So Hello Everyone, This is the first Fanfiction that I have ever written, and I wrote it kinda as it came to me. so please, give me some pointers and comment, help would be real nice as I have no idea how to write anything besides reports (no thank you IB and English Class)
September 21, 2256
Shipboard Time: 1000
Location: Battleship HMS Gunther Lutjens, Interstellar Space near junction of Orion and Sagittarius Arms
"Commodore, there is some sort of ship on the sensors, it is rather large, would you like the task force to drop out of warp?" said a rather tall and lanky man, who appeared in his late teens
"We have time to kill, why not, Captain?" responded a very young looking girl, who appeared no older than sixteen, with long blonde hair and piercing sky blue eyes and somewhat baby-like features unbefitting of a commander of a Royal Navy Commander.
"We need to have the destroyers stop to do maintenance on their warp arrays anyway, better to have something to kill time with."
Back on the Bridge, Captain Jean Maxim, ordered full stop, relative to unknown object.
Ten minutes later, strapped in a spacesuit and in a Humpback transport vehicle, he find himself on the mysterious object. The long, dark corridors leading to the central cylinder from the abandoned spaceport, which was little more than an open space with a broken airlock.
Jean Maxim, bro, you are out of your mind, crawling into an unknown alien vessel alone, he thought to himself as he ventured farther into the unknown space station.
Finally, in the heart of the abandoned space colony, he saw a derelict building. At one time in the past, it might have been some great mansion, roman columns around the verandah, lush green gardens around it, and people running back and forth, going about their business within the mansion. Now, it was just another cold, dead building, floating in space.
Inside, he ventured into the basement, which curiously, was the only door that was not locked. down in the first basement, which was cavernous, something no one outside the colony would be able to explain. He found what appeared to be cryotubes, all frosted over by the random molecules of water floating the vast expanse of space, and on the inside, which still appeared to be pressurized, indicating that there was something alive in the tube, though his bio-detector did not register anything alive in the room beyond himself. Looking up, he saw many similar tubes, all frosted over so that the face of whatever was inside was obscured. Curiosity taking over from his better judgement, he approached the nearest tube, he nearly overlooked the small plaque below the window, which said
SECOND BATTLESHIP OF NAGATO CLASS: MUTSU
Upon brushing the frost aside, it revealed….himself.
Albeit, himself if he were a girl, almost the same spitting image, especially in the face. Frost covered her cheeks, which were a very lifeless pale white. Here eyes were shut, but they did not appear dead, only in sleep.
Jean screamed, a scream that reverberated through the microphones of the other people on the colony, and caused the communications officer back on Gunther Lutjens to jump off his post and hit his head on the tuning console above him.
"Guys, you might want to come to my location, I think I got something you guys might want to take a look at, looks like still functioning cryotubes, this colony was sent out by a primitive human world quite sometime ago, which would explain why it was even here in the first place" Jean said curtly into his helmet microphone before switching it off.
"Now, let's see what else we have here…"
2 hours later back on the ship in the infirmary. The ship doctor, Marie Passio, had 24 cry tubes to lug around with only the help of 3 assistants, 2 of them volunteers from the damage control team that was off duty. Not only that, but it was compounded by the fact that Marie was a diminutive girl of 17, she had waist length, long slightly blue hair, red-orange eyes, and a sharp tongue to match.
"What are you idiots doing, you're so clumsy with those tubes! They are human lives you know, they are just as important, no, more important than you are! UUUUUGHHHHHH GET OUT ILL DO IT MY SELF"
After kicking the the two volunteers out of the infirmary, she goes to each of the tubes and cleans it before heaving it onto a cot. Having no experience with the matter, she sent out her assistant as well.
She uses the intercom to call in Captain Maxim and the other blonde girl. Time to open these tubes and see who's inside. The two commanders were quite curious, especially because the ones that have been slightly defrosted to reveal people that had striking resemblance to several of the ship's crew, and because of that, they also brought in the crew that had resemblance to the girls in the tubes. For some reason, they were all female, save for Maxim.
The only person with cryotube operation experience present, Shevonne Passio, was also coincidentally one of the people that had a resemblance to the girls in the tubes. Proceeding to the first one that Jean found, she pressed some buttons and changed the settings on a couple screws and after several minutes, with a very loud hiss, the tube opens.
Inside was a girl in her late teens, wearing very little, a white miniskirt with mahogany trim, what appeared to be a white with black trim sports bra, and strangely, a hairband that had two forward facing prongs that gave her the impression of a slug. Looking at her, Maxim sighed, he has run into plenty of surreal things in his two years with the task force, but no one had ever run into their own doppelganger.
After a quick medical check-up, and finding nothing wrong, Marie turns to Jean and says "There really is nothing wrong with her aside from the fact that she's cold out, literally", I need room of the other cryotubes in the infirmary, so I'm gonna cart her over to your room, it only seems appropriate. You meanwhile, need to keep watch over her on your own time and DON'T YOU DARE DO ANYTHING SUSPICIOUS TO HER"
With that last sentence everyone is once again kicked out, mostly in disappointment at not being able to meet their look-alike, they were only really going to attempt to thaw them one at a time to keep the number of "new people" on the ship to a minimum, but there were some rather interesting finds.
One in particular, Battleship Bismark, held much more than a passing resemblance to the Commodore, Minerva Zabi, She infact, looked like her, older by another three years. Larger breasts, taller, much more regal in facial features, and looking more like a battlefield valkyria to Minerva's petite "born rich southern belle" figure, but at the moment, she is of little consequence as she is still in the cryotube.
Mutsu's eyes fluttered open, her body felt really numb, and she was unable to move anything beyond her eyes and turning her head. She heard soft clicking to her left, but the bed, it was wonderously soft, it was unlike the cold hard cryotube that she was forced into immediately after her commissioning. She was unable to form any words in her mouth, she still hadn't regained control of even her own mouth yet, but she noticed the person on the chair to her left. A man, that looked nearly exactly like her, from the short, light auburn hair, to even the hair that seemed to point in the same ways and the lime-green eyes. He appeared to be playing an ancient game console of some sort, the controller looked like a trident and had an analog stick down the middle, and when the level seemed to be over, the screen displayed MISSION ACCOMPLISHED, before rolling the credits. As the credits started rolling, the man turned around:
"I see that you're awake, welcome aboard HMS Gunther Lutjens, I am Captain Jean Maxim, captain of the ship and Task force executive Officer, nice to meet you." He tried to smile, but his smile could never hide his nervousness because, come on, Jean had never had such a beautiful girl ever in his room before, much less sleeping in his own bed (Without him in it!)
Mutsu replied "Then where is everyone else? Am I the only one that you found? What about Nagato-neesan?" in a very quick manner, with much concern in her voice.
"Whoa, whoa, slow down there, we got a bunch of you guys out of that space colony out there", said Jean while pointing out the window, "And we only defrosted you, we'll bring you up to speed real quick."