Before I start, I am Twin #2 and none of the charcters I own. ( Obviously)

Wish me luck! =D

In china lived the wealthy Sun family, the Sun family ruled Wu one of the three powerful kingdoms of the land. This story is not of heroics of Sun Ce, Zhou Yu or

any thing like that. But of the bravery and courage of the daughter of Sun Ce and Da Qiao,

Sun Kaori. Sun Kaori is like Da Qiao but also like Sun Ce. Restraint combined with pride, empathy, and fury…

" So you wish to duel? Fine. But be warned, I shall not lose to the likes of you!" Sun Kaori threatened, waving her crimson red fans in front of her. " Don't be so cocky, I have slain men thrice as powerful as you!" Zhen Ji scoffed. " You are but a sorceress with out that flute, you are nothing!" Kaori taunted. Zhen Ji dashed

towards Kaori, prepared to strike. Kaori gracefully evaded her attacks and efficiently slit her throat. " Perhaps I am fortunate to die young…" Zhen Ji said as she

slumped on to the ground, sticky red blood streaming from her throat." Perhaps I will be fortunate as you one day, Lady Zhen Ji." Kaori said, her voice full of

pity.

That's the beginning! Did you like it? I really really really wanna know!

I have already written 23 pages on loose leaf! Yey! Please post ideas.

And to Zhen Ji fans, I don't hate her she just has no place in the story line. Neeh I'm sorry! So short sorry again…

Also my first DW story sorry if its a fail!

( DONT SAY ANYTHING ANIMEGIRL3210! =P)