Sup, all? It's RagnarokSamurai, with a story about my OC at Axira's Organization: Navix! This is really more meant for the members of the forum, but reviews from other who are interested are appreciated! Thanks!

Loss of Heart

Ivan had just left his friend Gabriel's house in Coral Town. It was about 8 in the evening, and he had little to worry about even at such an hour in his town. There was no crime to speak of, and all the neighbors were nice, upstanding people. As he walked, he wondered what had happened to Rebecca, the girl who had been writing to him these past months. It had been a bit of a while since he had received her last letter.

That was when they struck. Strange shadows with glowing yellow eyes jumped on top of him and clawed at him, yet he could not scream for anything. However, though he realized he was being cut, at the same time, their strikes also seemed to phase through him, going for something… His Heart.

Is this really how I'm going? Then again… Maybe this is why some people have been disappearing lately… Didn't think I'd be one of them.

Those were his last thoughts, and his world went black.

Suddenly, however, he opened his eyes again. But he was not in Coral Town. He was in a dark place.

Am I dead?

He put his hand to his chest, and surely enough, there was no beat. However, he looked at the end of this "tunnel" and saw that there was a way out, and it did not look like Heaven, Hell, or otherwise. It looked like a town, but not Coral Town. He walked through, and ended up falling into concrete.

"Ow…"

He looked up and saw people that were very much alive. So he wondered: Why wasn't his Heart beating? He'd look into that later. He thought about exploring the rest of the town when a portal opened in front of him.

What's this? He decided to walk through it, and found himself in front of a mansion.

Where am I, anyway? This was NOT Coral Town he knew for sure. Suddenly, he felt someone tap his shoulder and he turned around.

"You do not have a Heartbeat, correct?" The figure was in a black cloak, with the hood so low it covered his face.

"No, I don't… What do you know about it?" Ivan was quite suspicious of this man.

"You're a Nobody. You don't HAVE a Heart", the figure said to him.

"Don't have a Heart? So how am I alive?" The story seemed bogus, but it truly was all he had to go on.

"That's one mystery of this universe. How do we live, or exist, without a Heart? What is your name?", the figure asked.

"It's Ivan"

"That won't do. Your new name… Shall be Navix"

"Why do I need a new name?", he questioned.

"That 'X' stands for the fact that you have no Heart. If you join our Organization, you may reclaim it"

"And WHY exactly should I listen to a guy whose name and face I don't even know?"

"I am Xemnas. Leader of Organization XIII. We are all Nobodies like yourself. Shall you join us?" He asked, but it sounded somewhat like an order. He then removed his hood, revealing a tan face, yellow eyes, and long, silver hair.

"Can I really get my Heart back if I join you?", he asked again.

"Yes"

So Navix, as he was now known, stepped through a portal the man before him created.

To Be Continued…

So, people at the forum: What do you think?