Bros for a hot albino red velvet breve to warm her up a little, and just because she likes them.
The rain picks up a bit when she is roughly a block away from the structure, much to her dismay. Despite getting wetter faster, Dawn keeps the same pace. Luckily for her, many of the buildings she is going to pass of awnings to offer brief protection from the weather.
Upon arriving at the building, Dawn immediately heads inside the small office area, where the elevator is, and tosses her empty coffee cup in a trash bin located near the entrance of the area. One short ride to the fourth level later and the young woman's dull green eyes scan the rows of cars for her own. Lucky for her, she parked fairly close to the elevator and was in her car in less than 10 minutes.
The drive home is uneventful, besides a person behind her getting pissed of at her for stopping to let a couple of geese cross the road.
(Dawn's POV)
Finally! Home!
"First things first, I need to drop my stuff before my arms fall off!" I mumble to myself as I just plop them on the couch.
Not even a minute later I am trudging up the stairs with only one thing on my mind, BED! Normally my work isn't that exhausting, but there had been new release in a popular book series last week as well as in flux of students that usually come in this time of year for a multitude of different books for varying reasons (discounts, projects, tests, etc.), so this last few days have been busier than usual and the next week or 2 will probably be the same.
As soon as I step foot in my room, I immediately strip down to my bra and panties and toss my clothes in the hamper next to the dresser. The big t-shirt I wore to bed last night is still on my bed so I decide to just throw it on and remove my bra after it is on (I have some nosy neighbors and my curtains don't close all the way, I don't know if they can see me, but I'd rather not chance them seeing me nude).
Within minutes I am snuggled up under my cocoon of blankets and cuddling my Totoro plushie. The sounds of the storm outside help ease me to sleep.
(? POV)
A figure in dark clothing stands out in the rain, a rather large box held tightly in its hands.
Seems like this is the place. Hopefully no on saw me following the girl, or sees me leaving this here.
The figure walks up to the front door of a small home and places the box down on the porch, where it is out of the rain, with a note taped to the side.
"Enjoy the surprise." the figure chuckles to itself before leaving.
Besides the storm, everything is so quiet, almost as if no one was just there.
A\N: I hope you enjoyed this first chapter. Any and all positive feedback is encouraged.
