Hello fellow fanfictioners! This is my first story ever I'm mega excited! ^.^ This'll sound extremely cheesy and lame but I got the idea from a dream (a rare dream where I actually remember what happens ^^; ) and then I tweaked it a little and added some stuff! I would die and go to heaven if people comment and review! Heck! Just somebody reading it would make me jump up and down! Anyways, I hope you enjoy and if I screw up somewhere lemme know and I'll fix ASAP! Um, ok so I hope you enjoy: Inuyo and Kaiku!
'Italicized' words are thoughts
They were running through the dense forest. They quickly glanced at one another and darted behind a tree. Up ahead, was their target: Dokuga, one of the Akkifuzen's bases.
"You ready for this Inuyo?" the girl whispered to the boy with black spiky hair. He was wearing jeans, a black t-shirt, and black and red shoes. He had a blue backpack strapped to him.
"Heh, you know it Kaiku," he replied with a cocky grin to the girl with long brown hair that was tied back. She had a beige t-shirt on, army green pants, and black combat boots. She had a blue backpack slung around her too.
"You remember the plan?"
"'Course I do. We sneak in, plant the bombs, escape and then head back to base," he summarized.
"Alright, let's go!" They ran quietly towards the base, continuously hiding behind trees. They quietly crept up, making sure that there were no guards and then found an entrance and stealthily entered. They ran down a large chrome colored hallway. There were countless unmarked doors. They came up to a corner and silently peaked around it to find it empty.
Kaiku looked around and once she was sure there were no guards, she pulled out a map of the base they were in. "Ok, we need to plant the bombs here…here…and here," she whispered pointing to several places on the map.
"Gotcha, let's get moving," Inuyo whispered back. They ran to the nearest point and planted the bomb and set the timer so that it would detonate in two minutes after they push the button on the remote that controlled the bombs. They hastily ran to the other two destinations, setting up the bombs like the first. Once that was done, they ran towards the exit that they had come in through. 'Perfect, all we gotta do now is get out without-'
Inuyo's thoughts were cut off as a guard who noticed them running. "Hey! You there, stop!" He shouted and ran at them.
"Dammit! So close…" Inuyo muttered in annoyance. He sped up to collide with the guard. Just as the man was about to punch him, Inuyo ducked and punched him in the gut and then kicked his hunched over back to the ground and then over to the side of the wall. Kaiku had caught up and they ran outside. "Hurry and push the button so we can get the hell outta here!" he yelled.
"I know, I know," Kaiku replied in annoyance that matched Inuyo's as she pulled out the remote and pushed the button with a click. They then ran as fast as they could to get to a safe distance. Once they were about 400 meters away from the base they looked back at it. Inuyo looked at his watch. Sure enough, a few seconds later the building exploded into a fiery mess of derby and chunks of metal. As soon as it had begun it ended and all that was left was a humongous burnt patch in the ground where the base had once been. As soon as they were sure there were no survivors and nothing recoverable they headed off back to their own base.
Yay! First part: DONE! I hope you guys liked it! Like I said up top, please review and comment! Ill take any kind of 'words of wisdom' you people have!
Fun Note:
In Japanese:
- Dokuga = poisonous fang
-akki = demon
-fuzen = evil
Yeah, I wanted cool Japanese words instead the lame English ones so I looked up some Japanese words and these looked cool and evil so they were perfect! ^^