Hello, this is Mksfroogle! I have had this story in my head for ages and I just have to let it all out now. I have all of the chapters written out, I just have to type them and get them more detail. Here are the changes that I made: There is no Harry Potter. There is Marie Lily Potter who is the girl who lived. The rest you will find out on your own. Hope you enjoy! Warning: There will be violence, some swearing, talk of disturbing abuse and some fluff and lemon in this fanfic. But most of that will occur in later chapters. I do not own Harry Potter. Please Review!

My name is Marie Lily Potter. I am the girl-who-lived and a witch. In my first year at Hogwarts I found out quite a lot of things. There is an evil Dark Wizard out for my blood, I survived a killing curse as a baby, my parents went to Hogwarts, and Dumbledore is one strange old man. These things changed my life forever and I will never be the same because of it.

First Year at Hogwarts: Marie Potter was sorted into Gryffindor and became rivals with Draco Malfoy. She made friends with Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger and together they stopped Voldemort, who was on the back of Professor Quirrel's head, from getting the Sorcerer's Stone.

Second Year at Hogwarts: After escaping the Dursleys' with the Weaslys' she met Lucius Malfoy in Diagon Alley and Ginny Weasley. She also found out she was a Parselmouth and could speak to snakes. Marie Potter also killed a Basilisk and met a memory of Tom Riddle from his diary who she found out was Voldemort and destroyed the diary thus destroying the memory and Ginny Weasley.

Third Year at Hogwarts: She tried to run away from the Dursleys' but the Knight Bus took her to the Leaky Cauldron. Sirius Black escaped Azkaban and she was curious that everyone told her to not go looking for him. Why would she go looking for someone who wants to kill her? Professor Lupin, who knew her parents, made friends with her and taught her the Patronus charm to ward off dementors. Buckbeak the Hippogriff was going to get sentenced to death, she found out that Peter Pettigrew framed Sirius who was her Godfather, Professor Lupin was a werewolf and Snape stood in front of said werewolf to save her. However, Pettigrew got away thus ruining Sirius' chances of proving himself innocent, and so Marie and Hermione went back in time with a time turner and freed Sirius. Snape, her hated Potions Professor, had never been more furious with her.

Fourth Year at Hogwarts: Marie was entered in the Triwizard Tournament for Hogwarts along with Cedric Diggory. Mad-eye Moody was the new Defense against the dark arts Professor. Ron Weasley avoided her and many people said she was cheating. She faced a Hungarian Horntail and everyone liked her again. Ay the Yule ball she went with someone from Durmstrang, the second task, she rescued her Durmstrang date from Merpeople. Then at the third task, she and Cedric were protkeyed to a graveyard, Cedric was murdered and Voldemort was resurrected using her blood. Voldemort now looked like snake. He was hairless, pale, had slits for nostrils and thin lips and red eyes. His fingers were long and his nails were sharp. He looked murderous but she escaped with Cedric's dead body and they found out that Mad-eye moody was really Barty Crouch Jr., one of Voldemort's followers.\

Fifth year at Hogwarts: Marie barely escaped Dudley, her cousin, and his gang but ran into a few dementors. She ended up having to go to the ministry of magic for a hearing because she used magic while underage. Umbridge became the new defense against the dark arts Professor and everyone hates Marie now because they think she is lying about Voldemort's return. However, some people believe her and join the DA club in which Marie teaches them Defense because Umbridge does nothing. Snape teaches her Occlumency after Arthur Weasley gets attacked by Nagini, Voldemort's familiar snake. Dumbledore has been avoiding Marie and she gets upset when he leaves and Umbridge takes over. Then she gets a vision from Voldemort. Sirius is in trouble!

"Avada Kedavra!"

Marie heard this screech and turned to see Bellatrix had cast the killing curse on Sirius. When Marie had seen the vision she and the DA immediately went to the ministry to save Sirius in the Department of Mysteries but he wasn't there. Instead, there was a prophecy that she listened to. Then the Deatheaters arrived and that's when Marie knew that this was a trap. How could she be so stupid? But then just when she gave up and gave lucius the prophecy, Sirius arrived and punched him in the face, thus smashing the prophecy. The Light showed up and together they fought. That's when Bellatrix saw her opportunity.

Marie turned back to Sirius who gave her a faint smile then fell into the veil. He was dead. This reeled into her mind again and again.

He's dead.

Then she just exploded and screamed in grief, "NOOOOOOOOOOO! Sirius, Noooo!"

Remus grabbed her and tried to calm her down but Marie broke free of his clutches and ran after Bellatrix who sang happily at her cold achievement.

"I killed Sirius Black! I killed Sirius Black! Hahahahahah!"

Then Marie just lost it as she pointed her wand at her and shouted, "Crucio!"

Bellatrix fell to the floor in pain for a second as Marie got up to her, her wand pointed at Bellatrix in rage. Marie shook in anger and she heard a little voice in her head. She killed him, Marie. She deserves it. You know the spell. . . .

Marie could feel Voldemort's presence now as he came up behind her a few feet away.

"Do it!"

His voice was almost commanding but challenging her, seeing what she would do. For some odd reason, Marie didn't want to kill Bellatrix now. She wanted to see Voldemort to see if he was really there now and not in her head like she felt he was all year but he misunderstood her purpose when she turned around to face him. He immediately disarmed her of her wand and Bellatrix giggled maniacally. Marie was terrified. She didn't know what to do so she didn't look him in the eye and kept her gaze down submissively. Voldemort chuckled evilly seeing Marie in such a situation as this and wanted to rile her up again. He wanted to see her anger once more. To see that bright green fire in her eyes.

"So weak", Voldemort said. But before Voldemort could do anything, the floo fire acted up and Dumbledore came out of one of the fireplaces looking as calm as ever yet Marie could see a spark of anger in his twinkling eyes.

"You shouldn't have come here tonight, Tom. The Aurors' are on their way"

Voldemort didn't look bothered, "By which time I shall be gone. . . And you . . . shall be dead".

Hell immediately broke loose as Voldemort and Dumbledore broke out in a fantastic battle. Dangerous sparks flew everywhere and Voldemort every once in a while tried to get at Marie but Dumbledore protected her. Now Dumbledore had Voldemort encased in a water sphere but lost his concentration when Marie came up behind him looking in awe and he had to push her back to protect her.

That's when Voldemort saw his opportunity.

"Avada Kedavra!"

It was so quick. Dumbledore's eyes faded to dull and fell to the ground with a thud. Marie watched in horror as her beloved Headmaster was murdered right in front of her. She stared at his dead body, his eyes unblinking looking at nothing and Marie could hear Voldemort's maniacal laughter in the background. Marie dropped to her knees in defeat. If Dumbledore couldn't defeat him, how could she? Screw the prophecy! It was made my Trelawney!

No tears dropped as she only felt emptiness but then fear filled her when Voldemort walked up to her, his wand resting on her forehead between her eyes. That's when she looked up to meet his cold blood red eyes. His smile turned grim as Marie didn't do anything and he was confused. Won't she even defend herself?

"So weak", he taunted her, "So . . . vulnerable" he used his wand to shift a few hairs from her eyes and revealed her scar. His smile returned, showing his elongated canine teeth. Marie then heard a scuffle a ways away and looked over to see the Light and the DA, her friends all looking in horror at the scene before them. Ron, Hermione and Ginny looked terrified because there was nothing they could do. Voldemort noticed them as well and was just about to say the killing curse before Marie had an idea. She didn't know if it would work or not, but she just had to try. For her friends!

"Avada . . ."

"Wait!" she pleaded with him not looking him straight in the eyes as part of her plan.

Voldemort looked pissed off to be interrupted but complied with a hiss, "What?"

Marie looked to her friends and Remus again before she said, "How about we make a deal?"

Voldemort looked at her for a few seconds as if contemplating whether or not to just kill her and be done with it but then he sighed, "And what kind of a deal could you possibly offer me, child?"

Marie gulped and Voldemort smirked, recognizing her fear, "Ummm. . . .You may rule the wizarding world with no fight from us but you keep me and my friends alive and unharmed unless we rebel and try to attack?" She spoke quickly and fearfully trying to read Voldemort's expression but couldn't see any hope so far.

Voldemort gazed her for a few more second that seemed like hours before finally speaking.

"Get up"

His voice was soft yet commanding and she did as she was told to do without hesitation somewhat pleasing Voldemort. Voldemort looked over at the Light and smirked in triumph at their confused faces. They had no idea what was coming. Lord Voldemort looked Marie in the eye before nodding his head in acceptance.

"I accept your deal, Ms. Potter. But how should we make sure that you won't attack or betray your word, hmmm?"

Marie looked at him confused, "I don't know. How do wizards make binding deals?"

Voldemort smirked at her then looked at the Light, "How about the unbreakable vow?"

"What's the unbreakable vow?"

Voldemort looked at her in a way that clearly said, 'what do they teach you kids in school these days?' but answered her question. "It's simple really. . . .If you break your word. . . . . . .you die."

"Oh. Okay then. Sure."

Voldemort could tell she was hesitant but willing to make the deal nonetheless. He smirked again, "But we'll need a third person to bind us to our agreement. . ."

He then looked over to the Light again and spotted the werewolf, Remus Lupin. Since Bellatrix left, he would have to do.

"You! Werewolf! Come here!"

Lupin looked a bit scared and confused at first but strode up to them. Marie felt a surge of grief for Remus. He had just lost his best friend and it was all her fault. Remus gave her a sad smile but turned to the dark lord, "Yes?"

"We would like to make the unbreakable vow together and we would like you to be our binder. Take out your wand, wolf"

Remus looked insulted to be called a wolf but did as he was told albeit a bit uncertain.

"What are the terms?"

Voldemort answered for Marie, "Marie allows me to rule the wizarding world in turn that I or my Deatheaters shall not harm or kill her or any of the light unless they fight or rebel against my rule"

Remus shot his head at Marie in shock before clearing his throat. "Umm . . . Alright then. Join hands if you would, please."

Voldemort grabbed Marie's right hand before she could do anything and fixed it in a binding position. Marie gasped at the cold contact of his skin but didn't say anything.

Remus then put his wand between their joined hands.

"Marie Lily Potter, do you promise to let Thomas Marvolo Riddle rule and not influence the light to attack him or rebel?"

"I do" Her voice shook in utter fear. A little sliver of light from his wand circled around her wrist joining to Voldemort's.

Remus spoke to Voldemort now, "Do you, Thomas Marvolo Riddle, promise to keep your word and not harm Marie Lily Potter or the Light forces if we do not rebel against your rule?"

"I do" Voldemort's voice was filled with triumph. A little sliver of light wrapped itself around his wrist as well joining to Marie's.

Now the Deatheaters were being brought in by the Aurors' and the Ministry workers were starting to arrive. They all stopped dead in their tracks when they saw what was transpiring. The Dark Lord has returned!

Remus continued, making his voice contort in grief, "You two are now bounded by your words."

Then the light that was wrapped around their hands and wrists' faded and they could feel the deal settled within them. Suddenly Remus dove at Marie and hugged her tightly. He started mumbling and crying and Marie hugged back, tears streaking her face. "I'm sorry Remus . . . It's all my fault. Sirius is dead because of me" She broke off in a sob and Remus just held her tighter.

"No, Marie. It's not your fault. Nothing is your fault. You're okay. It's alright. You did what you could." Marie continued to cry harder, unaware that Voldemort, the Ministry and the Order of the Phoenix were still there watching. Voldemort now turned to the Ministry and Order.

"Me and Marie just made a deal." He explained the deal to them and they looked on in horror. Suddenly Fudge shouted, "She doesn't stand for us! She's just a little troublemaking foolish girl! It doesn't matter if she is the girl-who-lived or not! She does not speak for us! I'll have all your Deatheaters executed if I have to . . ."

He was suddenly cut off by the killing curse. Voldemort glared down at the dead minister in hatred then looked back up to address everyone.

"This . . . is what happens to fools who defy and threaten me. You will all obey my order. Or you will all die. It's simple, really. Now release my Deatheaters, if you would."

The Aurors let them go and they all bowed at Voldemort. Voldemort looked on expectantly to the Order and the Ministry who hesitantly copied the Deatheaters and bowed to Lord Voldemort. Marie could see the anguish and fear and could only hope that she made the right choice in making that deal.

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