haha yup. just a teaser to a possible series im going to make ;3
its still a WIP so... yeah please be gentle with your criticism, though very much welcome please,
no one likes flames.
okay grammar, punctuation, fluency, etc etc anything i could work on, i would appreciate any tips and advice, even ideas for in the future of this fanfiction~ all is welcome! ^U^
if anyone's curious heres my OC's design ;3 www. lelzzy. deviantart / # / d5h9zp8
(just minus the spaces)
okay well enjoy this short bit from chapter 1.
(its only a few small paragraphs from chapter one, not all of it.
i do plan on making it much longer ;) )
so um... yeah enjoy ^u^
The Black Order;
A fairly secret organization whose sole purpose is to train/find accommodators of innocence ( a powerful source of energy, which can only be used by whomever the innocence chooses.), to locate any innocence and retrieve it, and to also fight against the akuma who were created by the millennium Earl; The orders sworn enemy.
My name is Lizanne Liebenberg and I was trained by the General Tiedoll many years ago, but just yesterday I had received news from my branches (the African branches) leader telling me that I was to be transferred over to the European branch for missions and also because that's where all the exorcists seemed to be staying.
I loved being the only exorcist in our branch.
Being the only one with that 'title'...
it kind of sucks that I'm going to share that with what? 6? Maybe even more?
This is going to suck.
Big time.
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...:::~readers Point Of View~:::...
The sound of the trains old steam whistle signalled that its departure was within the next 2 minutes, freaking out at this, Lizanne Hastily grabbed her luggage and rushed inside before it could leave the station. Seating herself down on a nearby vacant seat she sighed pulling out the paper that her branch leader had given her, illegibly showing how to get to the European branch.
"Hmm?" studying the paper carefully She realized it wasn't the kind of map her leader normally gives her... someone else had obviously made this map...
"Wait- WHAT?! How the heck am I supposed to know where exactly the cross on this map, is telling me to go if its covering at least 100km worth of land!?" she frustratingly cursed under her breath. Desperately she searched all over the paper for any written advice on where the black orders European branch was, or any further instructions, but alas with no luck. She groaned... this wasn't going to be an easy place to find. After all, it is a SECRET organization.
The train blew its whistle once more before finally it began to travel down the tracks which headed north, towards the tip of Africa where it joined with Asia/Europe.
As the train left the station the light began to pour in through her window and onto her blonde hair which was tied into two loose tails behind her. She wore a dark trench coat along with some 1/3 high boots. Blinking due to the sudden light she soon adjusted before leaning onto the window with one arm and the other on the table in front of her, her mind soon drifting away into another world.