Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach or any of it's characters.

This is a short poem I wrote about Toshiro & Karin.

This one is in Karin's point of view.


You left not long after
we became good friends.
True friendship, you had said,
can last forever.

You gave me a pendant
as a parting gift. The stone
so cold, yet never seemed to
affect me.

It's part of my soul,
you had said. I give it to
you as a promise. So you
know I'll return for it.

A few hours ago the
energy the stone emitted
began to grow dimmer and
it lost its coldness.

Now, I watch the
sunset at your favorite
place. I hold the pendant
in my hand.

I remember when
we first met here, and
how we eventually became
good friends.

The sun has almost
vanished. Suddenly, the
wind whispers with your voice:
"I'm sorry"

The stone shatters.
Your Presence now gone.
Our friendship did not last
forever.


Please review & possibly give me ideas on what to write next.

I can provide this poem in Spanish if anyone wants the translation.

I am also considering writing this poem from Toshiro's point of view.

It all depends on whether anyone reads this poem or not.