hi there im gonna make this good so you can read it oh and i thank you for all the advice hopefully this will be better then my other story
Naruto pov
He a five year old named naruto was going ichiraku to get some ramen when suddenly he bumped into a villager.
dammit you demon watch were your walking
g-gomenasi
Shut up demon the villager then proceded to beat him up then the other villagers joined in.So naruto ran for his life. he the found a log and sat on it. I am kyuubi you are weak mortalI will train you to be strong why naruto asked because none should be treated like this you willl be strong unbeatable strikefear in there heart's the will pay for what they've they are guilty together we will get our revenge on them all the kitsune roared. okay said naruto they shall pay withere lives they are guilty only punishble by death.
so what do you think chapter was short only a proleague tho bye until next time i will come with thy fear i gotta make em longer give ideas too that will help