Nikki here! Just wanted to say a few things-Remie(Supreme Flight)Pretend she's been there forever, Remie and Fang are siblings, Remie and Iggy are together. I know Supreme Flight is so much like Maximum Ride but i loved the name sorry. Set after MR4 everything else is still the same so presentiiiiiiing::::::The disclaimer.
The Disclaimereth Of FanFictioneth:I DONT OWN MAXIMUM RIDE.I only own Remie, any other OCs and the pheonix idea and her powers okay on the the storieth!!
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Max's POV:
We were sleeping in a cave, since the Voice had nothing new to say about where we were going. Remie came up to me and asked "So whats the plan now poobah?" I raised my eyebrow at her. She shrugged. The rest of the Flock was asleep and since Remie's sleep part of her brain was altered she only need four hours of sleep. It was her watch now and I was packing up the Flock's things. She helped by putting Fang's stuff away. They had an uncanny resemblance, though Remie's hair was chocolate brown not black and her eyes were green instead of well...black. "I don't know...we're probably just gunna lay low for now, the Voice hasn't said anything since we left the Lerner School." "Huh." She sighed while I yawned. "Go to sleep Max, you need it." I nodded and fell alseep by Angel. As I was drifitng asleep I saw Remie put a sheild around the opening of the cave. She had many powers, more than Angel! She's part Pheonix(your surprised?-you shouldn't be they exsist, and Remie talks to them!)so her feathers are long and firey looking like a Pheonix's. They catch on fire once and a while when we fly for a long time. But it doesn't bother her. She can put up sheilds and forcefeilds, she also has all the powers of everyone in the Flock. Super-speed, invisibility(better than Fang's),even Gazzy's powers. Though she doesn't use them. She's also a shapeshifter like Angel but with more...flexibility than Angel. She can turn into anything she wants also has healing powers and healed Iggy's eye-sight completely. It's amazing. Finally I drifted asleep.
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I woke to the sound of claws against the cave floor. I opened my eyes and saw a giant firey Phoenix folding it's wings in. I couldn't help it I gasped. It ignored me, and Remie stood slowly and said "Flame, it's nice to see you again." Then Flame said " And to you. Supreme Flight I need you to help with a baby Pheonix." Supreme Flight aka Remie. I know what your thinking Supreme Flight sounds alot like Maximum Ride, but she had that name before we even met. "Oh, of course"-she seemed to finally notice I was awake and looked over, so did Flame-"uh, Max this is Flame Galbraith, Flame this is Maximum Ride." "Maximum," Flame said "It's nice to finally meet you, Remie has told our little ones great stories about you." Remie smiled sheepishly "What can I say, your famous!" I laughed, and so did Flame. "We must be going, the infant doesn't have much time." He looked sad when he said that. "Okay"she walked over to the Flock and said "Hey guys wake up me and Max are going out for a while stay here meet at the Mississippi River if anything goes wrong 'kay?" The Flock woke groggily and Fang said "Why?What for?" His face impassive. "Uh we're gunna go save a baby Phoenix, just stay here." "A Phoenix?" Angel asked then everyone-except me and Remie- gasped. Their mouths were wide open. Even Fangs was open slightly and his eyes wide. Remie laughed and said "Guys this is my friend Flame Galbraith, Flame, the Flock-Iggy the blonde, Fang the dark one, Nudge the one standing, The...Gasman the blonde boy and Angel the blonde girl." They all said 'hey' still surprised that there was a freakin' Phoenix in their midst. "Supreme really we must be heading to the jungles, not far from here, but it was nice to meet you all." "Oh right okay well I gotta go guys. Be back soon." Before I could protest she and Flame launched them selves of the cliff and started to fly away. I said "Fang, your in charge." and went to join them
Remie POV:I flew along side Flame and saw Max join us out of the corner of my eye. I loved visiting my cousins, but not under these circumstances. Flame nodded to me and I said "Max divebomb until you get to the trees and land on them in 3...2...1! We divebombed and made it safley into the trees. "Over here" Flame said with a gesture to a high branch. I landed almost silently on it and took in the poor fledgling. It had a small stick poking out of it's stomach. "Okay" I started, getting to buisness "This might hurt a little just try to keep still" I pulled the twig out quickly and the chick cried a wail of pain. I put my finger over the wound and felt the energy go through me. With a sigh of releif the chick went to sleep. I smiled a little. "Alrighty then my work is done , may I ask, why couldn't you heal her yourself..with tears?" "Alas, we could not pull the obstruction out...Please how can we repay you?" "Oh that won't be necessary it was my pleasure." "No we must, anything- shelter?" I contemplated this and made a decision. "How about some Ju-Ju berries." "Of course their in season anyway!" I smiled that would be a treat for the Flock. Anyway I couldn't risk their lives by living here. "Ember a sack of Ju-Ju berries please- the finest!" A little later a friend of mine-Ember- came with a brown sack. "Here you are Su-I mean Remie" "Thank you Ember, how are you and your flock doing?" "Wonderful"he replied "we also have a new edition" he nodded to the baby. "Aw thats great." I checked my watch and frowned. "Okay it's time to go-bye Ember, Flame." They nodded once and we took off.
Max POV:
Wow. Once I got a good look of the forest I saw hundreds of thousands of those Phoenixes. The last thing I heard was Rem saying her goodbyes. And then we took off. When we got back Iggy slid his arms around Remie's waist and kissed her.I rolled my eyes and Fang coughed. They immediatly broke apart. Fang was protective over his little sister."Hey Remie what's up with those Ju-Ju berry things?" I asked. "OH!" She untied the the sack from her belt and put it on the ground. "Everyone dig in these things are great!" She took one and plopped it into her mouth. "Mmm..." Nudge took one and bit down spraying every on with Ju-Ju- juice. "Oh my gosh these are fantastical you guys have to try it mmm they're sweet and juicy and soooo goood try it everyone right now mfphmfhpmfhpdfmhpf-" Her voice was muffled by Remie's hand. " Yeah try 'em they wont kill you." So with that everyone took a berry and popped it into they're mouths. And they were delicious. Almost as good as my mom's chocolate chip cookies. Mom. I missed her. Once the sack was finished Fang sat beside me and asked "Plan?" I sighed. "Yeah...theres always a plan..." Yup always a plan sometimes. I quickly decided something. "Well let's relax today, we could rent a room at a hotel, go to the beach and just hang out. How's that sound?" Everyone cheered. I looked at Fang and raised my eyebrows. He nodded as if to say 'yeah let 'em relax'. So I smiled and we went off to find a 5 star hotel.
Remie POV:
When we got back to the cave Iggy wrapped is arms around me and kissed me. I was surprised of course but started to kiss back. Then Fang coughed and we jumped and broke up. Then we went of to relax at a five star hotel. Whoopee! We took off in search of one. We came across a tall brick building that said 'Marriot Hotel-5 Stars'. We went into the hotel and the guys eyes almost popped out of his head when he caught sight of Max and me. I sighed, here we go again. I went up to the guy and said "3 rooms please, all suites." I smiled and he smiled back and winked. I held back a snort. He typed it into the computer and gave me the room keys. I handed him out complemetary Max Ride card. We headed off to our rooms. I noticed out of the corner of my eye the guy walk from behind his desk. He walked right up to me, and said "Hey as long as you stay in this hotel, you know where to find me." I grabbed his wrist and twisted his arm 'till he said "YOW!" Then I said "Thanks, but I'm taken." and walked off, Fang looked at me and raised an eyebrow.I just shrugged and rolled my eyes. Once we were all settled in (Fang with Max-of course, Me with Nudge and Angel-I'd sleep on the couch, and Iggy with Gazzy.) we took showers and put on new clothes. "So guys what do you want to do tonight?" I asked Nudge and Angel. They looked at each other and shrugged. "Im kinda tired," Sais Angel "Let's just relax." "I second that." I said. So we crashed on the sofa and watched tons of movies 'till 7. "Okay-bed girls." They yawned and went to sleep immediatly. Then I drifted off.
Fang POV:
Okay this is the night. I'm going to kiss Max but not let her run away. We'd been watching a movie called The Notebook. It was a chick flick. It was actually kind of easy to make fun of, me and Max laughed at alot of the parts. And Max said 'aw' at appropriate times. We finished our fourth bag of pop corn and Max said. "I'm going to bed." "Wait" I replyed. She turned and I kissed her. She stiffened and I felt her pull away-Not this time Maximum. I wrapped my arms around her waist and kissed her harder, this time she kissed back and snaked her arms around my neck. I was so happy- she finnally kissed back. After what seemed like hours we broke apart panting, Max and I still intwined. We were looking in each others eyes when suddenly the door slammed open. We both turned to see Gazzy and Iggy. Iggy with a face that looked like he was holding back laughter and Gazzy...well Gazzy looked like he was going to puke. He screamed-a shrill high pitched girl scream. "My retnas are burning!!"He screamed again still high pitched. Then he ran away. Weird. Iggy still stood there but this time with a grin on his face. "Does this mean I can kiss Remie?" I ran after him and he hurled down the hall into the girls bedroom slamming the door and locking it. Ugh stupid Iggy.
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Review. Constructive Critisism is welcom so are idea's (dont worry ill give you credit!) I don't care how many reviews I get Im still gonna post the next chappie ASAP.(but it would be nice to have atleast 5) Okay Adios Amigos
Fang:PLEASE HELP SHE HOLDING ME MFMHPFMHMFHPFMHHPFMH-
Me:Don't listen to him he'll come around.
