Hello, welcome to my redone version of my story Fire in the Forest. I'm back and I hope my writing has improved. If it hasn't than please give me as many tips as possible. Anyway on with the story.

Two cats swiftly moved across the field. The sun rose in the horizon and an array of colors stretched across the sky. These particular cats had no time to watch the amazing display however they were on a mission to bring food to there family.

It had been a long dry summer for them and most of their sources of food had fled to find a better place to live. The few stupid mice that stayed behind were going to be breakfast when the family awoke.

The cats arrived at a barn and the fresh smell of home greeted them. They stepped in and suddenly there was a crash.

The red she cat spun around quickly only to find her partner with a bucket on his head and little sticks all on the ground, "Wood what are doing," she whispered irritably "are you trying to wake them up."

"Sorry Red," he said while rolling his eyes. He got up and shook the sticks out of his fur and halfway managed to get the bucket off when Red came and helped him.

Red rolled her eyes back at him and they continued. The two of them climbed over a stack of hay and jumped through a hole in the roof. From there they clim bed until they reached another hole and dropped down.

There was their family, all sleeping silently in there hay nests. Red dropped her pitiful catch of three mice while Wood laid down his pigeon.

While wood did a head count to make sure everyone was there Red lay down to sleep hoping tomorrows hunting trip would be more successful.

"Mom mom mom mom mom mom," a voice said "wake up its time to eat."

Red yawned and looked at her kits. One, Two, Three, Four. All here kits were here.

"Alright, alright," she said "Now listen kids here's how it's going to be, Wood, Matches, and I are going to share the mice while you five share the pigeon. Any questions?"

"Um...yes, mom," said one of her kits "there are only four of us so.."

"Yes you will be sharing with Ash," explained Red one of her kits groaned "now Flame, that's not nice, but yes you will be sharing with him now that he's finally old enough to eat real food isn't that wonderful."

"But mom," said Flame "I don't have to eat the pigeon because I caught my own food for me and Flare. So now every one else has more to eat."

"You, caught something," asked Red surprised "How?"

"Well me and Flame went on an adventure outside the barn and we caught our own food and-" Flare broke off as she noticed Flame glaring at her "I-I mean w-we were um..."

"You know your not allowed out there," sighed Red "You could have gotten hurt."

"Yeah but we didn't and we brought back food," said Flame "We're not in trouble are we."

"Of course not my little warrior," said Wood as he walked in "You two are going to make great Loners some day."

""Wood no," Red said with desperation " Those cats are horrible, they killed my father..."

"So we had a misunderstanding or two," said Wood "But I was practically leader I can tell you they weren't all bad."

"Whatever lets eat," said Red.

As they walked to the food pile, Red noticed two frogs on it. That must have been what they caught, thought Red. She and Wood ate there portion of the mice and gave the rest to Matches who was still asleep.

"Kits," called Wood "Your mother and I are going to take a nap, wake up Matches so she can look after you."

They heard what sounded like an okay and went to there nest. Then not long afterwords Red fell asleep. But not before she smelled the smoke

So this is my new prologue. I hope my writing has improved. Anyway my deal is I get five reviews and I post a chapter. Also I want too do a game. First reviewer to post give me a word to use in the next chapter. A reasonable word if possible but try and give me a challenge. Anyway see ya.

EDIT

Originally I had rated this T "Because its warriors", but as the plot progresses, I have realized that it really does need a T rating.

This is NOT a happy story. It has lots of murder and I'm planning on making those parts a little more detailed.

I realize my story isn't as bad, as in needing a higher rating, as other stories on Fanfiction, but I felt it necessary to put a warning here,