a new fic on kevi plz plz plz review
story
kavin and dushu are son of acp dushu and ishu are engaged and every body is going in paris for holidays of 2 weeks as acp said that they all work very hard so they should have some leaves
in burea all were disscussing about paris
pankag:sir meine suna ha k paris k fastfood bht hi delicious hota ha
all gave uff iska kia hoga wali look
kv:food hi nhi pankaj wahan ki larkian bhi bht khubsurat hoti hain
ishu naughtly:acha kavin sir larkiyan...
dushu:aur unka kia jin k sath tera chakar idhr chal rha hai
sachin:woh sb to calender ki tarha hain har hafty change ho jati hain (all gave surprising look to kavin)
acp came:kon change ho jata ha sachin
all jumped with nervousness
acp smiled:tum log aesey kiun react kar rhy ho jesy bhoot dekh lia ho
dcp came from behind:inhu ne bhoot nhi dekha farishta dekha ha jo mein hun
acp:appp
dcp :han mein kiun
acp:ap is dress mein
dcp:han to hum log paris ghumny jayeingy(he was wearing white pants flowered pink shirt and white hat)
abhi:ap ghumny jayeingy ap?
dcp : han mein ghumny jaonga aur agar nhi giya to tum log bhi nhi jaogey smjhy
he was going when looked behind:aur sb log time pr kal airport phnch jana okay
all with sad faces:yes sir
dcp:aur han hum log acp rathor ki betiyun k han rukein gy
acp:acp rathor ki betiyan
dcp: han purvi aur anishah
acp:magar unhein pata ha k hum any walein hain
dcp : nhi hum unhy surprize deingy
acp:surprise?
dcp:yes!
and dcp went away
daya:sir yh kia keh rhy hain
acp: pta nhi metal prblm ha iski
all grinned
acp ab tum log jao aur shopping wagera karlo their is winter u all know na
all agreed and all went togather for shopping
in mall ishita was in dress shop with other girls when she was going to dressing room when somebody kept his one hand on her mouth and dragged her to dressing room she tried to scream but was unable to scream and see the person
ishita :choro mujhy kon ho tum
person:issssh shhh mein hun mein
ishita:dushu! tum yahan kia kr rhy ho
dushu :arey tumhary pas mery liye time hi nhi na subha sey baat tk nhi ki
ishu:baat nhi ki to kia is trha baat krogy
dushu:uff choro bhi (he was moving closer to ishu)
ishu:yh kia kr rhy ho dooor rho
dushu:abhi to meiny kuch kia hi nhi
ishu:dushu plz koi aajayega
dushu:ajaany do
ishu:acha toh log kia socheingy
dushi:husbad wife ko dekh kr kia socheingy
ishu:o hello! abhi husband wife bny nhi hain(while playfully pushing him)
dushu:arey yaar acha hasa scene create hua wa tha lekin tum bhi na
ishu :mein bhi na kia
dushu:ishu !
ishu:acha chalo bahr jao ab
dushu:nhi
ishu:dushu meiny kaha bahr jao
dushu:nhi jaonga
ishu:dushyaant!(with fake anger)
dushu:jarha hun baby
ishu:toh jaona (she pushed him out and closed the door and smiled)
on other side in paris
a girl was lying on bed while listening music
another girl came and said:purvi music bnd kr aur ja pallavi aunty k ghar mein arnav aya ha(arnav is a cute 4 year old boy of pallavi auntys daughter renuka and is very much attached to purvi)
purvi jumped and said arnav aww kitna cute baby haina anisha dii
anisha:han ab ja
purvi went to pallavi auntys house she was watering the plants and arnav was standing with her
purvi came inside and said:hello aunty aww hello champ kesy ho(to arnav)
arnav:purvi aunty (he hugged her)
pallavi:hi purvi kesi ho
purvi:mein theik hun aunty arnav aj aya aur renuka kahan ha
pallavi:beta wo renuka ko india jana prha kisi kaam sy so ab arnav 2weeks k liye mere pas rhega
purvi :oh phr to champ aur mein bht maze kreingy right champ
arnav:right ab to dantne wali mumy bhi nhi hain hehehehe
purvi smiled
purvi:arnav ao park chlein
arnav:yesh!
purvi smiled and took her to park and played with her all day
so ab ap logon ko story k bary mein pata chl gia k kesi hai kia ha so plz review review and review taky mein jan sakun k i should cntinue or not