This is my first Harry Potter story so I hope its good.
I don't own Harry potter, which sucks but I'll live. I hope you enjoy.
NOT YOUR STEREO TYPE
Hurt
Deceived
Confused
She ran
Those were just a few words she could say for herself. Lily Evans knew better, her mother always told her to watch her step before she fell. Why was it when she didn't listen that things happened? She stopped and looked where she was. She was outside near the pond She gazed in the water.
"I can see perfectly why he would do such a thing. I'm hideous "she mumbled.
That wasn't exactly true. Lily was average but she was the total difference of the stereotype perfect girl. Instead of blond hair she had fiery red hair, and instead of baby blue eyes she had emerald green. She was just a little chubby and she wasn't the dispy twist head either ... acutely she may be one of the smartest Hogwarts student alive. She looked deeper into the pool as if she was looking for something. She looked around again. She could see James and Amy Lawrence shadow. They were kissing and telling each other all this mushy stuff. This is okay and all except for one thing. James was dating Lily. So I'm sure you know why she was upset. She looked deeper and deeper into the pool until she lost her balance and fell deeper into the pond.
"Lily!!"
Who do you think it is? I know I know... its obvious who it might be but I warn you it's a not. By the way dose anyone want to make up a character? Just a name, physical attributes and 10 things about their personality . Please review!!
NOT YOUR STEREO TYPE
Hurt
Deceived
Confused
She ran
Those were just a few words she could say for herself. Lily Evans knew better, her mother always told her to watch her step before she fell. Why was it when she didn't listen that things happened? She stopped and looked where she was. She was outside near the pond She gazed in the water.
"I can see perfectly why he would do such a thing. I'm hideous "she mumbled.
That wasn't exactly true. Lily was average but she was the total difference of the stereotype perfect girl. Instead of blond hair she had fiery red hair, and instead of baby blue eyes she had emerald green. She was just a little chubby and she wasn't the dispy twist head either ... acutely she may be one of the smartest Hogwarts student alive. She looked deeper into the pool as if she was looking for something. She looked around again. She could see James and Amy Lawrence shadow. They were kissing and telling each other all this mushy stuff. This is okay and all except for one thing. James was dating Lily. So I'm sure you know why she was upset. She looked deeper and deeper into the pool until she lost her balance and fell deeper into the pond.
"Lily!!"
Who do you think it is? I know I know... its obvious who it might be but I warn you it's a not. By the way dose anyone want to make up a character? Just a name, physical attributes and 10 things about their personality . Please review!!