This is my first fanfiction so don't give me too much grief
Tamaki's what is coming
Chapter one
Tamaki P.O.V
I woke up this morning very excited for my cousin, Lucy, is coming to Japan. She is coming all the way from America. She said she had a surprise for me. I run to school after getting ready with a few wardrobe malfunctions (PJ bottoms instead of pants). I run in and find everyone in the club room. "Hello Tama-chan." Says Honey. "Good morning Honey." I say. "I have fantastic news everyone my cousin Lucy is coming down and going to school here. Now I have not seem her in around ten years, so I have no clue what she looks like. So treat her nicely." I say while mainly saying the last line to the twins. They both gave me a bored look. "Well I don't see why" says Hikaru "we should be nice if she's as dramatic as you." Finishes Kaoru. "I have actually met here and she is surprisingly calm. Well um most of the time." Says Kyoya. I've never known him to stand up for people, but I do remember her being in charge when we were all friends. Everyone was stunned and looked at him well except me of course. "Wait did Kyoya just stand up for someone?" asked the twins in unison. Haruhi, Mori, and Honey all nodding along still obviously stunned. "Well we have been friends for a while." You say. Then there was a knock on the door.
Lucy P.O.V.
"Man I'm beat." I say as I get off the train to my spirit Loki. "Yeah train rides are always exhausting princess." He says. Loki is my spirit and my friend. He has orange blond hair and always wears a pair of sunglasses. As soon as we get off the train I see a limo and a chafer that was holding a sign that said Heartfilia on it. I walked up to the man. "Are you Lucy Heartfilia?" The man asked me. I nodded and he opened the door for me. "Thank you very much. Loki come on I rad to see Tamaki already." I say getting excited. The car ride was silent until we got there. "Miss Heartfilia we are at the school." The chafer says while opening your door for you. "Hey Loki can you come inside with me please?" I ask Loki. "Sure princess. You know very well I'd do anything for you." That made me blush a bit, but I got over it and started walking leaving him behind. "Hey where are you going princess?" Loki asked running up to me. "Well you were being too slow." I said with a bit of attitude. I started jumping up and down. "I'm just so excited." I said in reply to the look Loki was giving me. Most of the kids in the hallway were either giving us weird looks or had hearts in their eyes. Well I was told from the office that Tamaki is in music room #3. I soon find it. "Okay Loki I was told this is a host club, so what I need you to do is walk in and see their reactions. Got it?" "Yeah sure, why not princess? Let's see what happens." He says starting to laugh. He opens the door and we get blinded by rose petals and lights. "Hello welcome to the host club." Says multiple people together. "Oh wait guys it's just a guy." "Yeah who knew you would be so openly gay." Says a different voice. "What makes you think I'm gay?" "Well this is a host club and let's just say it all guy host." Says two voices in unison. "For your information I am not gay. I have a princess I love!" reply's Loki getting frustrated. Okay now's the time to go, but I can't help but laugh. "Hahaha hello Tamaki." He looks at me confused. "Loki force gate close." I say still giggling. Tamaki looks at me confused. "What Tamaki you don't remember me? Well that's not fair." I say slightly pouting. "Lucy is that you and who was that man?" he said confused. "Well remember what I said about that surprise? Well I have been working on this for years, but I'm a mage in one of the most powerful guilds of them all, Fairy Tale." I say full of pride. Then a short young looking boy comes up and ask me "So what type of magic do you Luce-chan?" "Before I say anything else, will someone tell me your guy's names?" When I start looking around I notice a girl and all the guys staring at me. "Hi girly what's your name?" she looked shocked at first then looked at Tamaki, but he was still in shock from my surprise. "Um my names Haruhi."
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