Surprise Visit

Hi! This is my new story that actually has a plot! I'm just trying this out so please tell me what you think! This story is set one year before Shippuden. OC information is in my profile. Thanks to Joanna Davis for giving me advice on this story read her stories too cause they're awesome! Hope you like this story!

Disclaimer: I Do Not Own Naruto

In the darkness, nine figures gathered discussing their goals.

"In this coming year, I want to capture all the bijuu to strengthen the Akatsuki further. The bijuu are important to our cause therefore, in this year you will need to research about the bijuu." The carrot top leader spoke.

"Aw f***! We ain't schoolkids! No f***ing way I'm doing your shitty homework!" The leader did not look pleased at the silver-haired member's outburst.

"Hidan, you have to and you will do as I say. If not, I will cut you into pieces and feed you to Kisame's fish." he cleared his throat. "Second order of business, Orochimaru has left us well over a year now. It's time we find a new member, any suggestions?" A giant venus flytrap raised his 'hand'

"Yes, Zetsu?"

"How about my brother, Herbert?"

"Is he a plant?"

"Yes."

"No. I don't need another cannibal plant in this base."

"I'm not cannibal!"

"Moving on, who else has a suggestion." he completely ignored the plant's protest. A blue man spoke up. "Well there's this girl I met in the Mist. She's about sixteen now and she's pretty powerful from what I heard."

"How powerful?"

"She can summon...pandas." He whispered the last part. Leader narrowed his eyes, deep in thought. After a moment he said "Fine we'll take her. Kisame, Itachi get to the Mist and recruit this girl. Dismissed.

Third Person POV

Here is our main character, hyper, lively, young and wrinkly? Sorry! This isn't what we're looking for. Over there! Found her. She's shorter than I thought...isn't she supposed to be sixteen? This is clearly a five year old. Let me guess, I got it wrong again. The camera moves over somewhere else. Yup, I got it now! Our sixteen year old, jonin ranked girl...sleeping. The brunette was fast asleep under the shade of the trees.

"Mizuhana!" her boss barked. "What the hell do you think you're doing?" The girl woke up right away. "Sleeping! What does it look like to you?"

"Talking back to your boss, aren't you? I'll get you fired right away!"

"Well sucks for you cause I'm promoting to ANBU next week. A. N. B. U! You can't fire me now! I'm gonna rank higher than you! Bleh!" She childishly stuck her tongue out at him.

"I- well I-" the boss was stuttering." Just get back to work."

"Never!" The pissed off man stormed away.

Kirina POV

Stupid. Trying to yell at me and get me fired? I'll get you fired in one week! Poof. Two figures shrouded in mist appeared. I got a kunai ready in my hand.

"Mizuhana Kirina."

"How do you know my name? Am I that famous?"

"No." the voice replies. "I met you before."

"Aw why'd you have to ruin my fun? Who da hell are you?" The mist cleared to reveal a shark and...! A really really really hot guy! "OMYGOSH OMYFINGOSH WHAT IS YOUR NAME?" The blue one spoke "Hoshigaki Kisame."

"No! Not you! I'm talking to the hottie next to you!" he looked disappointed. Poor guy, I'm sorry.

"Uchiha Itachi." Kyaaa! That guy is so cool! Woah, breathe Kirina, breathe. "What do you want, I'm trying to work."

"Looks like you're failing at the trying to work thing." The blue guy, Kisame said. Itachi cleared his throat and replied "We're from Akatsuki and we were sent from our leader to recruit you. Join or die."

"Join or die? I don't like the sound of that. Is there a choice called fight then join or fight and die? Cause I prefer fighting first then talk."

"You really know how to choose your opponents. Well then, fight it is." The Uchiha was already making hand signs.

"Fire Style: Great Fireball Jutsu." bad choice. A gigantic fireball went flying my way. I quickly countered "Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu." Water collided with fire covering the entire area with steam. "Itachi-san, I think you should sit this out. She's not the type you should fight."

"Hn." eep! He's stoic and cool. I would join Akatsuki just to see him everyday! But I'm not going down without a fight! Kisame faced me with his big-ass sword. "Now you're fighting me!"

"Summoning Jutsu: Panda summoning!" I summoned a panda, Chikure.

"Kirina, what is this?" Her summoning spoke.

"I was napping, then my idiot boss wakes me up. After that, this blue guy and that hottie over there suddenly appears and asks me to join Akatsuki or die so I'm like fight and so they did and I need help so there."

"Ok then let's fight!" Kisame swung his sword and Chikure dodged it with his awesome panda powers! After a while, both parties were getting tired. I know Chikure couldn't hold much longer.

"Chikure, move out of the way!"

"Kirina, you don't plan on using it?"

"Just do it!" He did as I said and I prepared to use my ultimate attack. Itachi and Kisame faced me and braced themselves for what was about to come.

"Rainbowchocolatechipegan!"

"...what?" Kisame asked. My eyes turned from purple to a cold ice blue. They were trapped in my genjutsu.

The Rainbowchocolatechipegan isn't the real name. There's no name for this move, really. It's like sharingan yet, totally different. Its like a never-ending genjutsu.

Itachi must've sensed the genjutsu. He attacked back with Tsukiyomi and the three of us fell into an endless nightmare.

Sorry if this is short. Please tell me what you think about this so far, it really means a lot. This is going to have some romance but that's not gonna happen anytime soon! I'm trying to do a love triangle for the first time. Thanks for reading! Bye!