Disclaimer: I don't own Total Drama, Chris McLean, or Chef Hatchet. The contestants are real life people I know. Their names have been changed to protect their identity.
Special Mentions: I want to state that i was inspired to write by fics belonging to "cragmiteblaster" and "agreenparrot". Even in my writing, I unintentionally adopted cragmiteblaster's style with confessionals and night scenes. Check out their stories, they rock!
Alright guys, welcome to my story! Total Drama: Reality Edition! I have been reading Total Drama fanfics here for about five years and I myself would act out Total Dramas in solitude without actually writing them. It was a hobby of mine, but recently i got the nerve to write one. My audience at start were a few of my friends but then i thought, why don't I post this on fanfiction? And this is how my story is born! I have it all written, all but the final chapter, so you can expect i wont be changing anything in it. The contestants are all characters I know in real life, their names have been changed. Even I am a contestant in it, let's see if you can figure out who I am, but I changed my name in it as well. Anyway, a list of the contestants a brief description about them can be found on my profile.
Just to clarify, there are mainly two groups of people, the schoolmates, and the ones who go to a Youth Club.
Total Drama: Reality Edition
Chapter 1: So It Begins…
A camera turned on revealing a beautiful island filled with rich plant life. Right ahead was the beach with a dock. A man in his early thirties stood in the middle of the dock.
"Hello, and welcome. I'm Chris McLean, and I'll be the host of the biggest show you will ever see in your lifetime." Flaunted Chris. "This is Wawanakwa island of Muskoka, Canada, and it will be the location of our show. We have chosen twenty seven lucky contestants to compete through challenges for the ultimate prize of one million dollars!"
He paused for dramatic effect before continuing.
"Some of them know each other beforehand and some of them may know almost every other contestant around. They will shortly arrive and meet their competition, so lift your feet, set the popcorn and get ready for Total… Drama… Reality Edition!"
(Cue theme song)
"And we are back, just in time too, our first contestants are arriving." Announced Chris as the theme song ended.
A boat indeed had arrived and dropped off two girls and a kid.
"EEEE! I am sooooooo excited to finally be here." Squealed a girl with jet black shoulder length hair excitedly.
"You must be Christina, the overly excited girl." Said Chris in annoyance.
"Yup, that's exactly what she is." Agreed a young kid with pale white skin and glasses.
"Daniel, Beatrice welcome to the island, how does it feel to be the first contestants to come to the show?" Asked Chris.
"I'm excited to know who else is here." Answered Beatrice. She was skinny and looked delicate.
"Well you won't have to ponder for long cause here is the next boat." Replied Chris.
The next boat had dropped of a girl and a guy; the girl had tan skin, dark brown hair, and wore glasses. The guy was a little on the chubby side, and had short brown hair.
"Hey wassup?" Asked the guy casually.
"Steve dude, how are you?" Inquired Chris as he fist bumped Steve.
"Awesome! So where are my competitors?" Asked Steve excitedly.
"They have yet to arrive." Chris turned to the girl who hadn't said a word yet. "Nora right? You seem speechless, it's normal, I have that effect on women."
"Umm hi." Stated Nora awkwardly.
Before Chris could reply there was a boat sound; the next boat had arrived revealing three guys. The first out was an average looking guy with slightly tan skin and gray eyes.
"You must be Chris, I'm honored to meet you sir." Greeted the newcomer warmly.
"Dude, Randall, I like you already." Said Chris with a huge grin at being complimented.
"Oh you're butt kissing already?" Intervened a small kid that appeared behind him.
"What? No Liam it was genuine, really!" Defended Randall.
"I believe him, and that's what matters." Finished Chris.
Liam face palmed and walked over to the others, when he noticed Christina and Beatrice he brightened up.
"LIAM! Half our group is here!" Cheered Christina happily.
"Yeah, I'm pretty certain the others will be here too since what are the odds that the three of us are here? So I think they will also be here." Reasoned Liam.
"I don't get what you said, but I hope they come too." Added Beatrice.
Liam face palmed again. The third guy had exited the boat as well and was now talking to Chris.
"Hi Chris this is going to be fun hopefully, and I'm ready for it." Proclaimed the guy with determination.
"All I can say for now is good luck James." Commented Chris.
At that moment there was another boat approaching. Out came a buff looking guy and a girl with tan skin, hazel hair and eyes, glasses and braces. She walked ahead of him and went towards Chris.
"Hola Chris! It's great to be here." She saluted.
"Hey, hey, if it isn't our resident Spanish descendant Lillian and her brawny boyfriend Bradley." Welcomed Chris.
"Hey." Uttered Bradley unenthusiastically.
"Bradley man, it's awesome to see you." Piped up Steve.
"Same here." He Replied.
Another boat had arrived dropping off three guys, two were tall and one was chubby.
"What an interesting group! Roni, Harvey, Toby, Welcome to Wawanakwa." Announced Chris as they docked.
"Thank you! It is a privilege to be here." Responded Toby Politely.
"This is a beautiful place indeed." Noted Harvey.
"Oh and the competitors are already here." Added Roni.
"Roni! Yay, only two left." Yelped Christina.
"I can already tell this is going to be an awesome experience." Stated Roni optimistically as he greeted Christina, Liam, Beatrice, and Daniel.
Toby walked over and stood next to Bradley after saying his hellos to everyone. Harvey went towards Steve and greeted him.
"Hello there Steve, how are you feeling about being here?" Inquired Harvey.
"This is the best man, this environment is like my favorite place to be." Answered Steve blissfully.
They were interrupted by a loud squeaky voice. It came from a girl who had just descended from a boat followed by another with a serious look on her face.
"Hi everyone. It's good to see you all." Announced a tall slim girl with silky black hair.
"Ah, you must be Janice; the girl with the obnoxiously high pitched voice." Stated Chris with mild annoyance." The producers warned me about you."
"My voice is not annoying!" Gasped Janice." Not that much at least."
"Who here thinks her voice is distressing?" Asked Chris while facing the others.
Almost everyone agreed.
"I don't think her voice is annoying at all." Defended Toby.
"Awww Thanks! Replied Janice gratefully.
During this time the other girl had joined the others silently, only greeting a few contestants.
"Hey where did… oh there you are." Said Chris as he searched for her." Lydia the serious one, you think you can manage this competition?"
"Time will tell." Was her only reply.
They awaited the next boat for a few minutes while they chatted among themselves, then one came bearing two youngsters. One had green eyes and looked energetic, while the other had brown features and seemed shy and nervous.
"Hiyah, I'm Alex." Spoke the energetic one.
He went over to some of the ones he knew, mainly Daniel and Roni. Christina was about to hug him but he backed away looking annoyed.
"Alex!" Nagged Christina.
"No!" Replied Alex." You're going to pinch my cheeks hard."
The other kid slowly walked towards the end of the group and stood alone.
"Oh great, preteens, that limits this show to a pg-13 or less rating." Lamented Chris.
Daniel walked over to the eight year old.
"Hey Mark, How are you?" Asked Daniel.
"Good." He replied meekly.
"We are going to have fun here." Encouraged Daniel.
"Yeah I guess." Responded Mark a little more comfortably.
Soon another boat arrived. A blond guy came out followed by another escorting a nervous girl.
"Be careful! Don't drop me! You're shaking! Help!" Bombarded the girl to the guy leading her. She was short and slim, tanned and had black hair.
"Relax Trixie! We crossed already." Calmed the guy. He was very muscular and had good looks.
"What is going on here?" Interrupted Chris.
"She's afraid of water." Explained the blond one.
"I'm assuming you are the brothers Remi and Dominick." Said Chris.
"Yeah, I'm Dominick and he's Remi." Said the muscular one.
Dominick and Remi joined the others after getting acquainted.
Two boats arrived next, out of one of them a girl in a skirt came out.
"Hi, So this is Wawanakwa?" Questioned the girl in awe.
"In the flesh, uhh, soil, atoms. Whatever. Yes, this is Wawanakwa." Answered Chris." You must be Sharon."
Meanwhile, the second boat dropped off two more contestants; an average looking guy and a woman in her late forties.
"Opsy Daisy." Said the guy as he helped the woman off the boat.
"Thank you Seamus dear." Thanked the woman.
"I'm surprised to see you two come together." Commented Chris.
"I met Miss Alice on the port so we decided to take one boat instead of two separate ones." Reasoned Seamus.
"Oh hello everyone, how are you all? Impressive group we have here." Noted Miss Alice.
They were greeted warmly, while another boat had brought three foreign looking girls.
In the front was a tall blond girl who looked pretty excited.
"Oh my God! I'm on a reality TV show! I can't believe it!" Chanted the girl.
"Calm down Marianne, we are on air." Cautioned a large looking white blonde.
"It's justified, being on TV is exciting." Eased the third girl. She was average height, also white, with hair reaching all the way down to her elbows.
"The American sisters and the Australian girl." Noted Chris." I was wondering when you were going to arrive."
"Check it out Phoebe, the group is here." Pointed Marlene at four contestants.
"With Marlene and Phoebe here the whole group is united." Proclaimed Liam." Let's keep it that way."
"We all know Christina is going to get herself out early." Joked Roni.
"Hey!" She Scolded.
The Last Boat had dropped it's occupant off, completing the cast of twenty seven contestants.
The guy had a rough exterior and a dangerous look on his face. He stepped off the deck and was welcomed by Chris. He scanned the cast and found several familiar faces. His gaze however stopped on someone in particular.
"Beatrice, my love! What a wonderful surprise to find you here. This competition just got ten folds better." He said.
"Oh no! Harvey is here." Whispered Beatrice to Christina." He even followed me to this place."
He walked over to her and hugged her tightly. She looked Nervous.
"It appears we have two contestants sharing the same name, to distinguish between both Harveys we shall use the first letter of their family names." Suggested Chris." What are your family names now?"
The Ahmad that had just arrived spoke up. "Hammond, My name is Harvey Hammond."
"Ok. What about yours?" Asked Chris as he turned to the tall Ahmad.
"Harvey Ramos." Stated Harvey.
"Then we shall go with Harvey H and Harvey R." Concluded Chris." Now, since we are all here, it is time to give you a tour of the island. First here we have the dock, this place will be your final destination when you get eliminated."
He paused to laugh teasingly." When someone gets voted off, sacked, or medivacked, they will board the boat of losers and be transported away from the island and ultimately away from the prize. Let's move o… Yes, what is it?"
"What does modivacked mean?" Inquired Daniel.
"It's medivacked, and it is when someone is evicted due to injuries." He laughed condescendingly.
"Injuries!?" Gulped Trixie nervously.
"Yup. Now moving on." Concluded Chris as he lead them to a camp location with a bonfire in the middle surrounded by many tree stumps and logs." This is the place nightmares are born; here is where the Bonfire ceremonies will be held. Whenever there needs to be a vote off, this is the place we you will be attending to eliminate someone.
"Then I hope I never come here." Noted Sharon.
Chris then led them to a large hall with several rows of tables and chairs." This is the mess hall, you will have your meals here. This reminds me, there is one more person you should meet." He went through the room in the back and called for someone. He came back followed by a bulky black man in an apron, and was holding a cleaver.
"This is Chef Hatchet, he will be my main assistant on this island, mainly he will be cooking your meals." Introduced Chris.
Chef grunted." Listen here maggots. I will make you yo' meals and you will eat them without complainin'. Got it?" He growled aggressively.
Most of the contestants were terrified and nodded quickly.
"Alright, now that that is over with, lets move on shall we?" Urged Chris.
He took them to a small wooden hut-like structure." This is the outhouse."
"Ewww. Don't we get bathrooms like normal people?" Questioned Christina disgustingly.
"Actually you do, but this is for another reason; you can use this to share your feelings and opinions with the world through camera. You enter it whenever you like to express anything that you want to say. I call it a confessional!" Explained Chris.
"Will the other campers know what we say in it?" Asked Toby.
"Nope, in ninety nine percent of the times, this will be private except the part that the whole world will see it." Chris clarified." Why don't some of you try it, and share your opinions concerning everything since your arrival so far. Meanwhile I will take you to where you will be staying."
(Confessionals)
Marianne: I am on TV wooo!
Lillian: This is such a great opportunity, this place will be perfect to spend my vacation with Bradley.
Harvey H: First I thought this was going to be a waste of my time, I don't want the money. But then I found Beatrice, and it all became worth it. I WILL MAKE HER LOVE ME.
Beatrice: Great, just when I thought I found some place away from him, he pops right back. Ugh I will never get to enjoy myself.
Christina: EEEEE! I am so excited. This is going to be so much fun.
Toby: This is a chance of a lifetime, that money can really do amazing things to my family and me. I have to try really hard to win.
Miss Alice: A nice place to relax and get my mind off of teaching for a while, and the money will be a great bonus too.
Liam: Muhahaha! I am going to win this competition, they won't know what hit them. (He smiles maliciously).
Chris had led them to the place they would call their home for the duration of the contest. There were three cabins, each with two rooms, one for girls and one for guys.
"Put your luggage here for now, you will be back later to unpack." Instructed Chris." Follow me."
Soon all the contestants were standing in front of the foot of a big mountain, it wasn't steep though.
"I forgot to mention that the tour ended after I showed you your rooms." Noted Chris.
"Then what are we doing here?" Questioned Janice.
"Good Question. This is the site of your first challenge." Answered Chris smugly shocking the contestants." I hope you are wearing your running shoes otherwise this is going to be troublesome to you. Your first challenge is to reach the top of the mountain as fast as you can. Trust me, you really don't wanna be one of the last people to reach the top. In other words, it's a race."
"Already? We are hungry, and tired, and…" Roni's complaining was interrupted by a gunshot. The contestants were spooked, Bradley had even tumbled down from the shock.
Chris had fired a race pistol in the air." Go!"
There was a moment of awkward silence in which no one knew what to do.
"I said go, start, commence, move, get your butts up that mountain." Repeated Chris.
No one moved yet, while each one looked at the other. Suddenly Alex started running up the mountain, that was the spark that got everyone else running as well.
"And they are off! Who will win, who will be the last one to make it to the top, and will anyone get medivacked from day one? Stay tuned to find out." Summed up Chris.
(Confessionals)
Alex: Why weren't they running? He said go. At least I got to be first.
Roni: I should have expected something like this to happen.
Phoebe: Typical Roni, not one hour on something and he is already complaining.
Sharon: Oh no, I'm wearing a skirt and unsuitable shoes. Darn Chris for not giving us time to change in to something more convenient.
Bradley: I despise guns.
Harvey R: Damn! Already challenges and sports? This is going to be a long competition.
The contestants were currently racing up the mountain, most were close and not far apart. In the lead were Dominick, Bradley, and Harvey H. They were neck and neck
"First place is mine guys, no need to try." Mocked Dominick condescendingly.
"Not this time bro." Replied Bradley confidently.
"Out of my way both of you." Yelled Harvey H as he sped up in front of them.
They looked at each other before hurrying up as well. A short distance behind them were several others that were running on a similar pace.
"Oh man! I was in first place. How did they beat me?" Wined Alex.
"Because you are younger." Stated Liam plainly who was right next to him.
Alex scoffed childishly. Also near them were James and Remi.
"This is fun." Commented James.
"Yeah? We'll see how fun it is when I beat you." Challenged Remi.
"Oh so that's how it's going to be. You're on!" Replied James.
Lillian had accelerated to right behind them followed by Seamus.
"Bradley is going to win this. I know it." She stated happily.
"But there's Dominick too." Interjected Seamus.
"I have faith in him." She ended confidently.
(Confessionals)
Dominick: I know Bradley he can go fast initially but loses stamina rapidly, so he won't stay in the lead for long. That Harvey However, I don't know him, so anything could happen. I know I will win though.
Harvey H: The advantage for winning could be something I can use to help make Beatrice fall for me, so I am going to push myself very hard to win. No one will take this from me.
Seamus: This challenge is fun, though I am not going to exert myself too hard or else I may become an early target for elimination.
James: I think Remi and I are going to get along well.
Liam: I am going to stay under the radar in the beginning, be extra nice to everyone, and offer some of my skills. And then when the right time comes I will unleash my real side and dominate this competition.
Not too far behind is a group of five who were also maintaining equal speeds, at the front of which were Randall and Roni.
"Hi Roni, long time no see huh." Said Randall nicely.
"Yeah. You can say it's enough time to forgive and forget." Added Roni as he was trying to keep up.
"Exactly. Let bygones be bygones." Agreed Randall with a smile on his face.
"You are delusional if you think I can ever trust you again. Go find someone else to trick and dig up their gold instead." Snapped Roni. With that he sped up leaving Randall behind looking confused.
Harvey R and Phoebe were close to them so they observed the exchange.
"Weird!" Commented Phoebe.
"Roni told me stuff about him, I understand his anger." Defended Harvey.
They hadn't realized they were slowing down till Daniel zoomed ahead of them.
"Yeah! You gotta hurry or you won't win." Advised Daniel cheekily.
(Confessionals)
Daniel: I'm ahead of Christina. I bet I can even last in this competition longer than her.
Phoebe: I hope Marlene can make it alright through the challenge too.
Randall: I just want to be friends again. I know he is upset but I thought he would have gotten over it by now.
Roni: Mean or not, I just can't ignore the bitter feelings his presence is digging up.
Janice, Lydia, and Steve were steadily ascending the mountain, followed closely by Marianne and Sharon. Janice looked to be getting tired quickly, Steve was not showing any signs of weakness, and Lydia had a straight face.
"This…is…exhausting." Panted Janice." How are you…not tired?"
"Hehe, You gotta know how to save energy on mountains." Answered Steve smugly.
"Tell me!" Ordered Janice breathlessly.
Steve just laughed and hurried ahead. Lydia as well surpassed Janice. Janice was now on the same level as Sharon and Marianne who were getting to know each other.
"Oh so you were in the MUN too? Awesome!" Said Marianne.
"Yeah, it was fun." Answered Sharon.
"How…do you two…have…any breath left?" Asked a dumbfounded Janice.
"Come on Janice, I thought you were more fit than that." Pitied Sharon.
Janice was too out of breath to answer.
(Confessionals)
Janice: I am not out of shape! I just hadn't eaten yet. So I don't have any energy.
Marianne: Haha poor Janice. Sharon was nice, they all looked nice actually.
Steve: The secret is to not rush in to it directly but rather to take a steady approach so you don't lose energy.
To the back were six contestants who were slightly struggling to climb the rocky cliff. Ahead of which were Trixie and Christina.
"Oooft this is hard!" Complained Christina.
"I know, but at least we aren't in the rear." Encouraged Trixie.
"Hurry up Beatrice!" Commanded Christina.
"I'm doing the best I can Tina." Replied Beatrice helplessly.
Beatrice was a few meters behind them next to a breathless Toby.
"I am so tired." Stated Toby.
"I know how you feel." Agreed Beatrice.
Behind them were Nora and Mark who were finding the mountain's rocky surface troubling. They kept on slipping on the rocks and losing their footing. Mark was about to slide down after slipping but Nora caught his hand midway through.
"Thanks." He said shyly.
"Be careful, go ahead on front of me so you won't be in danger." Instructed Nora kindly.
He silently did as told and they resumed climbing upwards. Bringing up the rear were Marlene and Miss Alice. They were completely out of it.
"Oh dear, I am no longer capable of so much physical effort." Lamented Miss Alice.
Marlene was having just as much trouble as her." I'm not good at climbing."
(Confessionals)
Miss Alice: I knew we would be undergoing challenges but I underestimated their level.
Marlene: It would suck to lose my first challenge. I better try harder if I want to survive the first elimination.
Trixie: Some challenges had better be less physical and focus on other aspects or else I wont last long.
Nora: This place is dangerous for a kid Mark's age, the producers should have known better than to bring an eight year old and give him tasks such as climbing a mountain.
Mark: I hate Mountains.
As Dominick had predicted, Bradley had slowed considerably, enough to let the challenge be between Harvey H and himself. They had almost reached the summit.
"You're going down!" Challenged Harvey H.
"Keep dreaming buddy." Denied Dominick.
They were both going as fast as they could and the finish line was in plain view now. They both crossed, it appears that they were tied but Chris managed to catch it on camera.
"We have a winner!" Chris said enthusiastically." Dominick! And Harvey H is a close second."
"Damn!" Cursed Harvey H.
In the commotion Bradley had crossed as well. James and Remi were both closing in followed closely by Seamus and Lillian. They all crossed consecutively. After them were Liam and Alex.
"Woohoo! I'm the first girl to finish the race." Cheered Lillian.
"Wait so who crossed first? James or me?" Asked Remi impatiently.
"You both crossed together." Stated Chris uninterestedly.
"What?! A tie? That's lame." Complained Remi.
"Oh I'm the first of the group, cool." Commented Liam to himself.
"Phew! That was tiring, but also fun." Breathed Seamus.
(Confessionals)
Remi: Maybe I overreacted, I don't want him to think I'm a jerk.
Dominick: Yeah baby! I won. They should all know who they are up against.
Harvey H: Fuck! I hate second place.
Bradley: I think I did good enough. Third is perfectly fine with me.
Alex: Yay!I beat Daniel and Mark.
Liam: I reached with a perfect rank. No opinions can be made about my strengths and weaknesses yet.
Roni had slowed down a bit after speeding up at first, he was passed by Daniel and Randall who both crossed the line next. Roni was right after them followed by Phoebe and Harvey R.
"I almost beat you Alex." Said Daniel.
"Haha but you didn't." Laughed Alex.
"Oh cool, I'm the second girl." Brightened Phoebe.
"That leaves Toby to reach the end." Commented Harvey R to Roni.
"Yeah! He isn't the last one behind though so hopefully he won't lose." Added Roni.
"Good job Liam! You made it early." Congratulated Randall.
"Don't talk to me, I know what you're trying to do." Blocked Liam. He then walked over to Roni.
"Did He try to sweet-talk you in to being his friend again?" Asked Roni Knowingly.
"Yup. I didn't give him a chance though." Replied Liam.
"We are appearing mean to the world but I just can't let my guard down because I really do want to bury the hatchet and start over." Reasoned Roni." But I know that he will end up doing the same thing, so I won't succumb."
"I know, I understand completely." Comforted Liam.
(Confessionals)
Phoebe: Out of twelve girls, I was the second to make it to the top of the mountain. I like my odds.
Roni: Now to see who's going to lose, I hope Mark does ok, He has an age disadvantage.
Harvey R: My feet are going to be sore tomorrow.
Randall: Why are they treating me like this? I'm trying to be nice and move on.
Steve had gained a fair distance from the others behind him, when he crossed the line, there was a period of time where no one was crossing.
"Over so soon? I was starting to enjoy myself." Said Steve.
"Are you kidding me?" Asked Harvey R Incredulously.
From a distance the contestants that have arrived could see the progress the remaining ones were doing. Currently Lydia was leading the way followed by Sharon and Marianne.
"Great! We finally reached the end." Lit up Marianne.
"Finally!" Joined Sharon.
The three of them crossed the line, and sat down immediately to rest.
"Wait what happened to Janice? She was right behind me." Inquired Steve.
"She slowed down." Answered Sharon.
"Good job, you made it." Complimented Seamus to Sharon.
"Thanks!" Sharon Replied gratefully." I hope we never do that again."
At that moment two more people finished the race; Christina and Trixie.
"And that leaves seven lagging contestant who haven't crossed yet." Commented Chris.
"Trixie, I expected more from you." Joked Dominick condescendingly.
"Ha-Ha, well that was all I could do. Deal with it." She snapped.
"You know I'm just kidding Trix." Dominick assured.
Phoebe walked over to Christina and just smiled smugly at her. Christina looked at her for a while before blurting out.
"Ok just say it, you got here before me." Burst out Christina.
"What? Me the saint? I wouldn't do such a thing." Answered Phoebe in pretend innocence.
"Yeah right, then what was that look?" Asked an unconvinced Christina.
"Nothing." She replied with a faint smile.
(Confessionals)
Christina: So…tired…can't…breath.
Steve: Woo! Aren't mountains awesome?
Trixie: I know Dominick jokes like that, but I was in no mood for jokes.
The remaining racers were slow and struggling, at the front was Beatrice, she was doing better than the rest and was nearing the top with Janice behind. She would have reached faster but was unable to grasp the rocks to climb better.
"Just a little more." She panted.
She then noticed Janice getting nearer to her. She tried to hurry up.
"Come on Janice! You can do it." Cheered Sharon.
"Hurry Beatrice, you are so close." Countered Phoebe.
They both put a little more effort leading them to both reach, Janice a second before Beatrice.
"Thank God." Breathed Janice heavily.
"You let her beat you." Scolded Christina to Beatrice.
"I don't care, all that matters is she reached." Defended Phoebe.
Toby reached the top as well. He dropped to the ground in massive exhalation.
"Water." He whispered breathlessly.
"Chris laughed, but indulged." And the bottom four remain."
Indeed only four had not completed the challenge. Nora was helping Mark, they were going slow but by helping each other they weren't having a lot of trouble. Marlene had fortunately gained an upper hand and made some quick progress to the first spot leaving Miss Alice in the back.
"You kids are lucky to have all this energy." Said Miss Alice despondently." In my days I was like you, but now I am done with."
"Don't say that Miss Alice, You are still youthful, you can do it." Encouraged Seamus.
They were all going as fast as they could manage considering the circumstances. Marlene was the first to cross the finish line, followed by Mark who had gained an upper hand from being helped by Nora. It was now between Nora and Miss Alice.
"You did it buddy." Roni congratulated Mark as he ruffled his hair.
The kid was too exhausted to react. Marlene was met by Phoebe who congratulated her as well.
"That was some race huh?" Stated Phoebe.
"I know." Finished Marlene.
(Confessionals)
Seamus: Miss Alice was my favorite teacher from school. I'm glad she is the one who is here.
Toby: I love walking, but hate running.
Janice: I have no idea how I managed to finish the race.
Marlene: I hope the consequences for coming in the last places aren't too bad.
Dominick: This challenge helped figure out who is weak and who has potential.
Nora was almost there, Miss Alice was not far behind, they both looked completely worn out. In a final surge of effort, Nora sped up and crossed the lines with Miss Alice after her only a couple of minutes. The race was now over.
"And we are done with the first challenge of Total Drama: Reality Edition." Summed up Chris.
"So what do I win?" Asked Dominick Impatiently.
"Hold on a little, there is something left to do before announcing results." Replied Chris.
He walked over and brought a box that had envelopes in it.
"Each of you take one." He said as the contestants gathered to take an envelope." Now open them.
Everyone started opening their envelopes.
"It has a picture of a hand with muscles." Declared Alex as he opened his.
"Me too." Joined Liam.
"Mine is a picture of an eye, and on a green background, yours are red." Piped up Randall.
"Eww, what is this? Why does this have a picture of an armpit?" Said Christina grossed out as she presented her blue armpit card.
"Attention campers!" Shouted Chris." Everyone with a blue card stand on this side, the ones who have a green picture move to the other side, and the rest with a red card stand in the middle.
They did as instructed. After all shuffling about had died down there were three equal groups.
"You guys form the team known as the Crimson Pecs." Said Chris to the group in the middle.
The group was made up of Harvey H, Alex, Steve, Liam, Marianne, Nora, Trixie, Seamus, and Dominick.
"Nice!" Seamus fist bumped Steve.
"What does pecs mean?" Asked Alex.
"Muscles." Answered Liam intelligently.
Dominick and Harvey H stared intently at each other. Then Dominick offered his hand with a welcoming smile. Harvey H took it.
"Glad to have you on the team." Said Dominick. Harvey H smiled in return.
The group on the left included Harvey R, Daniel, Mark, Randall, Janice, Lillian, Lydia, Roni, and Beatrice.
"You are now officially known as team Grassy Pupils." Announced Chris.
"Cool! You and I are in the same team." Addressed Daniel to Mark.
Lillian and Janice half hugged each other." Hey sista, we are going to be the number one te… wait Bradley is not with me? Nooo!"
Roni scowled at having Randall in his team and turned to Harvey R. "Shit!" He whispered.
"You should be happy you are in the green team." Eased Harvey R.
"And that leaves the rest of you in the blue team; Navy Pits." Finished Chris.
Christina, James, Marlene, Miss Alice, Phoebe, Remi, Sharon, Toby, and Bradley were the ones left. They weren't too crazy about the team name, but focused on seeing who they ended up with instead.
"Yay! Three of our group is here!" Cried Christina to Marlene and Phoebe.
"Alright!" James and Remi both cheered at finding themselves together.
(Confessionals)
Lillian: I was really looking forward to be with Bradley, this team business is jeopardizing my vacation.
Daniel: I like my team, Roni and Mark are in it and Tina isn't.
Dominick: Pecs as in muscles? Damn straight.
Trixie: I'm relieved to be in Dominick's team, I wish Lydia was with us too though.
Mark: That girl was nice, why couldn't she be with my team?
Nora: That kid Mark is in a different team, I hope someone can look after him now that I can't.
Marianne: So Sharon isn't in our team, I can make other friends.
Toby: Dammit! Harvey R and Roni are in another team.
Lydia: This means that teamwork will be involved in the future. (she sighs)
Marlene: It's a blessing that Phoebe and I are in the same team, we do everything together.
Christina: Did I mention the team name sucks? But at least my teammates are good, most of them.
"And now it is time to reveal the results." Announced Chris." Each team will have a leader, that leader is determined through your order of reaching the finish line. Since Dominick was the first, he is now team captain of the Crimson Pecs."
Dominick's team applauded him." Thank you, thank you, with me leading the team we shall crush all opposition." He assured snidely.
"That means that Bradley is the captain of his team." Continued Chris.
Bradley was also cheered for, he silently accepted his role.
"And for the grassy pupils, none of you reached particularly early, the first one though was Lillian so she is team captain." Finished Chris." Well that team is gunna lose early."
"Hey!" She whined." Know that I won't let my team down."
"Anyway since Dominick was the first to reach the top he wins first place for his team and a prize." Resumed Chris ignoring Lillian.
The red team cheered loudly, thanking Dominick and patting his back.
"What is the prize?" Asked Marianne.
"You win a handy dandy can of bug spray, and you are going to need it. The cabins you will be staying in wont ward off the island pests." Announced Chris.
The team looked content with the prize and went off to the cabins after being dismissed by Chris. Chris then turned to the blue team.
"And as for you, well I have a surprise for you." He said while containing his laughter. The team was getting excited now." Since Miss Alice was the last one to cross the line, she earned you your first elimination."
"What? A challenge and an elimination on our first day?" Asked Sharon incredulously.
"Yup. Meet me back in one hour at the bonfire ceremony to vote off one person from your team." Answered Chris, then he turned to the green team." You have earned middle place for this challenge so you have earned immunity from voting this round without a prize however."
The green team was satisfied to be safe from elimination today and went towards the cabins leaving the blue team looking amongst each other.
(Confessionals)
Harvey R: Middle place suits me. I don't mind it at all.
Steve: There could be spiders, particularly tarantulas in the forest, so the bug spray is very handy. I hate Tarantulas. (He shivers)
Phoebe: So we lost our first challenge, we can always do better.
Miss Alice: I am responsible for my team's loss. I have to take the punishment for it.
The red and green teams were currently unpacking in their cabins after having moved in.
In the girls' side of the Pupils' cabin Janice, Lillian, Lydia and Beatrice were assigning beds, there were two pairs of bunk beds on opposite sides of the walls.
"Can I please take the lower side?" Asked Janice politely." I prefer to be close to the ground."
"Of course. I'll take the upper one then." Offered Lillian.
"Which one do you want?" Asked Lydia to Beatrice.
"Umm the upper one." Hesitated Beatrice.
On the boys' side of the cabin, there was an extra pair of beds. Roni took the left bottom bed with Mark above him, while Daniel was above Harvey R on the right side. Randall took the bottom bed opposite of the door.
"Finally we are at the end of this long day." Said Roni as he flopped on the bed.
"Ahhh my feet are killing me." Complained Harvey R.
"Who do you think the blue team is going to vote for?" Asked Daniel.
"Don't worry I think Christina will be alright, maybe Miss Alice." Comforted Roni.
"We shall see." Ended Harvey R.
The red team were currently settling themselves in their room.
"Did you spray that stuff on the edges of the room?" Asked Steve.
"Yeah the can is with the girls now." Answered Seamus.
"Things are going good, a strong team, an advantage, and one team is already outnumbered. We are headed to the win for sure." Proclaimed Dominick.
"Don't be too sure, what if we get challenges that are luck or skill based." Piqued Liam.
"No matter what domain, we are going to crush them." Replied Harvey H.
"I can't wait for tomorrow." Said Alex Anxiously.
The three girls were comfortable in their side having less space occupied.
"We are off to a good start. And to think that if you had reached just a minute after Miss Alice, we would have been in the bottom." Said Trixie to Nora.
"I know, that was lucky." She added.
"It's alright, what's important is that we are ahead of the competition now." Commented Marianne.
"True." Finished Trixie.
(Confessionals)
Liam: So guess what, my team is mostly made of muscled idiots who are too arrogant. We will see how long that arrogance will last.
Beatrice: I don't know any of the girls on my team, it feels weird to be with them.
Nora: I'm at the bottom in my team, I have to put something to the table to insure they don't vote me off early.
The Navy Pits were gathered around the bonfire waiting for Chris to arrive.
"I would like to apologize to you all for leading us to elimination." Spoke up Miss Alice." I shall accept my fate."
"It's alright Miss, it wasn't your fault, you couldn't help it." Comforted Sharon.
Chris then showed up. "Welcome to the first ever Bonfire ceremony. You can see that is not a place of joy. You will now vote for the person you wish to eliminate. I have one piece of information I forgot to mention earlier; in some challenges there will be certain people who gain immunity from being voted off within the loser team itself. In this case Bradley is that person since he was the first person to reach the finish line from this team. So none of you can vote him out."
"Cool." Stated Bradley.
(Confessionals)
Christina: I vote for the teacher, what is she doing here anyway?
Bradley: Marlene was the second to last of our team to reach, I prefer to keep Miss Alice.
Sharon: I don't want Miss Alice to go, she could help the team in other challenges, I vote Marlene.
James: Well Miss Alice did cost us the challenge, and the others don't have a reason to be voted out so my vote can only go to Miss Alice.
Miss Alice: I know what I have to do, I cannot destroy someone else's chances for my own desires.
The campers were back to the campfire. Chris was standing in front of them holding a tray of marshmallows.
"You have all cast your votes. I here have eight marshmallows, one for every one of you who will continue. When I call out your name, you shall receive a marshmallow. The person who does not receive a marshmallow will be eliminated and must walk the dock of shame and board the boat of losers which means you are out and cannot come back." Lectured Chris. "The extra sugary chocolate dipped marshmallow belonging to the immunity winner goes to Bradley."
"The first marshmallow of the night goes to…" Continued Chris.
"Sharon"
Chris threw the marshmallow to her, she caught it happily.
"James"
"Phoebe"
"Toby"
"Christina"
"Remi"
Two contestants remained; Marlene and Miss Alice. Marlene looked cautious while Miss Alice looked defeated.
"Both of you performed terribly today and have reason to be eliminated." Spoke Chris." The final marshmallow goes to…"
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"Marlene" Said Chris as he threw her her marshmallow. She eased up slightly. Miss Alice closed her eyes and bowed her head.
"Miss Alice, that means that you are our first boot. The dock of shame awaits."
Miss Alice stood up and headed to the dock, Chef brought her luggage and loaded it on the ship." Well everybody, I wish you all the best of luck" She gave her goodbyes to everyone and got on the boat which carried her away.
"And that is it for day one, you may all go to your cabin." Finished Chris as he walked away.
"And so ends day one of our show, the three teams have been formed." Summed up Chris." Our first elimination may not have been dramatic but be assured that in the future things wont go so smoothly. What will be the next challenge? Which team will be victorious? And who will face elimination? Tune in next time on Total Drama: Reality Edition."
Votes:
Bradley: Marlene
Christina: Miss Alice
James: Miss Alice
Marlene: Miss Alice
Miss Alice: Herself
Phoebe: Miss Alice
Remi: Marlene
Sharon: Marlene
Toby: Marlene
Total:
Marlene: 4
Miss Alice: 5 (Eliminated)
Teams:
Grassy Pupils: Beatrice – Daniel – Harvey R – Janice – Lillian – Lydia – Mark – Randall – Roni
Crimson Pecs: Harvey H – Alex – Steve - Liam - Marianne – Nora – Trixie – Seamus – Dominick
Navy Pits: Christina – James – Marlene – Phoebe – Remi – Sharon – Toby – Bradley
Eliminated: Miss Alice
The teacher bites the dust, with dignity. She gave up her own chances to redeem herself and serve her team. It was only logical that Miss Alice would not make it far, she was not cut off for the physical challenges that are to come. Anyway, tell me who you liked, who you didn't, who you think will go far, who seems like the bad type... I love a detailed review, comments are highly appreciated. Criticism is respected and might be taken into account. I wont take too long to upload, probably a chapter every few days so keep in touch and review! :D
Miss Alice: Oh dear, first out! How embarrassing. My dear readers, review in my honor!