A/N: I would like to thank my sole reviewer so far, Lady Chocobo, who gave me some helpful concrit and told me I was moving this Fanfic along too fast. Hence, that is why I decided to revise some of what I've written (the patchy allegiances and mile-a-minute first chapter). Personally, I think it's FAR better than it was originally and has a personal touch to it most of my other Fanfics don't have. I'll be posting the first and second chapter today, as well, and I hope any potential reader takes the time to read them. I now also have a beta, so most of my next chapters should be beta'd.
So, if my Fanfic is magically much better than before, you can thank the awesome Pinefur, who was nice enough to agree to beta the next chapters (just note the allegiances, first, and second chapters have not been edited).
Sadly, as you can tell, I am lacking a Prologue. If you have any ideas on what the Prologue should be about, please tell me via PM or review (and, yes, I accept anonymous reviews).
The Summary of "Muted Light": Graykit is just like any other cat, any other kit in ThunderClan. She is mischevious and playful, loves her littermate, Moonkit, dearly, and her mother is her rock, her guiding light. But, something has been leading her to believe something about her may be special. Dreams with cats she's never met are common and she's beginning to realize some of those cats are real--just in other Clans. The medicine cat, Rocknose, also seems to treat her differently when he finally meets her. She hopes desperately this all means nothing, but something has been building in the Clans for a long time--secrets that need to be uncovered and stories needed to be told.
Wow. That Summary turned out....dramatic. Well, I suppose that was my intent and the Fanfic itself is supposed to grasp that Warriors-esque action/drama....
Anyway, here's the allegiances. If the allegiances in the Warriors books bore you, head on to "chapter two" or, in reality, chapter one.
ALLEGIANCES
----THUNDERCLAN
LEADER
SANDSTAR--light ginger she-cat with amber eyes
DEPUTY
RAINHEART--thick-pelted mottled gray tom
MEDICINE CAT
ROCKNOSE—long-haired darker gray tom with amber eyes
WARRIORS
CLOUDPELT--pretty white she-cat with pale blue eyes
DUSTCLAW--pale brown tabby tom with amber eyes
APPRENTICE, JAYPAW
LIONLEAP--golden brown tabby tom with amber eyes
APPRENTICE, CINDERPAW
SUNCLAW--light ginger tom with a tabby-striped tail
APPRENTICE, HAZELPAW
SNOWFALL--large white she-cat
BRAMBLETHORN--large dark brown tabby tom
ASHSTORM--pale gray tom
MOSSTAIL--gray tom with darker flecks and green eyes
CROWHEART--dark brown tabby tom with one white paw and amber eyes
APPRENTICES
CINDERPAW--long-legged pale gray she-cat with fluffy fur
JAYPAW--sleek light gray tabby tom
HAZELPAW--light brown tabby she-cat
QUEENS
FROSTCLAW--gray-and-white she-cat with pale blue eyes (mother of Moonkit, silvery-gray tabby she-cat, and Graykit, a dark gray she-cat)
RUSSETDAWN--dark ginger she-cat with green eyes (mother of Tawnykit, a gold tabby she-cat with creamy stripes, and Redkit, a reddish tabby tom with amber eyes)
ELDERS
THRUSHFUR--light brown tom
SPOTTEDPELT--once-pretty tortoiseshell she-cat
----SHADOWCLAN
LEADER
THORNSTAR--dark brown tabby tom with blue eyes
DEPUTY
CEDARFANG--large, thick-pelted very dark gray tom
MEDICINE CAT
THRUSHFEATHER--long-haired pale brown tabby she-cat
APPRENTICE, ROWANPAW (small, light ginger tom with darker paws)
WARRIORS
CLOUDSTORM--mottled dark gray tom with blue eyes
TALONSTRIKE--dark brown tabby tom
APPRENTICE, MOUSEPAW (light brown she-cat)
NIGHTFROST--black-and-white she-cat with ice-blue eyes
ADDERFANG--large, pale brown tabby tom
DARKFOOT--dark brown tabby tom with black feet
TAWNYLEG--sandy-gray she-cat
APPRENTICE, IVYPAW (tortoiseshell-and-white she-cat with green eyes)
BRIARSCAR--dark brown she-cat
APPRENTICE, FLAMEPAW (dark ginger tom with amber eyes)
MOONHEART--silvery-gray tabby she-cat
SCORCHCLAW--sleek gray tom
BLACKNOSE--white tom with black spotted fur
APPRENTICE, DAWNPAW (pale ginger she-cat with amber eyes)
SMOKE-EYE--dark gray tom
OWLTAIL--mottled light brown tabby tom with a white chest
QUEENS
GRAYWILLOW--pretty pale gray she-cat (mother of Oakkit, a pale-brown-tabby-and-white tom, and Runningkit, a black tom)
ELDERS
SNAKESTRIKE—pale tabby tom
----WINDCLAN
LEADER
BREEZESTAR--large dark gray tom with green eyes
APPRENTICE, HAREPAW (brown tabby tom)
DEPUTY
SEDGEHEART--pale brown tabby tom with piercing amber eyes
MEDICINE CAT
ASHPELT--small gray she-cat
APPRENTICE, WHITEPAW (long-haired white she-cat)
WARRIORS
WINDFUR--very light gray she-cat with pale green eyes
APPRENTICE, FIREPAW (bright ginger tom)
WEASELCLAW--dark brown tom
APPRENTICE, HEATHERPAW (pale brown tabby she-cat)
SUNHEART--sandy-colored tom
OWLSTRIKE--light-brown-tabby-and-white tom
APPRENTICE, FLOWERPAW (pale ginger she-cat with white paws)
NIGHTSTREAM--dark gray she-cat with light blue eyes
TORNHEART--brown tabby tom with white paws and amber eyes
LEAFSTORM--light brown tabby she-cat with amber eyes
EMBERWATCHER--dark gray tom with blue eyes
QUEENS
SWALLOWFLIGHT--dark gray she-cat (mother of Graykit, a very pale gray she-cat, Stormkit, a small, mottled gray tom, and Thistlekit, a pale brown tabby tom)
ELDERS
ONE-EAR--small, pale ginger-and-white tom
----RIVERCLAN
LEADER
COPPERSTAR--dappled golden she-cat
DEPUTY
HAILSPLASH--broad-shouldered, light gray tom with huge paws
APPRENTICE, RUSHPAW (pale ginger tom with amber eyes)
MEDICINE CAT
MISTYPOOL--thick-pelted pale gray she-cat with bright blue eyes
WARRIORS
HEAVYFOOT--dark brown tabby tom
TROUTLEAP--thickset light brown tabby tom
REEDFOOT--dark ginger tom
APPRENTICE, PETALPAW (dark ginger-and-white she-cat with green eyes)
HAWKWING--brown tabby tom with light amber eyes
STONEHEART--pale gray tom with yellow eyes
RIPPLETAIL--mottled dark gray tom with piercing amber eyes
PEBBLEWHISKER--pale gray she-cat with white paws and blue eyes
APPRENTICE, VOLEPAW (light brown tom)
LOUDSTORM--dark gray tom with a white belly
SWIFTBROOK--small, long-haired gray she-cat
QUEENS
FROSTPOOL--pale gray she-cat with green eyes (mother of Blackkit, a black tom with green eyes, and Brightkit, a white-and-dark-gray she-cat with amber eyes)
ELDERS
OTTERLEAP--long-haired light brown she-cat
WETFOOT--gray tom with fur that stands up at all angles
A/N: No, you don't have to review this allegiances....please just read the next chapter! And, remember--hits are wonderful, but reviews are awesome.
