A/N: Hi, it's Maggie! This is my first story, so I hope it's good.
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Chapter 1) Surprise
Renesmee's POV
The sunlight was blinding while in shone through the slightly opaque skylight above my canopy bed. I squinted my eyes closed, and pulled the comforter over my head. I wanna sleep!!! I thought, complainingly. I tossed and turned for maybe ten more minutes, when my mom came in to check on me.
"Renesmee, darling, are you awake?" Mom's head was just poking through the door.
"NO!" I responded. My mother giggled quietly. She shook her head, laughing still, and sighed,
"Well, since it's your birthday, I'll let you sleep in, but if you want your surprise…" Surprise! She said surprise! I bolted upright, grinning.
"I'm wide awake, Mom!" She gave another laugh.
"Get ready, or I'll send Alice in to help you get dressed!" She was joking, but the warning was sincere.
"Okay, I don't want that." I waltzed over to my closet, excitedly. A surprise!!! Just as I was pulling out jeans and a t-shirt, I heard footsteps at the door of my closet.
"You need help getting dressed! No! Put that back, you're most certainly not wearing that! Here, what about this…" She was talking so fast, even I had a hard time keeping up. I rolled my eyes. "Alright, Ness, wear this," she said, holding an outfit up to my body. It was a stunning outfit, truthfully, but I was too eager to get downstairs to appreciate its elegance.
The top was a rose colored blouse, which flowed out from the waist. It was a beautiful shade which "really complimented my golden curls" according to Alice. I slipped it on, careful not to wrinkle it. The bottom, a short, dark, denim skirt that clung tight to my skin was cute. It was designer, no doubt. I pulled it up my legs and adjusted it into place. Then, Alice took me to the bathroom to pull my hair up and do my makeup.
"Downstairs for your surprise, kiddo! It's not everyday you turn 5!" She smiled. Five! More like fifteen! I looked fifteen, anyways.
"Kay, I'm coming!" I was bouncing with excitement. Maybe, Dad and Mom bought me a car! That pink one! Or maybe…well, it just had to be the car! It was what I wanted most. As I headed downstairs, I didn't think that a party would be my gift. Not at all.
But when I arrived at the bottom of the stairwell, a party couldn't have been a better gift! Crowded around were the usuals; Mom, Dad, Alice, Jasper, Emmett, Rosalie, Gramma Esme, and Grampa Carlisle. But I didn't expect other guests! Jacob! My Jacob, who had been at La Push for months (we had moved away from Forks). My Jacob stood with open arms. I jumped into them, and I held him tight. Then, I scanned the room. Tanya, Kate, Garrett, Carmen, Eleazer. The whole Denali clan was here. And Grampa Charlie! I went around giving out hugs.
"Wow! Thanks everyone for coming! I can't believe you are all here!" I told everyone.
"Well, we couldn't miss our 'niece's' fifth birthday!" Tanya said.
"Fifteenth," I reminded her.
"Ooooh! We should have a quinceañera!" Added Carmen.
"Ah-no," I replied, not interested in any big parties, praying Alice wouldn't want me to have one. Yeah, right!
"Great idea! Nessie, we need to start planning!" Alice was squealing with excitement.
"Thanks, Carmen," I muttered sarcastically.
"No problem, chicka!" [Did I spell chicka right???] He smiled. I rolled my eyes playfully.
"Present time!" Emmett yelled, throwing a miniature box onto my lap. I stared at it, puzzled.
"This is from all of us," explained Gramma.
I tore open the box. It jingled. Keys. Keys…Keys!
"Oh My God! You got me the car!!! Oh My Gosh! Oh My God, I LOVE you all so MUCH! Ahh!!!" I couldn't control my happiness. My dad was the first to speak.
"There are rules…" he began, though I didn't let him finish.
"Don't ruin the moment, Dad!" I rolled my eyes, smiling.
"Let me finish. The rules are…until you get your license, you must ride with another person in the car, and I get to come with you for the first spin!" He smiled. I hugged him. They weren't unreasonable rules.
"C'mon, let's go!" I pulled my dad's wrist.
"Okay, c'mon." We set off for the car, both completely psyched. [okay, psyched is an odd word, but whatever.]
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3~Maggie
