Hey all!! This is the very first chapter of my story. I'm so excited! I know my stories aren't exactly amazing, but I really hope you all will read it and review it. If you've read this story before, then you might notice it's different from the first time you read it. I really didn't like the story at all, so I decided to redo it all. I promise that this time my writing will be 100 times better than it was previously. I hope you all like it, and please don't write ant terribly mean reviews. I don't really take criticism extremely well sniff.

Disclaimer: Lucky me! I own...absolutely nothing in this story unless you don't recognize it. There will be some new characters added on later, and the plots all mine, but other than that, I own jack. It all belongs to the talented J.K. Rowling.

Good Morning Sunshine:

Lily Evans woke up early to the bright light streaming out of her mansion window on September 1. Today was her first day of her forth year at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Lily's red hair was curled into tight ringlets down her back. They reached her mid-back but nobody knew it because she always kept her hair in a very loose messy bun at the base of her neck. Her sparkling green eyes were hidden by horrid granny glasses. Then there was the fact that she was definitely the fattest girl in her whole year, and possibly the whole school. Lily was the most disgusting loser in Hogwarts, but Lily had changed.

This year, Lily looked much different than she had before. She had worked harder than anyone before her to lose all of the fat on her. She was 5'8" and only weighed about 130 pounds (A/N: Hey, that's pretty skinny. I'm 5' 7" inches, weigh 130, and my doctor's have asked me if I was anorexic before. I wasn't, and neither is Lily. She just worked hard.). She bought clear contacts so her eyes could still sparkle without having to be covered by the horrid glasses. She also now let her hair flow gracefully down her back.

Lily had only one reason for changing, and that same reason made her wish she didn't change. When she was a loser she didn't have to worry about anyone finding out her deepest and darkest secret, now that she was beautiful, and she knew it, she might ending up having friends, and people finding out her secret. Not a sole knew her secret, and hoped to keep it that way for their own safety (A/N: Well, actually her family and Dumbledore knew, but they weren't in danger because her family were all muggles and would have no effect on the wizarding community, also Dumbledore was Dumbledore.). She was wanted by Voldemort. She knew he wanted her to be brought back to him alive where he could torture her. About 4 years ago, Voldemort sent his most loyal deatheater to kill her. In an effort to protect Lily her father, Richard, stepped in front of the deatheater. The deatheater immediately killed him. The then went after Lily. He shouted a killing spell at her, but it rebounded and hit the deatheater. He, not being as powerful as Voldemort, was killed instantly. Lily was left with a tiny scar on the right side of her chest (A/N: sound familiar.). Now Voldemort wanted revenge for his most trusted deatheater. Not only did he want to kill her, but all of those who knew. Voldemort didn't want anyone to tell the Ministry of magic before he was able to get her. If you knew, you died.

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Twenty minutes after Miss Evans, Mr. James Potter woke up from a deep sleep from his room in his mansion. James has messy, black hair. His hair was the kind that could never stay in place, even with a whole bottle of hair gel, but that just added to his appearance. He had stunning chocolate brown eyes that every girl at school could just melt in. He wore small round glasses, but they didn't make him look like a geek at all. He was the seeker on the best Gryffindor quidditch team Hogwarts ever had. He also had an amazing body. He was every girl's dream guy. James Potter was the hottest guy in Hogwarts.

Right after him, was his very best friend, Sirius Black. Sirius had dark, almost black, hair that almost reached his shoulders. His brown eyes also sparkled like James'. He was a chaser on the same quidditch team. He was the school's biggest joker and the school's biggest player (A/N: In this category, James was second.). The two boys' other best friend was Remus Lupin. He was also very hot with sandy, blonde hair, and deep, blue eyes. He was also very strong, but not on the quidditch team. He was tired constantly, and he disappeared once a month. This was because he was a werewolf. Only his three dorm mates knew this, for the past year they have been trying to become animagus so they could join him during his painful transformation. Then there was Peter. He wasn't hot or athletic like the rest of the Gryffindors. He was short and fat. His brown hair covered his eyes, and always seemed to stick together. He was also good friends with the rest of his dorm mates, though nobody was quite sure why. The four boys called themselves the marauders. They were players, jokers, and the hottest guys in school. Except for Peter, that is.

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For the first time ever, Lily took time to get ready for her first day. She wanted to be able to make a great impression with her new looks. She took a nice, long shower using rose scented shampoo, conditioner, and soap. After that she decided to get dressed. She wore an emerald green double spaghetti strap shirt that criss-crossed down her back until it reached the rest of her shirt right under her shoulder blades. She also wore black, silk pants that flared out slightly at the bottoms. She also wore black, two-inch sandals to try and help pull the outfit together. On top of that, she wore a tiny lily on her neck, attached to a petite gold chain. The necklace was so special to her, her cost so much. It was her latest birthday present from her dad before he died. She tied her hair up into an elegant twist, leaving a few curled tendrils falling down her face. Next she did her make-up. She wore a light pink lip-gloss, light green eye shadow, and a slight bit of darker green eyeliner. Finally she put on her new Gryffindor robes, which she left unbuttoned, to show off her new body. She looked amazing.

Walking down the stairs she saw her mom, Mara, cooking and sister, Petunia, sitting grouchily at the kitchen table. "Good morning sunshine," said her mom, "Are you excited for your first day back?"

"Hey you freaky bitch." sneered Petunia.

"Petunia! Don't be so mean to your sister, you are not going to see her for 3 months!" screamed Mara.

"No really, its okay Mom." smiled Lily, "Hey Mom, hey Petty. I'm so excited for starting school this year. I wonder if anyone will be able to recognize me this year. I really hope they don't. It'd be so cool to see their faces once they realize who I am. I just don't know what I would say if anyone asked me why I changed. I probably just say that my doctor told me to or something. I really don't know what I would say. Petty, I really wish that you could come to my school; I know that you would absolutely love. Even though you would get made fun of more than I did last year. I'm sure you wouldn't care."

"Lily, that nice rule applies to you too."

"Sorry Mom."

"It's okay, but you have to slow down when you talk. Come, sit down and eat some strawberries and waffles with us." Lily sat down and ate with her mom and sister. Then she asked if they could go to King's Cross Station, but not before commenting on how good the strawberries and waffles were. Petunia of course, had to come for the ride. She didn't want to miss saying good-bye to her "favorite sister".

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James woke up and then took a shower. He hurried to change into loose black pants, a loose black shirt, and his Gryffindor robes. He ate a quick breakfast with his parents before hurrying to meet up with his three best friends at King's Cross. He just barely made it on time. His friends were waiting for him just outside.

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So what do you think? Is it good? Is it bad? I think it's better than my first one at least. Please review if you like it. Thanks a ton.

Sophia