This is my first Riddick story. Iv read some really good ones like one by Sweet Little Mary Sue. Shes really good. Im gonna try to not go with the story errr movie but im gonna use same plot. I hope yall like it. Even though itll never be as good as Mary Sue's

Chapter 1

Oh and when you see this "..." In the middle of two paragraphs, its my way of switching from first person POV to narrating Riddick...enjoy:)

Curiosity

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Getting on board the Hunter Gatzer was not in my original plan, it was just a spur of the moment decision. I had to get off this planet! I scolded myself, its been years and im still running.

It seemed that I was the last to board when all I could find was one empty cryochamber. I didnt care how long this was going to take to get wherever they were going, so I didnt bother asking.

I looked at a man while walking by and saw he was quietly securing a chamber beside mine that had a warning labels ont it.

"It looks like you drew the short straw." The man said not looking at me." With this one beside you. You better sleep with your eyes open."

"and why is that?" I asked taking my hair out of its ponytail so I could get comfortable.

"this one is highly dangerous, he's a murderer."

I guess I didnt react the way he had expected because he gave me a weird look when I just said "oh ok."

"you say that now, just wait till you find out who he is and how many people he's killed." It looked like he was going to continue but stopped when I walked past him and peered into the dark tube. I couldnt see anything and couldnt risk giving myself away.

"killed people huh?" I said boredly." Been there, done that."And that was the truth. I threw my pack into the bottom of the chamber and stepped in to situate myself and ignored the guys grumbling.

"smartass bitch." He mumbled.

I was about to shut the door but one voice caught my attention at the last second.

" letting a little girl get to ya johns? It was a deep muscular voice followed by a chuckle leaving me wondering just what that guy looked like.

"screw off. " the guy i assume is Johns and I watched as he walked away

Strapping in, I replayed that voice and chuckle over and over till I was sure that mostly everyonr was asleep. while letting out a breath, I let my eyes fade to their real color. Keeping them green and normal looking was exhausting. I had to keep from letting people see the real me. I couldnt afford to be noticed.

Once my eyes changed so did my vision.

And I heard the chuckle again.

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Riddick replayed the scene between Johns and the girl. He knew she wasnt human. He could smell it on her. It was vaguely familiar. he observed her attire. Black shirt, black skin-tight capris and flat-footed low- cut black shoes. She didnt have an hourglass figure but she was obviously well endowed in some areas. His instincts were proven right when he watched her gently press herself against the glass to pear in.

He watched as she looked in with a calm face and didnt even bat an eye. She seemed nornal till she leaned back to turn aeay and he caught a glimps of not-so-human eyes. She smelt different for a split second. He listened to her admit to a supposed 'lawman' that she had killed people and he brushed it off as her being a smartass.

He couldnt help but comment and chuckle.

Soon everyone was slumbering except of course for him and the girl. He could read her breathing patterns. Then he smelt that particularly good smell again, oh yeah she wasnt human. He chuckled again, knowing she could hear him.

He was curious to what exactly she was, he decided he'd resume waiting patiently for the right time ro make his move and get the hell outta dodge. And along the way, maybe figure her out.

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"Midnight." I heard my mother calling." Midnight where are you?"

"Right here!" I called out cheerfully jumping out of the tree above my father and mother and landed on his shoulders.

" hello there Nightingale." He said greeting me with my nickname. One of the many things I like to do since i was little was wait till night at midnight and sing with the bird known as a Thrush, a migratory bird with dull feathers that always came around this time of year.

As we laughed, everything suddenly went to caos. We took off running in every direction we could. In every alleway we came upon thr soldiers of our enemy.

Me and my mother hid as we watched them carry away my father.

We didnt listen to them so they claimed our planet.

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He listened to her wimper everyonce in a while she sounded frieghtend like a child. He wondered if she knew she talked in her sleep.

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I felt myself shaking and opened my eyes to find that my chamber was rattling because the ship was going to hell. Around me I could see parts of the ship flying away and cryochambers being ripped fron the ship.

I franticly detached my straps and pushed the release button, but it wouldnt budge. I wasnt going to die here, not now. I brought my foot up and held a deep breath as I kicked the glass repeaditly till it shattered.

I climbed to get out, but immediatly the tube came apart from the ship and I watched as I began to fly out. then a strong arm shot out and grabbed my wrist.

With his one hand he pulled me up to eye level. I peered into his goggles and felt a tad strange.

"pretty eyes." He smirked and sat me on my feet.

"thanks for saving me, I-"

I was inturrupted when the ship crashed sending me and the man I realized was the criminal 'Johns' was talking about, into a wall and he landed against me painfully.

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Riddick groaned as he pealed himself away from the girl as he looked to see that his crotch landed on her knee. He didnt hurt easily, she must be strong. He inspected her and saw her rubbing her forhead. He realized the impact caused them to headbutt really hard. Aparently she didnt hurt easily either.

He saw that they soon would have company so he acted fast.

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I fished out my mirror conpact and checked out my forhead and noticed my eyes were still pitch black.

"shit!" I wispered." How long were the unchanged? Shit! I didnt even notice the vision change!"

I noticed that someone was coming up behind me. So I willed the blackness to turn into a human eyes with green irises.

I turned around.

" im Johns." The man said "have you seen Riddick. A man in all black, bald, muscly? Hes very dangerous."

"sir, you just discribed my dream boy, so no I havent seen him."

"it appears we have crashed." A man in robes said."iam Imam."

"Midnight." I said rubbing my forhead again.

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So theres the first chapter. I hope you like it. Please tell me if i made anykind of mistake. I dont care about grammar as much as facts so id appreciate it if any mistake could be brought to attention and also I like to write what people want to read so im open to all yalls ideas. So please review:)

TheSpazChik.