PLEASE READ WARNING:
I have to warn you this story contains rape/non-consent violence. So anyone who has suffered abuse I'm very sorry for what happen to you. I do not recommend that you read this fic. This story may include some trigger to rape/non-con For those that find rape scenes too hard I recommend you skip the first chapter as it's very graphic and quite strong. Still I will warn when the violence starts in case you want to skip from them on. I am in no way condoning the terrible act of rape and I apologize if I offend anyone during the writing of this fic.
This story is very conflicting. I have a hate love relationship with this fic. I spent more than a year debating with myself whether to write this fic. Because I'm completely against rape and if I think all rapists should be shot in where the sun don't shine like that grandma did. Fortunately this isn't real life and this didn't happen to Mercedes or Sam. I am aware this happens to people every day and I pray every day for the violence to stop.
After more than a year debating with myself, I finally gave in and wrote it because I couldn't get it out of my head. I warn you, you will hate Sam, you will hate Mercedes but hopefully in the end you will at least like them; though I'm not holding my breath. Throughout this story there will be controversial topics that not everyone will agree with and sometimes some situations will be unrealistic. Bare in mind that this is base on a telenovela and not real life so some situations have been altered to fit this story.
This story is base on the telenovela Leonela own by América Producciones. I wrote some things differently because I didn't agree with many of the points they made and how some of the situations were handled, they seem outrageous, outdated and chauvinistic so I wrote it how I saw fit. Still I left some things that I didn't agree with because I though they made a good point. The telenovela is based on the 80s, early 90s but I decided to write it in modern times.
I know most of you won't agree or like it and I welcome constructive criticism but if you're writing just to tell me to go kill myself keep it to yourself cause I'm not interested. I warned you this was violent and very graphic.
Chapter one
Mercedes Jones has had a sheltered life. All her life has been safe, privilege and happy. Being an only child, she was the apple of her parent's eye. Her parents were amazing and wanted the best for their daughter. Since she was a child she was home schooled by the best teachers money could afford. By fifteen she had reach her senior year and she begged her parents to let he go to school with other students. Of course if she wanted to learn something new they would gladly pay for it, but wouldn't let her quit. Whatever she wanted all she had to do was ask. As soon as she got her license she got a brand new car. She loved her family and her life and wouldn't change a thing. All her life they had protected her, cuddle her and she allowed it. She didn't know any other life. At the age of twenty she enter law school, her parents were beyond proud.
Now three years later she just graduated law school in the top ten of her class this morning. She had her friends, her family and she was getting married. Right now she was with her friends and her fiancé celebrating her engagement to her fiancé Shane Tinsley. They've been together two years. Her dad introduced them when Mercedes was a freshman in law school and he was the son of one of his clients. Last December he asked her to marry him. Mercedes was beyond happy and said yes and they set a date for after she graduated. Both her parents and his were extremely happy and their mothers immediately started planning their wedding for the next summer after her graduation. And here she was now graduating law school and getting married in three weeks. Truthfully life couldn't be better for her.
Sam Evans has lived a hard life. Both his mother and father worked to support him and his twin brother and Sister Steve and Stacy. With barely a high school education they couldn't get better paying jobs other than construction worker or cashier. His family might be poor but what they lacked in money they made up for in love. His mom and dad always made sure to let their children know how much they love them and how blessed they were to have each other. Even when they didn't have much his, parents always made sure to have a present for each of them in Christmas and on birthdays.
Still life wasn't easy for Sam or his family. He failed the second grade and the next school years weren't any better. His classmates called him dumb. He's teachers always say he was smart, if only he applied himself. He tried; he tried and tried to understand the words and letters until he was blue in the face. Eventually he just gave up and went through the system unnoticed that he couldn't read.
The first few years he would just copy his friends homework, then as he got older and into sports, it seem his classmates worship him and his coach got other kids to do his homework for him, so he could only focus on practicing sports. Even when he got a bad grade it didn't seem to matter, he was still allowed to play. He would ask his coach why, but his coach would always tell him it didn't matter. But it matter to him. Despite the being popular and like by most of his classmates Sam felt dumb and insecure. He knew he couldn't read and he was envious when his classmates would stand full of confidence in front of the class and read from a book, when he always had to make up some excuse not to read.
His dreams of becoming pro shattered when his dad lost his job. He had recently being hire at a new construction company. Despite only having a high school diploma his experience got him the job. The company even convinced the workers to invest in the company with promises of returning their money with interest. The workers with the promise of a better tomorrow for their kids signed over their savings and their homes. But some bad business dealings from a rookie made things complicated. It was either take responsibility for their mistake and lose money and reputation or blame the workers and let them go with empty pockets. Of course they choose to fill up their pockets and leave the workers with nothing but clothes on their backs. A month later his mom lost her job as well.
With the bad rep on the workers it was hard for his dad to find work. His old company had been bought by the new company. With his dad and mom out of work he was force to get an afterschool job. A few months later his dad was offered a new job from an old friend in a new city. Sam and his family move and he got a job at dairy queen. Then there was an accident at the construction site and his dad was hospitalized. Now his dad was in a wheelchair and couldn't find a good job that didn't' require some type of degree. Losing everything they ended up living in a motel for a couple of months. His job wasn't enough and he had to drop out to school to work full time. His mom got a new job but that also wasn't enough. The new city was more expensive witch meant the money wasn't enough. A few months later they had to move to a trailer park. Sam didn't like it, they were too many scoundrels around and he was afraid for his family. Especially because of the gangs in the neighborhood. More than once they tried to get him to join and he refuse. He wanted to get his family out of here before they would come after his little brother instead him.
The dairy queen where he worked closed down and he had to look for work. It seems that the last five years all his family ever did was look for work. While looking for work he met Noah or Puck as he likes to be called. Puck worked as a mechanic and knowing how hard it was for him to find work, took pity on Sam. Sam was a quick study and soon learned to change tires, oils, fix engines and just about anything to do with cars. It was a good paying job and things seem to be getting better. His dad got a job as a customer service representative for a chain hardware store and his mom had a part time job as a receptionist. Together they saved enough to move to a small house.
The only time his life seem happy was when his parents had work and he was in school. And not even completely happy as he had to hide the fact that he couldn't read, that he felt dumb and fake because he couldn't be himself with them. If they knew he was a dork underneath they would never let him leave it down. While he had a steady girlfriend in high school, nowadays girls like him for the moment; as soon as they found someone with more money they dump his ass as not good enough.
All this years of one bad thing after another happening to his family had made Sam angry and bitter. He was still a good guy, but deep inside laid a rage that had being building ever since his dad got screw over by that company. He remembers going to the company screaming for them to take responsibility for their mistake. His family had lost everything because of them while they got a big fat paycheck. He was so angry security had to take him out of the building. It seems his whole life was one disappointment after another. He was poor, he was dumb, his family was in the streets, he had to find work, he was always angry. He was able to hide it very well from his family and friends, even able to fool himself sometimes, but that resentment wouldn't leave him, it would only grow with each disappointing day in his life. All his life he felt like a failure. Nothing ever goes his way and he was tire of it. He was tire of being put down and stepped on. He was sick of being knocked down. Of people taking advantage of him and his family. He would always hear it on the news. Big companies doing illegal things and always get away with everything. They just think they can step on you because you're poor. Most of all he was tire of people looking down on him. He was tire of not being heard and being put down and stepped on because he wasn't smart enough. He felt his rage grow each passing day.
Mercedes and Shane were celebrating their engagement in a yacht with their close friends. Mercedes friends Kitty and Sugar where inside the yacht with her aunt. "I can't believe our Mercedes is getting married."
"I for one think Mercedes couldn't have gotten a better catch. Rich, successful other than losing a little weight on both their parts what more could she ask for" said her aunt.
"How come your husband is not here?"
"My husband prefers business. He said he would feel out of place in party full of youngsters."
"What is he talking about; you're so youthful Mrs. Jones."
"I know." Replied Lisa with duh tone in her voice. "And please don't call me Mrs. Jones it makes me feel old."
Later Sugar and Kitty are out enjoying the party. "Look at these old hags, it's ridiculous."
"Mrs. Jones doesn't look that old."
"She's got a fifteen year old daughter."
"What?"
"Don't you remember Tara, she sent her to boarding school in Europe so she could travel and live her life without complications. Now there's no way she wants to bring her back so nobody could figure just how old she is." They laugh.
They saw Quinn getting a glass of champagne and rolled their eyes and looked at her with disgust.
"I can't believe Mercedes chose her as her maid of honor." Says Kitty with disdain.
"I know, what that hell was she thinking."
"Doesn't she care that she's embarrassing herself by making the help the maid of honor."
"Apparently not. I swear I don't see what's so special about that piece of white trash."
"God they are so annoying, I'm smart and I have law degree. When are they going to learn that there are easier and more fun ways to get what you want?"
"Well Mercedes got the law degree and the man she wants so she must be doing something right."
"Shut up." Said Kitty spitefully. She saw Mercedes and Shane, they were smiling happily. She looked wishfully as they hugged and kissed.
"Damm Mercedes is one lucky girl." Says Kitty looking wishfully at Shane.
"What? Are you envious of Mercedes?"
"God no, of the millions Shane has. Can you imagine? She will have to worry for nothing. She won't have to lift a finger her entire life."
"Here comes to future bride and groom." Announced Quinn, Mercedes best friend and maid of honor.
Mercedes comes pulling Shane with her, both of them smiling. He gives her a champagne glass and they clink their glass and drink. They share a kiss and everybody applause."
"Everything has been given to her on a silver platter." Says Kitty looking at Mercedes.
"Silver, no. Gold is more like it." She says looking at the couple sharing a kiss.
"It's so hot today. I feel like a thirsty man in the desert. Why did you bring to a beach so far?" Said Sam walking with his buddy Puck on the hot sand.
"It's the atmosphere man. Look at this beach, have you ever seen so many hot girls at once. Who knows today could be your lucky day." Puck replied excited.
"Shut up, isn't this supposed to be a private beach? And where the hell I'm I suppose to put my clothes."
"Here, we'll put our clothes behind this rock and come back and get them later."
"Yeah whatever."
"We get a couple of beers and mingle a little. They will be in the palm of our hands in no time."
"Sorry I gave the little money I had to my mom, so she could go to the market. I barely got enough to feed myself and get back."
"Lucky enough for you, I only need to feed myself. So beers are on me."
Soon enough they were playing volleyball with a group of girls in Malibu beach. Puck was right once they mingle a little and work their charm the girls flock to them and entertain them.
Mr. Jones arrives at his home and sees her wife at the phone, she hangs up. "Hi sweety. Just preparing a few details for the wedding." She said excited as she hugs him.
"Sometimes I think it's you the one getting married instead of your daughter."
"Everything has to be perfect for my baby."
"Yes, we've been blessed with a beautiful woman for a daughter that I couldn't be more proud of. You're right. Our baby doll deserves the best"
"And she has the best. She's beautiful, intelligent, sophisticated, was on the deans list, and she's going to have a great marriage. Shane is going to make her very happy. Our daughter has everything to make her the happiest woman in the world."
"I wouldn't' have any other way." Said her dad proud.
"I'm just thinking about the grand kids we'll be having soon." Said Mrs. Jones excitedly.
"Wait till they get marry first dear." He said chuckling.
Sam was sitting on a bench waiting for Puck when he saw the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. It was like love at first sight. Her smile was just breathtaking. Sam just stares in awe of her natural beauty. As she passes by him, Sam couldn't help but notice she was wearing a black and white bathing suit that hugged all her god given curves. Her body was so tone yet she wasn't like the girls he had been hanging out today. No she had meat in her bones; she looks so beautiful and confident. He could tell she embrace her curves and wore them tall and proud. She didn't notice him but he couldn't' stop staring at her; she was going to be his wife someday.
Once Puck got back, he convinced Sam to stay a little longer hoping to get laid. While Puck seemed to be in his element Sam couldn't stop thinking about the girl he saw. Puck was not happy with his wing-man, they are fawning over him but he didn't seem to care. After getting hit in the head Sam tried to pay attention when one of them asked him what he did for a living. As soon as he told them that he was a mechanic, their attitude changed. They look down on him. As he was less than them for not being rich like them. Most of them left saying they don't socialize with hillbillies. Sam rather not get in trouble with the police and convinced Puck to leave. They got their clothes and changed. They were leaving the beach when one of came over and offered him money to have sex with her. Sam noticed it was the one who was insulting him earlier. She still looks down on him but lusted after him too. Too bad for her he told her that he's not for sale, looking disgusted with her.
The spoiled brat got angry and slapped him. She started insulting him again calling him white trash, cracker, redneck and every derogatory term she could think off to humiliating him. She called her private security to kick him and Puck out.
After getting kick out of the beach Sam and Puck found a local restaurant and went in to eat.
"Come on Sam, you killing my mood with your bad mood."
"How I'm I not going to be in a bad mood after what happen."
"Don't let those crazy bitches get to you. Though I got to admit, they were hot…
"Oh please they weren't much to look at. Trust me they could never compare with a girl I saw earlier today." He said with dreamy smile.
"Really. What's her name?" asks Puck curious and excited for his friend.
"I don't know, all I know is I can't get her out of my mind."
"But you didn't talk to her?"
"No man, honey wasn't made for donkeys. She was different from any girl I've ever laid eyes on. She has class. She was so beautiful, elegant, sophisticated…" he kept going with a dreamy look on his face.
After getting off the boat and showering off the sand and salt of the beach. Mercedes and her guess left for her family's private beach house. Her engagement party would continue there.
"Let's go home." Said Sam walking towards the bus stop.
"No, man. The night has just started. Get over your bad mood and let's go to the club. Look I know the bouncer. I fixed his car and we're sure to get in."
"No, man I'm tire."
"No, we are not going anywhere but to have some fun. Look what you need is to get laid."
"We have to work tomorrow." Insisted Sam.
"So, we are young. We can sleep a few hours and be up like nothing happen. It's not like we're getting drunk. So stop being so grumpy, put on that charming smile and let's get some hot girls to dance with."
Shane was waiting for Mercedes with their guess downstairs. He saw her walking down the stairs and couldn't help but stare in admiration. The girl knew how to rock a dress and look fine as hell.
"What took you so long?" He said kissing her in the lips.
"I was waiting for you and some of the guest to arrive before my grand entrance. Why don't we put on some music while we wait for the rest of the guess?"
"That sounds great."
They kissed "I love you." She said with an adoring smile.
"I love you too." He said smiling back at her.
After eating dinner people mingle for a while. Mercedes pull Shane to dance with her. Everybody could see how happy and carefree she was. After dancing to three songs Shane and Mercedes sat down at their table after dancing. "What's wrong baby, you're tire?" he asked.
"Yeah, last few weeks I had to study extremely hard and then getting ready for graduation and the wedding."
"But now that you've graduated and don't have to worry about studying you can relax and just focus on the wedding. I expect you to be well rested for our wedding night." They chuckle and kiss but it's interrupted by Mrs. Jones.
"Put the music down. Everybody gather around, I want to make a toast. Everybody grab a glass."
"To a future lawyer." Toasted Mercedes's uncle Hector, hoping she change her mind about not practicing law.
"Wait a minute; it's to my future wife." Said Shane
Some boo, and some cheer. People clink their glasses and drank to the couple.
Time pass and as it was getting late the guess started to leave. In the end there were only their closest friends left.
"Okay I'm officially out of booze." Said Mercedes.
"No, we're not ready for the party to be over."
"Then let's go to that new club they opened up last month. It's only a couple of minutes from here" Said Shane
"I'm down." Said Mercedes.
"Let's go."
Sam and Puck turned the corner when they saw their bus leave. They ran to catch but the bus didn't stop.
"Fuck, that was the last bus!" Screamed Sam.
"We seriously need to get some wheels man. What kind of mechanics are we, that we don't have a car."
"Well you at least have motorcycle, I got nothing. Let's just find a place to wait."
"Let's go to that club with the bouncer I told you about. It's around the corner and he will hook us up."
They went to the club and as Puck said the bouncer let them in right away which made the people waiting outside mad. They walked in checking the scenery and made their way to the bar.
"Two beers." Order Puck as they sat checking out the girls. Time pass and girls would flock to Sam and Puck. Puck was in his element while Sam was a bit shy and awkward with all the attention but after a few drinks he loosened up and they dance with a few girls. Later at the bar suddenly a bartender brought Sam a drink, saying somebody bought it for him. Sam wasn't sure but Puck didn't care and took the shot. Soon after the bar tender brought him a drink he hadn't order, again saying someone had bought for him but they wouldn't say who. He eyed the drink suspiciously.
"Come on man, there are no drugs in there, it came straight from the bar and you saw it being prepared. When was the last time you got free drinks?" Silence.
"Exactly so drink up and enjoy."
"Okay fine, but we cannot lose track of the time, I don't want to miss the next bus."
"Yeah whatever you say, drink, enjoy."
The drinks kept coming and he kept drinking. He was getting drunk and dancing with a brunette when someone pulled him into a dark corner and started kissing him and being all up in his business. For a second the image of the woman he saw at the beach crossed his mind and he stared kissing the person back with equal fervor. But somewhere inside his drunk mind he had some sense left and knew that it was impossible for her to be kissing him, especially since she doesn't know he exist. He pushed the person to see who it was that was all up in his business. To his surprise it was the bitch from the beach.
"Hello hillbilly." She said seductively trying to kiss him again. He didn't buy it.
"What the hell are you doing?"
"What I want." She tried to kiss him again but he pushed her back.
"Ok what the hell is your problem lady?" he asked remembering how she threw a fit this this afternoon and now is trying to seduce him.
"My problem is that nobody says no to me." She screams pushing him angrily.
"There's always a first time for everything so fuck you bitch." He said in her face.
She tried to slap him again but he stopped her arm and threw back "You're going to pay for that. You should consider yourself lucky that a girl like me is even offering all of this. You're nothing, a nobody, white piece of trash."
Puck who had just come out of the bathroom pulls Sam away from the crazy bitch. It seems like today is keep Sam out of trouble day.
Sam's was drunk and his mood just got worst, Puck tried to distract him by telling him about the girl he bang in the bathroom as they walked to the bar.
"That was awesome dude, she was freaky." Sam just shook his head
One more and we go." Said drunken Sam, who could stand straight and for the most part. Puck could see his friend's mind was gone when he started talking gibberish. Not that his speech was slur, what he was saying just didn't make sense. He was angry at the world that much he could tell. Which surprise Puck, since he's friend has always been a nice and mellow. He knew how drunk people could explode if they got mad so he just played along and kept an eye on his friend.
Arriving at the club Shane's phone rang and he chose to stay behind while the others went to the VIP area. After a few minutes waiting Mercedes decides to go look for him. He wasn't outside, so she went back inside and saw him at the bar. She went after him next thing she knows her fiance is punching a blond guy and a fight broke out.
Sam and Puck lost their seats when Sam got up to dance and Puck went to the bathroom with the girl and now while Puck is dancing with that same girl he was waiting to get the bartender's attention along with other people.
"Two beers." He said almost falling forward. He had to watch his step. Sam shook his head trying to shake the drunkenness away.
Suddenly this dude cuts Sam in front of Sam. "Bottle of your finest whiskey." Order the man, looking entitle. The bartender got his order right away.
"Hey what the hell, I was here first!" yelled angrily trying to cut Shane.
"And I should care why? Do yourself a favor white boy get the hell out of my way." Said Shane pushing him out of the way. Sam pushed him back making Shane drop the bottle.
"You little bitch." Shane punches Sam in the face. A crowd gathers and Puck who sees the commotion from the dance floor tries to go see what's going on. "Shane what that hell are you doing?" Ask a very loud and angry voice. . Sam turned to see who it was. He eyes widen when he saw it was the beauty from the beach. He was mesmerized until he felt another punch in his face knocking him down.
"Shane Tinsley."
That name Sam knew that name; it was the name of the company that screwed over his dad and all the workers. Because of them his life has been a punch after another without letting him get back up. "Not this time." Sam got up and tried to punch him back, but was punched in the stomach instead. Puck tries to get to Sam but people won't let him through.
"Shane lets him go, he's drunk." Said Mercedes pulling him out.
"Where are you going, come back you coward." Sam ran after him and Puck follows him outside stops him from going further.
"Sam you're drunk. Your senses are shot; you can't fight like you're used to. Sam, where are you going, don't you know who that is. That was a UCLA's star quarterback, where you going, to get pummel some more. SAM…" but Sam wouldn't listen to his friend.
Sam ran after them and Puck after him. "Sam, come back man."
"No let me go, Puck. That asshole destroyed so many lives. Everything went to shit when the Tinsley inc. screw over my dad. I'm not letting this go!" scream Sam in violent rage and pull away from his friend.
Sam saw them pull out in a car and took off after them. "Sam, the bus is going to be here any minute now. Sam…!" Scream Puck, but his drunken friend wouldn't listen.
"What the hell was that Shane?"
"Hey I was just getting a bottle of whiskey."
"You're were going to be in the VIP section, you could have just ordered from there. But no you had to go to the bar and start pummeling that poor man."
"Oh come on, don't start defending him."
"I'm not defending him; I'm just calling it like I saw it. You knew he was drunk and wasn't able to defend himself properly and you still beat him, that was brutal and it was uncalled for. You know how much I hate violence."
"Are you seriously going to let some white boy ruin our night?"
"You ruined it when you started fighting that man. You know what forget it goodnight Shane." She didn't let him get a word out. She got out of the car and went inside the beach house.
"Mercedes. Mercedes I'm sorry." He grabs her by her arm. "Hey sweetheart I said I'm sorry, believe me."
"I heard you."
"You're right I should have gone directly to the VIP section and order a drink from there. I'm sorry you have to see that side of me."
"I'm sorry too, I don't know what that man did but I don't think he deserved that."
"Let's forget about him and that stupid fight, please tell me you're not mad at me anymore."
"Yeah fine, I'm not mad."
"Good." and he kissed her. Her phone rang telling her she had a new text message.
"She went to her purse and text her friends back, explaining that she and Shane had left the club.
"It's being an extremely long day, you should go."
Shane nodded knowing he shouldn't push his luck. She walked him out and he kissed her before leaving in his car.
"Love you."
"Love you too."
Sam ran after the car, he ran as fast as he could. He lost the car soon after but his rage wouldn't' let him let it go. He wanted to confront the man, make him pay for destroy his family's life; make him pay for making him seem like a punk at the club.
After a few minutes running around trying to find the car he finally saw it. He saw them kissing outside her door. He didn't know why but he felt a strange feeling of possessiveness towards her. But that wasn't important, what was important was making that asshole pay for everything he had done. Sam thought his eyes full of rage and anger. He ran toward the beach house by the time he arrived he saw the man pull out of the driveway. He once again tried to follow but he was too tired. Breathing hard he heard the sea and went toward the empty beach to cool off his anger and didn't stop until he was touching the sand. He took off his shoes and ran towards the water. The water calmed him, but not entirely. Soon after he moved to the shore and lay on the sand. He felt the water touch his legs his back, and the back of his head; then rush back to the sea only to come back again. Sam turned his head and could not believe who was walking towards him. As soon as he saw her he remembers her kissing her boyfriend, her boyfriend who destroys everything. His anger and rage sore like never before and he got up surprising her who it seem hadn't notice him. She should know what kind of man she's involve with.
Mercedes changed into her sleepshirt, she could see the stars through her window, it was such a beautiful night, She stared to think about her life and her future decided to take a walk in the beach like she had done a few times before. Not aware of the dangers that awaited her. Her mind wondered as she walked.
I feel weird. It must be that this night has big significance for me. Hell the last twenty four hours have been a roller-coaster ride. I graduated from college. I celebrated my engagement, I'm officially getting married. Tonight I close a chapter of my life and tonight I start's a different chapter in my life.
Warning: violent and very graphic scene.
She turns and when she notices him she almost jumps out of her skin. His wet from head to toe, his blond shaggy hair fall all around his head and his shirt is open revealing his abs. Fear strikes her as she looks at the pure anger in his eyes.
"Please leave me alone." She swallows hard but it's trying sound confident. Why didn't she bring her phone with her?
"You're with him aren't you, with that guy that destroy my family, our lives!" he screams barely containing himself.
She shakes her head and she tries to run; but he catches her. "No, let me go! She screams her voice fill with fear. In struggling with him she falls on the sand. She moves away from him and gets up. "Look you asshole if you don't leave me alone. I'm going to the police and I'm going to bury your ass."
"You and your almighty sense of entitlement. Because of people like him, like you; is that we are always down. It's not enough that you're on top living comfortable lives, no, you have to screw everyone at bottom to fill your greedy pockets." Once again she runs but he gets in her way and grabs her slamming her against him. She can smell the alcohol in his breath. It's disgusting.
"Let go of me, get your hands off of me."
"You're disgusted aren't you?" she struggles to get away. "Why, I'm a man, I'm a human being just like him just like everybody else.
"You're a drunk that's what you are, do you have any idea who I am. I am…."
"You're a spoiled brat that needs to be taught a lesson along with you boyfriend."
"Where do you think you're going? You listen to me! He screams in anger. "He's not the man for you, he'll destroy you too, like he did with many families." Mercedes doesn't listen and as she manages to break free she runs like she has never before but he's taller and faster. No matter where she runs she can't escape him.
"Please let me go, please."
"Because of him my family lost everything, because of people like you. You that think you're better than everyone, do you know what it's like to struggle day in and day out to make ends meet, to earn a plate of food. Do you know how hard it is to try and try and no matter how hard you try you can't seem to get up from the misery." He screams holding her to him.
'Help me, somebody help me." she says shaking with fear. "What do you want? Help me" she screams shaking with fear. She keeps trying to get away but he's too strong she can't get away.
"What I want is revenge, retaliation! He's going to pay for everything he did!" All the anger, all the rage his being holding inside has finally come out and it wants someone to pay for everything bad that has happen to him.
Struggling they fall to the shore and struggle getting deeper into the water. "Help, me, somebody help me." She screams as she tries to get away but the water makes it more difficult. "Don't touch me." She keeps pushing him away and hitting him and scratching him. Anything to get him off of her. Crying she struggles out of the water and runs towards her home to get help. But no matter how hard she's trying she can't escape this nightmare she can't escape him. Tears run down her cheeks as angry drunk man catches up to her and makes her fall and he throws himself on top of her. "Let go of me."
He kisses her by force and she turns but he moves his mouth too. She pushes and scratches him so he grabs her arms holds them down with one hand. "Please don't do this." She begs him, struggling as she feels lift the skirt of her sleepshirt. "Stop." She tries to struggle but his full weight in on her. "Help me. Someone help me."
He ripped off her panties, and pushed her legs apart and settles between them her thighs ignoring her muffed screams and her struggle. "Stop, please." He ripped off one of her straps and lowered his lips to her neck and then her breast. He sucks nipple on one breast before moving to the other her. He bites breast; marking her. He unbuttons his pants and struggle to lower them down pulling out his thick cock. "Don't do this, please don't do this." She sobbed. She never felt so helpless in her life. The beast ignored her pleas. Sam was gone; the only thing left was the drunken monster full of anger and rage.
She kept struggling to get away but she could barely move. He slammed his cock into her balls deep breaking her barrier. Mercedes led out a piercing scream into the night. Not giving her much time to adjust to the sheer size of him, he began to move. Mercedes was screaming in excruciating pain, rejecting him.
Mercedes sobbed and scream and struggle. She was raw and tire but she wouldn't stop fighting. No matter how much she begged and screamed he wouldn't stop. He tried to kiss her but she would move her mouth away. She hated him; she never hated anyone before in her life. Her body tense and she didn't know what was happening all she knew was her body felt excruciating burning pain and pleasure.
Despite his rough savagery her body tense and shook, her pussy gush around his cock and in the midst of her scream she heard him groan. He didn't have long to wait before her legs tightened around his waist and she cried out release. With a loud grunt, he came, shooting his seed deep into her pussy. Panting, he groans loudly and passed out on top of Mercedes.
A few minutes after he passes out on top a broken Mercedes, she pushes herself out from under him. She gets up and stars limping to the beach house. She sobs in despair as she feels extremely sore. Even limping she can feel his cum running down her legs. Once inside she closes and locks the door behind her and collapses against the door and cries in despair. After crying for hours Mercedes gets up and doesn't know what to do with herself. She's out of it, walks further into the beach house like zombie. Mercedes is falling apart and she doesn't know what to do. A cold wind has her rubbing her arms and she feels dirty. She runs to the bathroom and takes off her tattler sleep shirt. She scrubs and keeps scrubbing. She wants to get his touch, his smell off of her. Her skin is red and raw, the water is cold but she keeps scrubbing.
Again I repeat I welcome constructive criticism but if you're writing just to tell me to go kill myself keep it to yourself cause I'm not interested. Again I apologize if I offended anyone.