So this is my story „Prince Charming on his white horse? Or not! „ rewrite. I'm cutting out some scenes, putting in some scenes... And I'm really going to edit it, so if you read something familiar it could be totally new thing. I hope you like it!
I think that the first piece is crappy. The rest chapter is kind of normal…
PS! I know my characters are little OOC but I need them that way. It's part of the story.
R&R
The Animal Inside
Sakura Haruno
She brushed off all the dust that was on her leather coat, put a strand of pink hair behind her ear and picked up a backpack. With the clinking of high-heeled boots, she walked towards the new school. White house with brownish-red roof – Konoha High. She stepped through the big doors, into school. Hallways were stuffed with students and teachers, who chatted and searched their classrooms.
She found her locker after short search, put her coat into it and looked down at her clothes. High-heeled black boots with red banding, black jeans, red v-necked t-shirt and black button-down shirt with red stripes were all okay combined with spiked arm band, black chocker and silver chain with a cat on it. She pushed the locker shut and started forwards her homeroom.
On her way she saw how a girl fell onto the floor and dropped all her books she hold. Just a second ago a read-head boy pushed her and just walked off like nothing happened. That ticked our girl off. No one should push a girl like that. Or at least apologize after.
She crouched next to the girl and asked – ''Are you okay?''
''Y-Yeah…'' the girl said surprised.
Pink haired girl looked at the fallen gal appearance. It was simple but beautiful. Her black tennis-shoes, dark purple jeans, black hooded jacket with white dots, long purple hair and crazy lavender eyes. The girl turned her attention to the boy who was still walking away.
''Hey, you read-head! You know that pushing girls is not nice?'' she yelled with a sonant voice.
The boy didn't stop but he did answer.
''You know that I don't care?''
His voice was monotonous and cold.
''Would you hold my bag for a moment?'' whispered the pink-head to the girl.
She just nodded once and took the bag. Our girl stood up and crossed her hands, walking toward the boy with clanks.
''Sad, sad, sad… But that I can change. All you have to do is turn around and face me,'' she said with a smug smile.
The read-head tuned around and crossed his hand also, glaring at the girl 4 meters away from him. There was also curiosity in his eyes. He wanted to see what will come next. The girl walked slowly towards the boy again.
''So will you apologize?''
''No bitch!''
''You shouldn't have said that!'' she sneered.
He smirked at her. As follows he didn't now where he has got into himself.
''And why is that?''
She was still coming closer and now there was less than 2 meters between them.
''Because now I have to do this!''
He didn't even know what happened to him. Because few seconds later he fond himself on the floor with a very bloody nose. In slow-motion you would see that the girl punched his nose. And it wasn't a light one…
Pleased with her work, she turned around and walked next to the girl with purple hair. Now she was up with books in one hand and a bag in another one. Pink-haired girl picked her bag from the girl and walked past her.
''Thanks!''
''What's your name?''
''Sakura Haruno,'' was all she said, when she stepped away from her with clinking of her boots.
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Class 105, class 106 and … class 107! At last she found her homeroom class. She stepped in walked up to teachers table. The teacher had gray hair, an eye-clap and a mask. This isn't a teacher. It's a freaking…. ninja! (A/N: Oh the irony!) And he was reading a porn book? That's it! Sakura snatched the book from the teacher and threw it to the trash can.
''Hi! I'm the new student. Where do I sit?'' she asked annoyed.
''Lift your hand Temari! Go sit there!'' he replied with a tired voice.
Sakura started her way to her seat when she heard an annoyed 'what do I do now?' behind her.
''Do sudokus!'' she yelled still annoyed about her luck in teachers.
She slumped onto the seat and put her head on the table. With half an hour her mood has changed from neutral to bad. Why can't anything good happen to her? Suddenly someone poked her. She sat up, irritated by that someone who did this unforgivable thing.
''WHAT?''
Looking up she saw a blonde boy with an orange outfit. Sakura almost fall off of her chair because of this orange ness. And this wasn't all. The boy was grinning like crazy.
''WHAT?'' she repeated.
''Hi! My name is Naruto Uzumaki! Believe it!''
Sakura almost turn a deaf ear because of him.
''Why is your hair pink?'' he yelled again.
''Stop yelling!''
She hopped up and hit the back of his head with her hand.
''Autch! Why did you do that for?''
''Because you were yelling you dumb!'' stated a girl with 4 blonde pigtails and dark green eyes.
It was surprisingly her desk mate Temari.
''Oh hi! My name is Sakura!''
Temari looked at her and smiled, holding out a hand.
''Temari Sabaku.''
Sakura took her hand and smiled back. At least there was a hope that she makes friends.
''What about me?'' whined Naruto.
''You're annoying,'' stated Sakura simply.
''Maybe! But why is your hair pink?''
''Because I like it that way.''
''But w-'' he started but was cut off by Temari.
''Shut up and go find Hinata. I'm sure she doesn't mind you!''
''Temariiiii!'' came a whine behind Sakura and Temari.
Sakura turned around and saw that same lavender eyed girl again.
''Oh come on Hinata! You know you-'' Temari started but was hushed by Hinatas' hand.
Temari shoved off Hinatas' hand and smiled apologetically at her.
''Sorry!''
''What are you talking there?'' shouted Naruto.
''Go away!'' snapped Sakura and glared at him.
It really wasn't her day. Not her day at all!
''Okay, okay! I'm going already! Calm down yourself.''
With that he went away to talk with someone else. That poor victim was one raven haired guy at the front of the class.
She glanced at the teacher but he was scribing something onto the paper and clearly didn't care that he should teach them. So Sakura turned her attention to girls, who stood next to her.
''So Sakura this is Hinata, '' said Temari pointing at the girl with lavender eyes.
''We have met, but I didn't get time to ask for your name,'' answered Sakura with a sweet smile.
''Y-yeah, t-thank you for h-helping me-e!''
''What happened?'' asked Temari, concerned.
''N-nothing. ''
''NOTHING?'' screeched Sakura, ''you call that nothing? That arrogant red PANDA pushed you! And he said that I'm a bitch!''
Suddenly Temari started laughing about nothing. Sakuras' eye twitched.
''What now Temari?''
''Never! Never have I heard that someone has called Gaara a red panda. I think I can never look at him again without that I start laughing,'' she said while still laughing.
''You know him?''
''Yeah. He's my little brother,'' Temari said that as if it was the most logical thing in the world.
Sakura looked at Temari like she had a disease. And then she remembered that she had punched that red-head. Oh she was in trouble.
''Sorry, sorry, sorry! I didn't want to!'' Sakura said and put her hands up in front of her.
Temari stopped laughing and looked at her funny.
''What?'' she asked not getting it.
''I sortakidamaybe punched him?'' Sakura said quietly.
She took few steps backwards and looked for exits. Temari started laughing again. Was that girl insane or something? Sakura punched his little brother and she starts laughing. Yep! She's crazy.
''Hinata I think I found my best friend. I love this girl!''
Temari hugged Hinata; she giggled and hugged her back. Correction! They both are insane. And she thought that Hinata was so sweet and good girl. Soon the laughing stopped and both girls looked at Sakura.
''Did you really punch him?''
Because Sakura didn't trust her voice she only nodded.
''Oh how he needed that,'' said Temari with a pleased voice.
''How come?'' Sakura asked puzzled.
''Because no one dears to do anything to him. Everyone fears him.''
Sakura jumped into air and turned around to see the source of that low but soft voice. It belonged to a tall guy with messy brown hair and brown eyes. Then Sakura saw that he had plastic cat ears on her head.
''Let me guess! You're red panda' and Temari' brother aren't you?'' Sakura asked with a sad expression.
''How did you know?''
''I would say the ears gave it away,'' she said, little freaked out, ''but why does everyone fear him? He's just arrogant little jerk. Although he isn't anything like little. He's freaking taller than me!''
''Sakura you're rambling!'' stated Temari.
''Oh sorry!''
''They fear him, because they know that he can hurt them. He maybe doesn't seem it but he can fight and pretty damn well. I'm bigger that he is but still I can't win,'' stated Temaris' brother.
''But why is he acting like this?''
''He doesn't get along with our father… I can't say anything else. Sorry,'' said Temari sadly.
Sakura understood that it was something that they didn't want to talk about.
''Okay. I understand Temari. But I still don't know what's your name.''
''Oh! My name is Kankuro.''
''Are you triplets or something?'' Sakura asked intrigued.
''No we all are born at different times. Kankuro went to school little later than supposed to. So he and Gaara are in the same class. I'm repeating the class…'' explained Temari.
''Yeah! Temari's dumb!'' said Kankuro laughing.
Temari started to say something but the bell rang before and cut her out. Had they really talked trough the class?
''W-what class d-do you-u have ne-ext Sakura?'' stuttered Hinata and picked up her purple bag.
''English, I think…''
''Oh goody! Hinata and I have English too. And you'll see Tenten too.''
Temari grabbed Sakura and her bag while running out of the class.
''Who the hell is Tenten?'' screeched Sakura and tried not to kill herself. Running with heels amid corridors full of teenagers isn't a safe thing you know.
''You'll see, oh you'll see!'' said Temari and made that mad scientist laugh. This isn't school; it's a god damn lunatic asylum.
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''I need foooood!!'' yelled Sakura while running trough a corridor full of students and teachers. And of course she did that on her 3 inch heeled boots. Thanks to Temari she had mastered running with them. She had to or Temari would drag Sakura trough hallways.
''And you said that we are insane! Look at yourself!'' yelled Tenten, trying to keep up with her.
Tenten was one of Temari' and Hinata' friends. She had brown hair what she held in two buns and brown eyes. She looked like Miki Mouse to Sakura but that wasn't important. Important was that you don't want to anger her. If you do you can found series of pointy things in yourself. She was little creepy, especially when Hinata' cousin Neji was near. She wore strapless red blouse that stopped just above her bellybutton, a fishnet shirt underneath that, long red skirt with two crossed belts, knee-length white stockings and black tennis shoes.
After few minutes of running they got into the cafeteria. Sakura bought chicken salad and water; she found Temari and Hinata sitting on a table with Kankuro, Shikamaru and Choji.
Shikamaru is Temari' lazy boyfriend and Choji is his best friend. Choji loves food and because of that he's quite big if you know what I'm saying.
Sakura and Tenten sat down and started eating like everyone else.
''So Temari are you and girls coming tomorrow?'' asked Kankuro slurping down his spaghetti.
''I think so. Hinata, Tenten?''
Both girls nodded to her. Sakura watched them dumbly.
''What's going on tomorrow?'' she asked.
''Oh of course! Every Saturday we go into a club named The Fire. It's a cool rock club. You want to come with us?'' said Tenten.
''Yeah come with us!'' cheered Temari.
Sakura thought about it. What else she had to do? Nothing.
''Why not! Count me in!''
''A-and you h-have to wear animal costume,'' whispered Hinata.
''Cool, I think I already now what animal I want to be.''
''And what animal that would be?'' Kankuro said perversely.
''You'll see!'' giggled Sakura.
Kankuro purred and moved his hand like a cat pawn.
Sakura laughed at him. Temari just hit him over the head.
''Don't flirt with Sakura you pervert!''
''Don't worry Temari I can take care of myself. And he isn't my taste.''
''Aww man! And I was hoping,'' he whined.
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Last class ended just now and Temari, Sakura, Hinata and Tenten were talking about the sleepover. They agreed upon meeting at Sakuras place tonight for sleepover. So tomorrow they can go all together to the club.
''So take everything you need with you and come to my house at 5 o'clock. I gave you my address but if you get lost then call me on the number you got,'' explained Sakura.
''We got it!'' said Tenten.
''Sakura do you want me to help you shop for costume?'' asked Temari.
''Sure. I have to go to my locker and then we can go.''
Sakura walked to her locker and took out her leather coat. She put it on. It reached to her knees but the zipper stopped at the hips.
''Wow. Cool coat!'' said Temari who put her own jacket on.
''So lets get to our rides.''
Tenten and Hinata left together with Hinatas car while Sakura and Temari walked towards their. They both stood next to their rides and an amused smile took place on their lips.
''Good taste Sakura, you use only the best.''
''Of course!''
Temari sat on her silver Honda CBR 1000RR and put on the helmet. Sakura did the same but her bike was Yamaha YZF-R1. Both girls started the engine and drove out of schools parking lot. When they got to the highroad, Sakura added gas so she flew past cars and trucks. Temari zoomed behind her making dangerous maneuvers to get past cars. Temari tried to get past of Sakura but she didn't let her. They drove into the huge parking lot and found good paces that were near the mall. Sakura took of her helmet and looked at Temari who did the same.
''Sakura you didn't tell me that you were so good,'' whined Temari.
''Temari you know very little about me. The real surprises are still coming!'' said Sakura and walked towards the mall.