Yo this is CoS writing my first F.F. and i hope to get lots of reviews and comments on my writing any non-exessive negative comments will be taken under consideration hope you like this.
Disclaimer I own nothing except my OC and any other non canon bleach and naruto things
T= regular, T= thoughts, T= jutsu /higher being
Chapter 1: A different beginning.
Start: Night of the Kyuubi attack.
Minato Namikaze the fourth Hokage (fire shadow) was having the best and worst night of his life. First he was a father to a son born no more than half an hour ago. Secondhis wife was captured by a masked man that can phase through solid objects. Minato had fought the masked man off, but not before he released the Kyuubi (nine tailed demon fox) from his now formerly pregnant wife Kushina. Minato knew that the beast was a chakra construct so it could never be defeated, but sealing it away was possible. Now being the great and powerful ninja he was he knew a seal the Shiku Fuin(Death god seal) it was forbidden in Konoha (hidden leaf village) because it was so powerful it took the soul of the user as compensation for its use. He planned to make his son Naruto a jinchuriki (sacrificed human container) for the Kyuubi.
The reason for this is only a baby with completely undeveloped chakra coils could hold such a power. To ensure that Naruto could deal with and control the power he was going to seal his own, his wife's remaining, and the Kyuubi's chakra all into Naruto. He used one of his most prized jutsu the Hirashin (flying thunder god) to teleport the family and Kyuubi to a training ground behind the Hokage Mountain for the sealing. When they got there Kushina used one of her Kekei Genkai (blood line skill) to hold down the Kyuubi. This was her Chakura no kusari (chakra chains) that tells she is from the Uzumaki clan known for its long livity and high chakra reserves.
Minato releases the sealing altar from a scroll and starts the long list of hand signs for the jutsu. As he is getting to the final sign the Kyuubi lashes one of its tails, Minato slips in his sign and all motion around him stops. To his left a door appears out of nowhere only to open and reveal a man in black robes bloodied on his left side carrying a new born blue haired baby boy.
"Who are you and how did you get here!" asks an urgent, but cautious Minato.
"I am a Shinigami (death god)." says the man as he looks at the scene around him. "You tried to summon my king, but you summoned me instead."
"I thought there was only one Shinigami, but apparently as you said he is the king." states Minato.
"From what I have seen you mean to seal the Kyuubi into that boy on the altar." says the Shinigami.
"Yes I do, also I was hoping you would help me." says Minato.
"You know what I will do you something better I will not take your or your wife's soul for the sealing. As my compensation I want you to raise my son here, as you can see I have a mortal wound to my left side and will die shortly." says the Shinigami.
"Thank you so much and I will raise your son as if he was my own." says a now cheerful Minato.
The Shinigami starts to chant strange words under his breath and his hands glow blue. The Shiku Fuin mark appears on Naruto and the Kyuubi is drawn into the seal. The light on the Shinigami's hands fades he reaches into his robes and pulls a storage scroll out and gives it to Minato along with his son. The door disappears and the shinigami fades saying his final farewell. Minato useing the Hirashin to teleport to the hospital since Kushina had passed out.
The receptionist was reading a magazine when a quick flash of yellow light poped into life in front of her she fellout of her chair yelling curses to who ever scared her.
"Who in the hell do you think you are scaring me like that!" yells the receptionist. "And why are you here so late at night!"
"Well I think I'm the Yondaime taking my wife and two sons to the recovery center for a case of fatuige and chakra exhaustion." says Minato calmly. "Also I would like to have my sons checked out by Tusnade Senju for any compications of sealing the Kyuubi into my son Naruto here who will be treated like a hero for containing a beast."
"R-right away lord hokage I apologize for my earlier actions to you sir." stuters the receptionist.
Minato walks to the room he had set up for Kushina to rest in after the birthing of Naruto. Minato waits patiently for Tsunade while sending a messenger toad out to find his sensei Jeraiya of the Sannin (Sages) and Kakashi of the Sharingan (copy wheel eye). He also sent word out to Hiruzen Sarutobi his prediseser.
(knock knock) "Come in Tsunade, Shizune, Sensei, Kakashi, and Hiruzen." as the people he sent for all walk in.
"Kid I don't know how you did it but you beat the Kyuubi and saved the village!" says Jeraiya as he beams at his most favorite student.
"Yeah how did you beat the Kuuybi sensei?" asks a curious Kakashi.
Minato tells all of the event that transpired during his fight with the Kyuubi and the help he got from the Shinigami.
"Well all that is great but what will you do with the child." asks Tsunade after finishing her check up on the boys and Kushina.
"I will do as I promised to the Shinigami." says Minato determend.
"And what praytell would that be." asks Kushina as she begrugingly wakes up from her unconsious state.
"Dear thank Kami your ok!" cheers Minato hugging his wife. "All it is is raising the Shinigami's child." says Minato after explaining what happened.
"Well that won't be a problem." says Kushina nodding. "Problem is what is his name." asks Kushina.
"Well before he passed the Shinigami gave me a storage scroll mabey it has a name on it." says minato reaching into his pocket on the inside of his hokage cloak.
Minato pulls out the storage scroll and rolls it over to reveal the name for the baby he had adopted.
"It says 'Loc Dondreko' on it under the property sign." says Minato as he lays it out on the bed that kushina is laying on.
(A.N. 'Loc' is not misspeeled and not english it is my O.C.'s name)
"That is a fine name for the boy." says Sarutobi adding his two ryo into the conversation.
After discussing other things and saying their farewell all but the Namikaze family and the adopted Dondreko leave for the night. Minato after situating the love of his life and his two sons for bed looks out the widow to his village and thinks.
"Well life will go on and get better from here on out, but i hope this peace that has come will stay till I know my family will be ready to take on the world."
Hello again and I hope you like the first chapter of my story read and review also no complete flaming please. Remember those who matter don't mind and those who mind don't matter seeya later for chapter 2 Team time.