I just finish my exams last week (thank god) anyway in my english I had to "write a descriptive passage about a childhood experience, place or object" so I wrote about a girl and her labrador puppy at beach. So I thought I would share with you. I changed the labrador to a poochyena. I got 11/15. I loss due spelling and grammar which if you have read my other story you would know I'm not good at English in general. Anyway Read and Review :P
Sunset
The golden sand crawled under my toes and the glistening ocean stood still in front of me. A light breeze blew my strawberry blond hair back so I could see the hues of pinks, orange and purple displayed in front of me. Sunset, my favourite time day. The salty air smelt sweet compared to the city smog. The ocean water sprayed in my face as I drew closer to the water.
A sudden snarl made me jump out of my mesmerised state. I turned to see my playful poochyena. The clumsy pup zigzagged through the sand, with a hint of excitement in her red eyes, chasing a crimson krabby, along the shoreline. I couldn't help but laugh at the sight.
I slowly made my way to the crab's attacker. The fiery sand scorched my feet with every step. She growled at the crab as I picked her up. Her wet, grey fur felt rough against my skin. Her pale pink tongue drooped out of her month as she panted.
I took another look at my awaiting sunset. The sun was almost gone, swallowed by the ocean. Stars fought their way to the sky, twinkling as they did so.
I sat down in the some-what cooler sand and pulled my puppy closer to my face. I quickly changed my mind when the wet dog smell hit my nostrils. She jumped out of my grasp and wondered closer to the ocean, tail wagging at 100 miles/per hour. The sun was gone and the moon finally reached the sky. I brushed off the sand that clung to my legs and I could hear my mother called for me in the distance.
The wind picked up and threw grains of sand at my face so I closed my eyes. Suddenly something slimy grazed my left leg. I snapped my eyes open to see my puppy with a bit of seaweed in her mouth. Her pure, white teeth shone and the droplets of water on the seaweed reflected the moonlight making it shimmer. The yellow in her eyes stood out in the dim light.
I took another look out at the sea. The full moon reflected on the depths of the ocean. I sighed and stood up, then slowly made my way to mum, hoping my pokemon was following.
The End