Subtle Lonliness

by Raphaella Trevane

the title was picked at random and i really don't care if you read this or not. this poem is all about sakura my version that is. i don't like anime version it's too exact opposite of my version. the title may change if i think of a better one.

I somehow thought of this poem. It didn't take me that long to write and it's subtle. very subtle.

you already i don't own naruto so i shouldn't bother to say it.

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All I see is blood

It blinds me so

Death is coming soon

That's all I know

Darkness takes over me

Then a flash of white light

I'm nowhere to be found

I can barely see

My heaven is the Lonely Valley

Forever I'll walk alone

Unoticed by others

They won't see me

Covered in blood

Falling to the ground

No one helps me

I'm invisible

I can't move my body

For I am dead

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the one word to describe my poems: subtle. it works every time only if it's my own work though if it's my parodies than they are my work but the music and everything belong to someone else. someday i should get a happy poem out. review or don't review i don't care.