Hi. First fanfic. Tell me how I do.
I woke in my bed. I got up ran to my dresser and put on my shirt pant and stuff like that. (Not like ash when he woke up and ran to professor oke). I went to professor Drayman. I went in with my friend and my rival. My friend name is Pear but, we call DG you will learn why later. My rival is Jim I hate him. I choosed poncheto (I made up all this Pokémon and the name of the people I'm not the owner of Pokémon just the game I also have darn the Pokémon but, you can't see itL). My friend choosed rosto and my rival chooed red. I was ready to star my Pokémon journey. When my mom came to give me my book bag. She packed me food, water, and some Poke balls. (Than Drayman came out and gave me my Pokédex) we went off. When we where in the middle night fell so we set up camp.
Give m e some ides more on the way.